GWL CHAT WEEK 7: - Page 5

Universe · 05-07-2020, 10:08 AM

Nvm lol

Artifice · 05-07-2020, 10:10 AM

@Universe, you are correct sir. This is what happens when I answer before having my coffee.

Edit: I guess coffee is overrated.

Universe · 05-07-2020, 10:12 AM

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Originally Posted by Artifice

@Universe, you are correct sir. This is what happens when I answer before having my coffee.

I edited the correction out regardless. Dont want to start any issues this week lol... long story

Inno · 05-07-2020, 10:43 AM

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Originally Posted by Clutbuck

Can someone confirm when verses are due UK time?

I haven’t known the board use EST time before this week.

You’ve never posted a verse late or close to the deadline stop trying to stir shit up cracka

Clutbuck · 05-07-2020, 11:43 AM

lmao I just wanted to avoid anymore controversy and ensure I was still good on my shit

Clutbuck · 05-07-2020, 11:43 AM

I have 8 lines to go @Universe

Universe · 05-07-2020, 11:48 AM

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Originally Posted by Clutbuck

I have 8 lines to go @Universe

I finished up yesterday. I'll follow your lead this time around. Let me know.

dead man · 05-07-2020, 11:55 AM

how many lines you guys going this week? 150?

Johnny 6 feet · 05-07-2020, 11:59 AM

Glad there's an upper limit on those things. Remember one time seeing a topical where a guy went literally 200 lines to try and beat his opponent who was ranked higher than him (still lost, lol). Longest battle verse I've ever seen.

Can you picture 12 or 20 writers putting a novel to paper every week? Not enough hours in the day. Not enough brain cells to take it all in.

Scar · 05-07-2020, 12:20 PM

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Originally Posted by Johnny 6 feet

Glad there's an upper limit on those things. Remember one time seeing a topical where a guy went literally 200 lines to try and beat his opponent who was ranked higher than him (still lost, lol). Longest battle verse I've ever seen.

Can you picture 12 or 20 writers putting a novel to paper every week? Not enough hours in the day. Not enough brain cells to take it all in.

seriously bro! i think uni and i shot ourselves in the foot writing such long verses, last week. It can be taxing for readers. i know that for sure lulz

Johnny 6 feet · 05-07-2020, 12:25 PM

Lol, "Dude, you missed the character development of the cousin I set up in chapter 7 and her motivation for stealing the emerald necklace in chapter 12. It's intragyral for the group dynamic for the expedition to the Island that starts in chapter 23. You bloody philistines!"

Clutbuck · 05-07-2020, 12:34 PM

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Originally Posted by Universe

I finished up yesterday. I'll follow your lead this time around. Let me know.

Are you sure you’re finished?

You might want to revise it.

Universe · 05-07-2020, 12:39 PM

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Originally Posted by dead man

how many lines you guys going this week? 150?

lol no 30 exactly... but with a twist. Got a few tricks up my sleeve for this one cuz I dont give a fuck anymore lol

It's an amazing feeling.

Universe · 05-07-2020, 12:42 PM

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Originally Posted by Clutbuck

Are you sure you’re finished?

You might want to revise it.

Haha. You will get a first draft that I did in a few hours. That's the extent of my care for this battle.

I hope that you're trying really hard though...

Adverse · 05-07-2020, 12:53 PM

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Originally Posted by Johnny 6 feet

Lol, "Dude, you missed the character development of the cousin I set up in chapter 7 and her motivation for stealing the emerald necklace in chapter 12. It's intragyral for the group dynamic for the expedition to the Island that starts in chapter 23. You bloody philistines!"

Lmao word there's got to be limits because undoubtedly it would happen. I've got to admit though last week i wrote 50 and i really needed more room to work with, maybe like 60 but i suppose it depends what kind of story you tell mine was more focused around setting a stage and dialogue etc. Still don't think I could focus long enough to write 200 lines about the same thing

Universe · 05-07-2020, 12:56 PM

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Originally Posted by Adverse

Lmao word there's got to be limits because undoubtedly it would happen. I've got to admit though last week i wrote 50 and i really needed more room to work with, maybe like 60 but i suppose it depends what kind of story you tell mine was more focused around setting a stage and dialogue etc. Still don't think I could focus long enough to write 200 lines about the same thing

I could lol. But there's no winning bro. I did 50 last week and I STILL got "we need more detail" comments. Then I give them every detail in my 80 line one and people said it's too long.

Can't please everybody...

Scar · 05-07-2020, 01:01 PM

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Originally Posted by Johnny 6 feet

Lol, "Dude, you missed the character development of the cousin I set up in chapter 7 and her motivation for stealing the emerald necklace in chapter 12. It's intragyral for the group dynamic for the expedition to the Island that starts in chapter 23. You bloody philistines!"

lmao

Inno · 05-07-2020, 01:01 PM

Y’all need to catch this Rogan musk podcast I think I’m getting smarter just listening

And word UNI last weeks drop left me with so many questions!

Adverse · 05-07-2020, 01:14 PM

Scar's interview was added to the mag last night btw don't know if I put that out there worth a reread!

Scar · 05-07-2020, 01:14 PM

lets have a group discussion. in terms of story, its it better to end on an ambiguous note or a concrete closure? i only ask because alot of my stuff are kind of left to interpretations, and i'm never sure on whether that's the best course of action you know? maybe a concrete, fleshed out ending is better.

05-07-2020, 10:08 AM	#81
Universe Everything's Connected Join Date: Nov 2017 Location: Niagara Falls, Canada Posts: 999 Battle Record: 19-8 Champed - Guerrilla Writing League(2x) - GWL Picture challenge(2x) - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 10178702	Nvm lol __________________ ..Passed the Present and Future..

05-07-2020, 11:55 AM	#88
dead man living Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 3,465 Battle Record: 33-18 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - AOWL Season 1 - Art of Writing League - AOWL Season 4 - Write Week V - GWL Season 1 Rep Power: 77606676	how many lines you guys going this week? 150? __________________ Zack Wicks for president

05-07-2020, 10:10 AM	#82
Artifice Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2016 Posts: 269 Battle Record: 17-9 Champed - Art Of Writing League - GWL Picture Challenge Rep Power: 3944945	@Universe, you are correct sir. This is what happens when I answer before having my coffee. Edit: I guess coffee is overrated.

05-07-2020, 11:43 AM	#85
Clutbuck Battle Rap's Married Man Join Date: May 2015 Location: Crumpetville, England Posts: 389 Battle Record: 2-0 Champed - Gorilla Writing league Rep Power: 3513498	lmao I just wanted to avoid anymore controversy and ensure I was still good on my shit

05-07-2020, 11:59 AM	#89
Johnny 6 feet Storyteller Join Date: May 2020 Posts: 446 Battle Record: 8-4 Champed - Guerrilla Writing League Rep Power: 5558444	Glad there's an upper limit on those things. Remember one time seeing a topical where a guy went literally 200 lines to try and beat his opponent who was ranked higher than him (still lost, lol). Longest battle verse I've ever seen. Can you picture 12 or 20 writers putting a novel to paper every week? Not enough hours in the day. Not enough brain cells to take it all in.

05-07-2020, 12:25 PM	#91
Johnny 6 feet Storyteller Join Date: May 2020 Posts: 446 Battle Record: 8-4 Champed - Guerrilla Writing League Rep Power: 5558444	Lol, "Dude, you missed the character development of the cousin I set up in chapter 7 and her motivation for stealing the emerald necklace in chapter 12. It's intragyral for the group dynamic for the expedition to the Island that starts in chapter 23. You bloody philistines!"

05-07-2020, 01:01 PM	#98
Inno Ad mini tator Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 10,005 Battle Record: 26-54 Champed - Lime Green Poetry Association - Black August - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 85899400	Y’all need to catch this Rogan musk podcast I think I’m getting smarter just listening And word UNI last weeks drop left me with so many questions!

05-07-2020, 01:14 PM	#99
Adverse low tide in serotonin bay Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 2,739 Battle Record: 37-28 Champed - GWL Picture Challenge - Guerrilla Writing League - Black August II Rep Power: 15446142	Scar's interview was added to the mag last night btw don't know if I put that out there worth a reread!

05-07-2020, 01:14 PM	#100
Scar Senior Member Join Date: May 2019 Posts: 530 Battle Record: 7-5 Champed - Guerrilla Writing League Rep Power: 5689706	lets have a group discussion. in terms of story, its it better to end on an ambiguous note or a concrete closure? i only ask because alot of my stuff are kind of left to interpretations, and i'm never sure on whether that's the best course of action you know? maybe a concrete, fleshed out ending is better.