02-02-2020, 07:13 PM | #1 |
DMS—Diddled My Stick
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Growing Pains
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Neglected autist manners. Couldn’t get to ‘proper rapper’. Calling, “Abha, father!”, but I never got an answer. Wretched, pauper dancer without an audience. Convinced of what the problem is. And so he’s chosen solitude instead any solve or fix. But still he needs a lot of hits, broken as junk. Posting habits of a lonesome addict shown in his stunts. Pretends that his intent is just a notion of fun. Indeed, it’s just a breed of dope, he tokes on the blunt. He warmed up to a girl, but still there’s background discomfort. “You’ll just be weak and vulnerable attached to another.” Perhaps the juggling act he had with his mother And the lack of a father at his pad made the matching up stutter. |
02-03-2020, 12:49 AM | #2 |
low tide in serotonin bay
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I like this, it isn't your best or most thought provoking piece by a long shot but it was still relatable and not bad in my eyes. Sometimes a simple piece is effective for a topic like this, good job dude
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02-16-2020, 07:58 PM | #3 |
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Yeah word...I've def seen better from you but this was cool man.
He warmed up to a girl, but still there’s background discomfort. “You’ll just be weak and vulnerable attached to another.” Perhaps the juggling act he had with his mother And the lack of a father at his pad made the matching up stutter. ^^Really liked that... Stay doin' you bro. |
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