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Old 10-10-2017, 02:00 PM   #1
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Old 10-10-2017, 02:13 PM   #2
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Enjoyed your drums, snares and bass but the sample sucked, IMO. Didn't like the looped sample at all.
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the hook feels cluttered...an something about the voice...like the pitch is off? idk

I love samples like that tho....was hype when the beat dropped at 37 sec too....feels like something Bronson would've laced in his early days

cool shit...needs some work but I fuck w it
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Enjoyed your drums, snares and bass but the sample sucked, IMO. Didn't like the looped sample at all.
thanks my dude, would it be better if i switch the sample up a bit more often or just change the sample entirely?
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the hook feels cluttered...an something about the voice...like the pitch is off? idk

I love samples like that tho....was hype when the beat dropped at 37 sec too....feels like something Bronson would've laced in his early days

cool shit...needs some work but I fuck w it
lmaoo if i can find an action bronson acapella that might be a cool idea to mix it with together

any changes i could add in your opinion? switch the sample more often? change it? renew the hook? let me know


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thanks my dude, would it be better if i switch the sample up a bit more often or just change the sample entirely?
Switching it up may work or just going with another vocal sample. Ir trying looping the sample different if possible? Not sure where you get your samples from but vocalized ones are strange sometimes when trying to find the perfect loop to execute.

Like I said, the drums were straight, IMO.
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Switching it up may work or just going with another vocal sample. Ir trying looping the sample different if possible? Not sure where you get your samples from but vocalized ones are strange sometimes when trying to find the perfect loop to execute.

Like I said, the drums were straight, IMO.
sounds good, i'll actually try and make another version cuz i like the sample a lot lool

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Diggin it. Thought it was dope. A little more balancing out and i would hop on this shit
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Diggin it. Thought it was dope. A little more balancing out and i would hop on this shit
thank you bro, i appreciate it. i'll figure something out with it asap and the beat is yours if you want
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real soulful....think the drop of the sample when the verse came in was a lil' rough sounding an could be smoothed out... but from that point it's nice...good mix of the horns...drums soundin' dope.... wish they switched up here an there tho'

Overall this is pretty tight
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this shits nice

push the sample to the back a lil more, its too prominent, would improve the shit 10 fold i reckon, def dont get rid of it though

same with the shit at 50 sec mark, shit sounded too sharp in this bitch, & this beat mellow as a muthafucka so yeah

i like it though
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