07-14-2017, 08:27 AM | #1 |
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Like my mother does
People always say I got the goodness like my mother does
She taught me how stay strong when things get rough I've got her heart No matter what I go through She's by my side I always wanted to be just like her I show a lot of love like my mother does When I'm in pain I bow and pray like my mother does I see everyone the same like my mother does I'm grateful for everything she done for me Because of her I made this far She's A Queen She's my World and everything She's my all in all. |
08-01-2017, 01:19 AM | #2 |
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I've got her heart
that escalated quickly... thought this was a step up from ya previous joint Queens dont rap about ass... they give orders. like a waitress but they get more than the tip. either way this was bouncing pretty smoothly. kind of slipped up here & there but you rode this nicely. keep it up.
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08-14-2017, 11:19 AM | #3 |
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thanks love!
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08-14-2017, 07:32 PM | #4 |
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But they get more than the tip>
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09-10-2017, 07:49 AM | #5 |
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Lol yeah that was better good work for u silver i liked the read of a loving mother.... interesting how she took all of this childs shit and just took it until the end when tje kids still givig her everythig and her mothers still there for it thats crazy good story silver
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09-15-2017, 07:17 PM | #6 |
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the forthefeedback loves
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