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Old 07-14-2017, 08:27 AM   #1
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People always say I got the goodness like my mother does
She taught me how stay strong when things get rough
I've got her heart
No matter what I go through
She's by my side
I always wanted to be just like her
I show a lot of love like my mother does
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Old 08-01-2017, 01:19 AM   #2
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that escalated quickly...









thought this was a step up from ya previous joint
Queens dont rap about ass... they give orders.
like a waitress but they get more than the tip.
either way this was bouncing pretty smoothly.
kind of slipped up here & there but you rode this nicely.
keep it up.
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Old 08-14-2017, 11:19 AM   #3
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Old 08-14-2017, 07:32 PM   #4
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Lol yeah that was better good work for u silver i liked the read of a loving mother.... interesting how she took all of this childs shit and just took it until the end when tje kids still givig her everythig and her mothers still there for it thats crazy good story silver
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Old 09-15-2017, 07:17 PM   #6
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