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Old 10-08-2016, 04:41 PM   #1
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Verse 1

Run him over when I'm backing up the whip with intentions of wrecking this coward
When His family find his body under the trunk, it's not fred flintstone taking a shower.
I'll place the tool right up his mouthpiece to the point that he can't handle it
Rest my case & put this scrub in a bag ...that's a toothbrush travel kit.
I'm a street slugger & I'll prove it when I grab a bat to crack his head in order
the bat'll keep goin' to his head, over & over more than war veterans with PTS Disorder
If he tries to cross me, he'll get The Works so better hope or pray I'm leaving
it's too late to save himself, ...he's that layperson that's always tardy to the Opus Dei Meetings
Holding him & his wifey hostage will cause craze & the media following me
won't stop till the paris tied up & i'm stealing the spotlight like the kim k robbery



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Just call it quits or duck this, either way u’ll lose kid,
cuz whether it’d be 10 mins or a whole data plan, it’s never a full gig.
Shit’s a no-go, pole ready for it to jump, the tool a pogo
this a new Ruge & it’s cocked, riding ‘round to put U in a box - Uber logo.
Keyboard Killa, shooting shit online ain’t nothing to brag fag
while I’ll always apply the Pound ‘fore I type a word, that’s a hashtag.
Gun bar? Gun ownership’s not some’n this fraud can claim
get to talking BANG, stick w/ me every step of the way, it’s a walking cane.
Out yo gotdamn mind to give these sick thots homes
Captain Save’Em took more bitches off the track than a Kid’s Bop song.
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Old 10-08-2016, 04:50 PM   #2
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Old 10-08-2016, 10:24 PM   #3
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Dope battle. I'll be back.
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Old 10-09-2016, 08:20 AM   #4
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Dope shit but that hashtag and cane lines were nasty
I got verse 2
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Old 10-09-2016, 11:21 AM   #5
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Verse 1

That toothbrush shit was nasty tbh n that kim k joint was decent but seen so many it kinda had me on edge mentioning it.

Verse 2

Uber logo was fire n that walking can was correct I was fuckin with both bangers heavy.


This was actually a nice battle here but Im givin the edge to verse 2 personal preference.
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Old 10-09-2016, 11:33 PM   #6
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I liked the opener in verse one. Other than that the bars were wordy to me. PtSd coulda been dope but was way too wordy on the actual punch.

Second had a couple bangers. Walking cane n uber logo were cool.

Second verse had less misses imo n was worded much cleaner.


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Old 10-10-2016, 09:11 AM   #7
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1 - Fred flinstone cool concept could've used better tie in, rest case scrub in bag was ok, battle was nice, didn't like Opus Dei, Paris Kim K concept gets an ok only Bc it's current event.


2 - gig is aight, uber logo cool, stick w me every step nice, pound hastage nice, kids bop song I don't get the reference but I get the concept




Nice battle here. Pleasantly surprised. After reading verse 1 I thought no way this gets beat but verse 2 was a bit more consistent & worded well.


Verse 2
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Old 10-10-2016, 12:44 PM   #8
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Old 10-10-2016, 07:41 PM   #9
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I'll place the tool right up his mouthpiece to the point that he can't handle it
Rest my case & put this scrub in a bag ...that's a toothbrush travel kit.
I'm a street slugger & I'll prove it when I grab a bat to crack his head in order
the bat'll keep goin' to his head, over & over more than war veterans with PTS Disorder

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Shit’s a no-go, pole ready for it to jump, the tool a pogo
this a new Ruge & it’s cocked, riding ‘round to put U in a box - Uber logo.
Keyboard Killa, shooting shit online ain’t nothing to brag fag
while I’ll always apply the Pound ‘fore I type a word, that’s a hashtag.
Gun bar? Gun ownership’s not some’n this fraud can claim
get to talking BANG, stick w/ me every step of the way, it’s a walking cane.


V/Verse 2, this was a good battle both had some good shit,
i think verse 2 had one more banger, Props to both.
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Old 10-10-2016, 08:28 PM   #10
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Verse 1


I'll place the tool right up his mouthpiece to the point that he can't handle it
Rest my case & put this scrub in a bag ...that's a toothbrush travel kit.

Verse 2

Keyboard Killa, shooting shit online ain’t nothing to brag fag
while I’ll always apply the Pound ‘fore I type a word, that’s a hashtag.
Gun bar? Gun ownership’s not some’n this fraud can claim
get to talking BANG, stick w/ me every step of the way, it’s a walking cane.


nice battle right here, both had some fresh concepts. only thing that really separated them was I felt verse 1 was a touch too wordy at times.
Verse 2 came off real crisp which def made punches hit harder and walking stick was illy.

good battle gents

v/ Verse 2
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Old 10-10-2016, 11:21 PM   #11
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i liked bat'll keep going to his head
that was dope
verse two had a lot more going on tho
hashtag and cane lines were dope

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Old 10-11-2016, 01:35 AM   #12
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the first four lines from the first verse were slick
I thought everything else was decent, didnt like the closer
it felt like a stretch for me even though it just happened.

the second verse was pretty slick, I fuck with the Uber line
hash tag line could have been utilized better imo.
didnt really enjoy that closer either..the cane line was smooth.

the 2nd verse had a smoother flow for me...
the first verse could have taken this but I feel the 2nd delivered some memorable lines
although I fucks with that flintstone line...good play on that
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Old 10-14-2016, 02:52 PM   #13
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Run him over when I'm backing up the whip with intentions of wrecking this coward
When His family find his body under the trunk, it's not fred flintstone taking a shower.
I'll place the tool right up his mouthpiece to the point that he can't handle it
Rest my case & put this scrub in a bag ...that's a toothbrush travel kit.
I'm a street slugger & I'll prove it when I grab a bat to crack his head in order
the bat'll keep goin' to his head, over & over more than war veterans with PTS Disorder

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Shit’s a no-go, pole ready for it to jump, the tool a pogo
this a new Ruge & it’s cocked, riding ‘round to put U in a box - Uber logo.
Keyboard Killa, shooting shit online ain’t nothing to brag fag
while I’ll always apply the Pound ‘fore I type a word, that’s a hashtag.
Gun bar? Gun ownership’s not some’n this fraud can claim
get to talking BANG, stick w/ me every step of the way, it’s a walking cane.


could go either way
both had fire quotables tbh
gotta go with the one who had a better execution here
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I won, why was this never closed?
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lmao im late seeing this shit and dont suppose it matters now but didnt you have a line like that Flintstone shit @Hush?
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Both had spectacular bars and came hard at each other
I LIKE verse two more
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