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Old 11-03-2016, 05:53 PM   #1
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Old 11-03-2016, 09:48 PM   #2
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Old 11-04-2016, 01:33 AM   #3
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It'll be more than Rican's pitfall if he keeps insisting to brawl,
Fist to the jaw n' he's Russian quicker than Putin granting citizenship to Steven Seagal
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Old 11-04-2016, 07:15 AM   #4
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Old 11-10-2016, 07:16 AM   #5
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Old 11-10-2016, 08:44 AM   #6
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Sletch....pretty strateched last Line....set up was nice.... Russian/Rushin' was ehh' shoulda read "If" he's Russian maybe..didn't hit right tho

Rican- idea was cool...don't think it was worded right tho'///set up was also ehhhh...
lil' more creative attempt on the wordplay tho' and rhyme wasn't as stretched

both didn't bring much this week...but

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Old 11-12-2016, 02:41 PM   #7
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V. Slech.

Two decent concepts. Both stretched, Rican had wording issues as well. Slex gets my vote cause his bar read a bit smoother
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Old 11-12-2016, 03:14 PM   #8
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i dunno man, both were weak but Russian flips are played to death and slech's wasn't worded well anyways, Rican's line was just decent and he takes the W here for me
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Old 11-13-2016, 04:48 AM   #9
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both concepts were interesting for what they were...
whenever I see a Russian line thrown out there it reminds me of Nelly...
R!can came with a decent concept but I felt like it was rushed.
the set up felt odd but I feel he brought an almost original idea...
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Old 11-14-2016, 01:46 AM   #10
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SOVEREIGN'S VOTE ON BATTLE: Slechtn vs. R!canTheoryz

Slechtn: I liked the relevance of this. The final concept was original, but the Russian/rushin' wordplay wasn't. Your multis were somewhat problematic; you set up a 4-syllable scheme with "in-sisting to brawl" and "Fist to the jaw," but then broke it with the first two syllables of Steven Seagal, unless you have some accent that I'm not familiar with; do you pronounce the long "ee" sound as the short "i?"

I thought that the second line was long-winded, though I'm not really sure how you could have shortened it. Overall: good punch, mediocre execution. Final Score: 12/20

R!canTheoryz: Well... the punch was alright, nothing great. Even though you had several multi sets, the fact that the first three were close to each other, followed by a large gap between the third and fourth one, made the flow rather awkward. It wouldn't have flown in a live battle, that's for sure. I really wasn't impressed with this. Final Score: 10/20

Final Thoughts: While neither punch was mind-blowing, one was more creative, and that earned its writer the win.

Slechtn gets my vote over R!canTheoryz (12 - 10)
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Old 11-14-2016, 02:22 AM   #11
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both had decent current events
voting for the better set up
with that said, slecht here
rican was ok but execution was sloppy
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Ricans setup n finisher were irrelevant went into a gun bar then finisher about slechtn mom didnt correlate well at all. @Slechtn russian wordplay old af and really dont get ur concept i dont comprehend the Steven Seagal and Putin line is it true? It was executed better but i do need u to pm me for explanation of the reference.

Im voting slechtn for the fact he had better execution and his setup and finisher were relevant.
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Old 11-18-2016, 05:52 PM   #15
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Russian concept was boring but decent enough flip.
I felt like Rican had the better concept, but could've done a lot more with it. Missed opportunity here kid
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