02-28-2024, 01:17 PM | #1 |
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match wits
I’m the spark that you needed. The light through the dark of an evening The warm calm that proceeded the storm. The guardian beacon mark of a genius. Primitive man took me into his hands and I delivered advancements beyond anything he imagined. I turn cinder to ash as a wholly destructive force, my growing compulsion scorches earth until the moment there’s nothing more below me but soot and torched remains. I dance til I’m out of breath. The flames of passion aroused in bed. The lit match to your powder keg. I’m the candle you count your blessings on, and always on smoke The passing of the torch you’ve been holding. The light your favourite authors had wrote to. I’m a force to behold, illuminating all in my path, A torch through the blackness. The pyromaniacs source of their madness. I’m much more than a matchstick. I embody chaos theory. The safety’s clearly off and you’ll get burned just playing near me.
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04-16-2024, 05:53 AM | #2 |
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I try not to publicly comment on Lars' work but this is crazy! reads so smoothly, word association throughout was on point and layered!
I embody chaos theory (favourite phrase in this) / you'll get burned just playing near me brought the piece together. it opens up the fact the matchstick could perceived as something more to the reader. What was this for? crazy ender Uppin |
04-16-2024, 10:45 AM | #3 |
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I’d been going on this random image generator:
https://randomwordgenerator.com/picture.php then just keying something on the journey into work to the pic
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04-17-2024, 01:13 AM | #5 |
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nah he’s done video mags with me before talking about things here
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I thought this was pretty decent. GOOD FOR A FREESTYLE BRAG PIECE. GOODWORK/BARONMYND..
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