[Round 2] 2. Advanced Placement vs 8. cum boyz — Advanced Placement advances

[Answer]

6 lines per PERSON. That's 12 lines per TEAM no more & no less
If both teams agree to it, you can do more than 12 lines. 12 is the absolute minimum.
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Check in by 1/19/2022 at 11:59 p.m. EST
You won't be disqualified if you don't check in, but please just do it. It's a common courtesy
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Verses due Friday, 1/21/2022 at 11:59 p.m. EST (yes, Eastern)
It's a lot of time and not a lot of lines, don't ask for extensions
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All the usual rules apply (No biting, recycling, pm'ing for votes, etc.)

If you complete your verse early, feel free to post it or send it to me via PM. I will only post verses once both teams have submitted.

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@Aero @Dominate @bare ryu

[Answer]

bare ryu/Answer verse against dom/aero

dom's an aussie teacher, aero's an impotent faggot

Shoutout Saint, cuz if Resin showed…we STILL woulda made to round two
Voters writing we made waste of D n' A - then say the same about you
& austin ur bitch is a freak, in one night she lost composure
said she dont need aer to get off so how come u never thought to choke her
then i invited dom's mom to a music festival, she loved the confidence
bitch worried bout covid at coachella but still spread for a younger audience
im wrapping product in duct tape to protect the 'caine bricks
looking at it u'd never know the inside was white - something aero resonates with
im in the lambo giving his whore fingers while clicking the sports features
way that spyder snatched his bird u’d think dom’s dealing with orb weavers
saw u on ratemyprofessor, crack ur skull in front of ur whole class bitch
beat the shit out them kids too then give you 5 stars like joe jackson
catch u driving, masked & strapped with Uzis to make a bitch of em quick
we ready for Dom & A tricks, in all black w/ rounds of subs cavin into ur whip
list all Austin's top punches & he's got nothin to picture
only aer quotes leadin to fire is me w/ both fingers touchin the triggers
I go to therapy weekly, but my struggles gave me an outlet & talent
Aero's girl sees a shrink regularly, too.. he still cant get hard without the cialis
cops paid off, so when aero turn suicidal after today's conflict
my two guards downtown ready to bury a jumper like klay thompson

[Dominate]

Aer & Dom bout to ride on this bitch. Rifles & clips
When we pull up to squeeze the metal together trust these guys getting ZIPPED
Murder these insects for nothin if I feel like bucking the can
Treat em like mosquitos - if I feel the itch & clap at em it’s gonna be blood on my hands
Laser aim for precision, then I’ll empty the clip & stall ya world
Hit the red dot on Answer & let it ring out - top responses when he calls a girl
Put a contract out on Bare. Have him jumpy & clammed up w/ sweat
Street Fighter: got Ryu’s hair standing on end over a band on his head
Rugers flexed. If we runnin outta ammo we clubbing this dude to death
After we hit this Bare mark it’s gonna be stocks crashing through his head
Grip the 12 & it’s nickel. Or the sub come out & start shelving some cripples
We got a problem kid? You’ll hear a BRAT with the Tommy … Angelica Pickles
You’re timid & scared. Running’s useless – give in to despair
Doesn’t matter how far ya roam Ans, the sniper’s equipped for long distance affairs
You look ridiculous fam. Those ears are far beyond laugh worthy
People been doubling up when facing you wayyyy before any tag tourney
Change your style you fucking mutant. You’re never brutal w/ bars
Even your wife says to fuck w/ a switch up - she’ll only have sex w/ you in the dark
You watch Disney for punches, c’mon bro that's old & fake
Write about what your kids really watch: a failed comic who can't control his weight

[UserName]

Ryu/Answer:

Shoutout Saint, cuz if Resin showed…we STILL woulda made to round two
Voters writing we made waste of D n' A - then say the same about you
then i invited dom's mom to a music festival, she loved the confidence
bitch worried bout covid at coachella but still spread for a younger audience
im wrapping product in duct tape to protect the 'caine bricks
looking at it u'd never know the inside was white - something aero resonates with
list all Austin's top punches & he's got nothin to picture
only aer quotes leadin to fire is me w/ both fingers touchin the triggers

Cool verse, I haven't read a ton from either of you so it's honestly a little tough for me to identify who wrote what, but overall a solid output. Low points for me were the first Aer nameplay, Spyder, and your last 4. Still, solid verse and an enjoyable read. Favorite line is a toss up between the coachella line for its smooth wording and the white on the inside line for its humor.

Aero/Dom:

Murder these insects for nothin if I feel like bucking the can
Treat em like mosquitos - if I feel the itch & clap at em it’s gonna be blood on my hands
Laser aim for precision, then I’ll empty the clip & stall ya world
Hit the red dot on Answer & let it ring out - top responses when he calls a girl
Put a contract out on Bare. Have him jumpy & clammed up w/ sweat
Street Fighter: got Ryu’s hair standing on end over a band on his head
Grip the 12 & it’s nickel. Or the sub come out & start shelving some cripples
We got a problem kid? You’ll hear a BRAT with the Tommy … Angelica Pickles

Also a cool verse, but felt like it got weaker as the verse went on. zipped opener was a nah for me, mosquito was worded soooo smoooooooth so i liked it a lot. red dot on Answer was lol. Band on his head was super clever, might be my favorite. Same with Angelica Pickles, and even if it's a little cheesy, it made me smile. Then the last 6 were all variations of 'meh' for me. Closer was almost a hit, just the way its worded it lost a bit of its sting to me.

Two real solid verses, both teams definitely showed up. I'm leaning towards Aer/Dom right now because of how much I enjoyed the creativity of the band on his head concept along with the general wording of the material. It's tough though, because both have the same amount of quotable lines, IMO, even though Aer/Dom had about 6 whiffs in a row at the end to Ans/Ryu's 4... this will have to just boil down to personal preference.


V - Aero/Dom

[evaD]

Shoutout Saint, cuz if Resin showed…we STILL woulda made to round two
Voters writing we made waste of D n' A - then say the same about you
Nice, feel like it could’ve been worded better, first bar made me think you were still talking about res/saint
& austin ur bitch is a freak, in one night she lost composure
said she dont need aer to get off so how come u never thought to choke her
Cool
then i invited dom's mom to a music festival, she loved the confidence
bitch worried bout covid at coachella but still spread for a younger audience
Spread been done a lot recently but I like it still
im wrapping product in duct tape to protect the 'caine bricks
looking at it u'd never know the inside was white - something aero resonates with
Lmao this is good
im in the lambo giving his whore fingers while clicking the sports features
way that spyder snatched his bird u’d think dom’s dealing with orb weavers
Nice lol concept random as hell but it ties in
saw u on ratemyprofessor, crack ur skull in front of ur whole class bitch
beat the shit out them kids too then give you 5 stars like joe jackson
Ok I get it but the ratemyprofessor thing a bit of a reach for me
catch u driving, masked & strapped with Uzis to make a bitch of em quick
we ready for Dom & A tricks, in all black w/ rounds of subs cavin into ur whip
Like this
list all Austin's top punches & he's got nothin to picture
only aer quotes leadin to fire is me w/ both fingers touchin the triggers
Nice
I go to therapy weekly, but my struggles gave me an outlet & talent
Aero's girl sees a shrink regularly, too.. he still cant get hard without the cialis
Its ok, rhyme is off
cops paid off, so when aero turn suicidal after today's conflict
my two guards downtown ready to bury a jumper like klay thompson
Ok



Are & Dom bout to ride on this bitch. Rifles & clips
When we pull up to squeeze the metal together trust these guys getting ZIPPED
Nice
Murder these insects for nothin if I feel like bucking the can
Treat em like mosquitos - if I feel the itch & clap at em it’s gonna be blood on my hands
Nice again
Laser aim for precision, then I’ll empty the clip & stall ya world
Hit the red dot on Answer & let it ring out - top responses when he calls a girl
Lmao
Put a contract out on Bare. Have him jumpy & clammed up w/ sweat
Street Fighter: got Ryu’s hair standing on end over a band on his head
Nice
Rugers flexed. If we runnin outta ammo we clubbing this dude to death
After we hit this Bare mark it’s gonna be stocks crashing through his head
Ok
Grip the 12 & it’s nickel. Or the sub come out & start shelving some cripples
We got a problem kid? You’ll hear a BRAT with the Tommy … Angelica Pickles
Damn
You’re timid & scared. Running’s useless – give in to despair
Doesn’t matter how far ya roam Ans, the sniper’s equipped for long distance affairs
Cool
You look ridiculous fam. Those ears are far beyond laugh worthy
People been doubling up when facing you wayyyy before any tag tourney
Nice
Change your style you fucking mutant. You’re never brutal w/ bars
Even your wife says to fuck w/ a switch up - she’ll only have sex w/ you in the dark
Fuck with a switch up wording is off
You watch Disney for punches, c’mon bro that's old & fake
Write about what your kids really watch: a failed comic who can't control his weight
Ok closer


This is close and both had fire. Stylistically I prefer aer and dom as it’s all worded crisper and the concepts aren’t so left field which makes them hit harder for me. Whoever went first for aero and dominate was killing it

Vote aero/dom

[Fracture]

vote dom and aero their gay gunlines had good wording



i feel like answers team could of won if it had more answer material

[UPN Zuch]

Man this one was underwhelming.



But I get it, we are adults and we all be keying this shit



Answer and ryu were way below par here. Some cringe wordplays really set them back. Dna was cringe. Lol joe Jackson line was nice.


Aero and dom downright lucky they got this team on a down week. Only line I liked was the rugrats reference. And since I liked it better than joe Jackson they get the W


Vote- dominate’s team

[Blue Bayou]

DNA np was an okay use of the names
Aer to get off is a cool idea but done way to indirectly imo.. could've been stronger
Spread for a younger audience was lol cool concept
White on the inside was solid aero ref
A spyder is a Porsche. Looking beyond that, this is a decent metaphor . Cool
JJ was cool. Good personal on the teacher concept
Dominatrix is a played np On him but the way you used the A for aero and all the inner tie ins was pretty dope... this was well worded and executed
Aero quotes was okay
Shrink regularly was hilarious. Love that concept and style of bar
Klay thompason is technically well written.. the wording is good snf the tie ins were very well done, but the punch is really weak here...you're going to pay off cops to bury a guy that jumps to us death? I dunno, creative but not hard hitting

Vs.

Pu up to squeeze rhe metal together is cool for a "metal" gun bar.. executed well, nice
Mosquitos was a cool metaphor with good tie ins , but light
Red dot is a dope gun bar and np
Ryu street fighter plays have to be played but this was def creative with good layers to it
Bare markets is a solid np
I've seen a bunch of regrats / Tommy concepts.. this like the previous is well written and thought out tho
Romance is solid, long distance tie in was smart.. conceptually getting redundant tho
Doubling up was ight, Kinda funny
Fuck with a switch up is a dope concept.. doesn't really work because a switch up is ON lol.. but i dig it
Closer very statement ish with little pay off



Cool battle here, both verses were very well written technically... Aero and Dom has a lot of good concepts but a bit overkill on the attack lines imo... Answer and Bare were pretty solid throughout as well with more variety, but had more misses

Props to all I got Aero and Dom taking it