BAL: Cred (1-1) vs Bash (2-2) - Cred wins

[Lotto Smirk]

Battle Arena League

Rules

Due Dates:

• Verses are due Wednesday,
• Extensions are 24 hours

Line Limit:

• Min. = 10
• Max. = 12
• NO EXCEPTIONS

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• Recycling = DQ.
• Biting = DQ.
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  means you will be disqualified.
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• If no line limit is agreed on, then the 2nd person to post
  must match the 1st person's line amount.

@Cred @Bash

[Bash]

Goin 10

[Cred]

Cash

[Cred]

fuck bash, i hate this bitch. the type to put the 30 to ya face n shit
but i'll let that scope fuck 'em.. nigga that's a long distance relationship
s'young mula babyy, light ya whip up if u speedin thru
this new shit put sum heat thru ya speakers while leavin u wit no ceilings 2
see i'll put the chrome to ur dome. this shits so simple
we kno ur lame! except this L on ya head ain't the 'loser' symbol
u a shook nigga in real life. i'll take ur soul for spittin dem hardcore raps
so scared wen he died.. he still shakin in the box like movin iphone apps
dogg ur girl takes dick on the side, so dnt say I ain't told u
cus ur bitch was 'hittin the Quan' wayy before the dance became global

[Bash]

Cred aka imsoschool

Kill ya fam 1 by 1, dweeb my methods are too cruel
I'll line em up and watch you pay the price way quicker than fan duel
Ur a pedo, u'd pull up next to the youngest on a whim
Ironically no matter where ur at school, kid u cant be within 100 ft of them
Im from rb, i champed shit n became top dawg w/ my peers
Ur Cred, the guy that registered in 06 n been mid tier goin on 9 years
These cannons bout to sing, its over when i point the beam
One wave'll clear ya whole side like kobe callin iso on the wing
Ur dame gave me the keys, now i fuck her in the mouth
If he ever gets aikido, its cuz she'll use it to force em out the house

[slech]

Originally Posted by Cred

s'young mula babyy, light ya whip up if u speedin thru
this new shit put sum heat thru ya speakers while leavin u wit no ceilings 2
see i'll put the chrome to ur dome. this shits so simple
we kno ur lame! except this L on ya head ain't the 'loser' symbol

Originally Posted by Bash

Cred aka imsoschool

Kill ya fam 1 by 1, dweeb my methods are too cruel
I'll line em up and watch you pay the price way quicker than fan duel
Ur a pedo, u'd pull up next to the youngest on a whim
Ironically no matter where ur at school, kid u cant be within 100 ft of them
These cannons bout to sing, its over when i point the beam
One wave'll clear ya whole side like kobe callin iso on the wing
Ur dame gave me the keys, now i fuck her in the mouth
If he ever gets aikido, its cuz she'll use it to force em out the house

ok battle here. I felt cred came in more predictable than bash did. bash had more creativity on this. he edged it. mvgt - bash

[Schadenfreude]

Originally Posted by Cred

fuck bash, i hate this bitch. the type to put the 30 to ya face n shit
but i'll let that scope fuck 'em.. nigga that's a long distance relationship
s'young mula babyy, light ya whip up if u speedin thru
this new shit put sum heat thru ya speakers while leavin u wit no ceilings 2
u a shook nigga in real life. i'll take ur soul for spittin dem hardcore raps
so scared wen he died.. he still shakin in the box like movin iphone apps

ODed on the gunplay's, but they were some dope joints, so it's cool.

Originally Posted by Bash

Ur a pedo, u'd pull up next to the youngest on a whim
Ironically no matter where ur at school, kid u cant be within 100 ft of them
These cannons bout to sing, its over when i point the beam
One wave'll clear ya whole side like kobe callin iso on the wing
Ur dame gave me the keys, now i fuck her in the mouth
If he ever gets aikido, its cuz she'll use it to force em out the house

Those were some good quotables, could've been harsher, but a decent verse.

Overall Cred's bars landed a bit harder, IMO. Dope battle, but yea CRED edged.

[Saitama]

Cred edged it..bash came cool. Cred had the stronger hits

[Witty]

fuck bash, i hate this bitch. the type to put the 30 to ya face n shit
but i'll let that scope fuck 'em.. nigga that's a long distance relationship
I liked this, but I think it could have been better, I think because there was nothing to tie it in to Bash personally, so it could have been used for anyone, that's the only down side, but still dope
s'young mula babyy, light ya whip up if u speedin thru
this new shit put sum heat thru ya speakers while leavin u wit no ceilings 2
Same as before, but it matters less cuz this was hot
see i'll put the chrome to ur dome. this shits so simple
we kno ur lame! except this L on ya head ain't the 'loser' symbol
Nah wasn't feeling tbh, The L for loser thing is as old as I am lol and this was a fresh flip but it still felt a little stale
u a shook nigga in real life. i'll take ur soul for spittin dem hardcore raps
so scared wen he died.. he still shakin in the box like movin iphone apps
Cool, nice wording, again lacking in personal connection, but dope
dogg ur girl takes dick on the side, so dnt say I ain't told u
cus ur bitch was 'hittin the Quan' wayy before the dance became global
Lol, nice

vs

Kill ya fam 1 by 1, dweeb my methods are too cruel
I'll line em up and watch you pay the price way quicker than fan duel
Nah, quite basic and the wording could have been much better, 'dweeb' wasn't necessary, 'way' before quicker wasn't needed either, removing redundant words like that, while seemingly small adjustments, can help a lot with the flow
Ur a pedo, u'd pull up next to the youngest on a whim
Ironically no matter where ur at school, kid u cant be within 100 ft of them
Cool personal attempt, again though some wording issues, this time adding a little more to the first line may have helped, something like 'pull up next to the youngest on a fiendish whim, cuz it rhymes with '100 ft of them', but yeah this was cool
Im from rb, i champed shit n became top dawg w/ my peers
Ur Cred, the guy that registered in 06 n been mid tier goin on 9 years
Simple, statement, but again a personal, I don't agree cuz I think Cred is dope so that softened the blow for me, a personal is always best if it's actually true, but cool
These cannons bout to sing, its over when i point the beam
One wave'll clear ya whole side like kobe callin iso on the wing
Wasn't feeling. Wording was cool, just didn't like the concept
Ur dame gave me the keys, now i fuck her in the mouth
If he ever gets aikido, its cuz she'll use it to force em out the house
Not bad, original concept, decent-ish

This was tricky, one was hard hitting and well worded throughout but lacked personals, while the other had personals but the wording was off in places and the punches weren't as hard. I'm going to go with who I felt had more bases covered overall and that is Cred.Good battle dudes.