Lmaooo wassup fools

Malachi · 08-08-2017, 10:06 PM

Im back

WRATH · 08-08-2017, 11:03 PM

Young man

Diode · 08-08-2017, 11:12 PM

Ok

Malachi · 08-09-2017, 03:32 AM

Im surprised this still here

uh-oh · 08-09-2017, 05:30 AM

yooo

wasim · 08-09-2017, 07:16 AM

young stunna

Witty · 08-09-2017, 07:31 AM

Hi.

Chill Phil · 08-09-2017, 11:05 AM

Greetings

Do Not Reply · 08-09-2017, 12:02 PM

hello

Geno · 08-09-2017, 02:16 PM

Ayyee

Malachi · 08-09-2017, 05:19 PM

Im not here for long I just told myself I wasnt coming back till i recorded a song. And i wanted the people who really got me into the rap i like n listen to to hear it. If I remember correctly yall niggas might clown me for this one but its a love song but its fye

Malachi · 08-09-2017, 05:21 PM

https://soundcloud.com/profitmalachi/dear-lauryn

Idk if u can change it so its not a link

wasim · 08-09-2017, 05:34 PM

dope shit malachi, only critique i can give is perhaps give a little bit more emotion to it. it sounds a bit too laidback, but perhaps that's the way you wanted to go with. i fuck with it actually after the third listen lmao

uh-oh · 08-09-2017, 05:34 PM

thats dope man. better than most peoples first tracks

you could be more forceful though, but it'll come with more comfortability with recording. and the vocals could just be louder in general they were getting drowned out at times by the beat

but word man it was much better than i was expecting

Malachi · 08-09-2017, 07:43 PM

Thanks you two i def agree about my voice n being more forcedul n emotion. I think i just need to get more comfortable in the booth and ill sound much better

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Malachi Negus Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 2,530 Battle Record: 5-10 Champed - Newbie Tourney VI Rep Power: 82877407	Im not here for long I just told myself I wasnt coming back till i recorded a song. And i wanted the people who really got me into the rap i like n listen to to hear it. If I remember correctly yall niggas might clown me for this one but its a love song but its fye __________________ Seen the spectrum through the prisms

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wasim The Conqueror Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 348 Rep Power: 22931794	dope shit malachi, only critique i can give is perhaps give a little bit more emotion to it. it sounds a bit too laidback, but perhaps that's the way you wanted to go with. i fuck with it actually after the third listen lmao

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Malachi Negus Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 2,530 Battle Record: 5-10 Champed - Newbie Tourney VI Rep Power: 82877407	Thanks you two i def agree about my voice n being more forcedul n emotion. I think i just need to get more comfortable in the booth and ill sound much better __________________ Seen the spectrum through the prisms