WILDCARD WEEK: #6 Fracture VS #11 Spree / FRACTURE ADVANCES

[UPN Zuch]

Welcome to the NBL PLAYOFFS

Rules

Line limit

Minimum: 10

Maximum: 16

Verses due 11:59pm PACIFIC December 18, 2020 (Friday)

THERE ARE NO EXTENSIONS FOR WILDCARD WEEK. DO NOT ASK.


Good luck, gentlemen

[Kill Spree]

Any interest in pics?

[Fracture]

12.. My bad. Have a lot going on.




Frac deadly with the machete, let the pharoah work
Put two good lines on your neck, now ur just a head above an aero verse
Rocked ya girls pussy.. Skies full of lighters
In her pants with more hand slides than two spies in a diner
Blue face when I put you in a two day chokehold
Then pull your ribs so far apart ur shadowll look like the wutang logo
Aint shit to frac to ship this bum out in bags
Cut this nobody up.. Give his state the kind of parts unknown u find in resins kung pao from scratch
Hows your wack filler gonna be a frac killer
Leagues a joke. Everytime yall approving lines im missin 2009 like mac miller
When im around noone can tell youre there
Im moving on to battle orc who only reminds us of butlers spelling errors

[Kill Spree]

Fracture aka Trey aka Cheeto Arms
Real Name Drew
All proof here...

http://www.urbanprowlers.net/vb/showthread.php?t=68123
All the expos are here^^^

April Isolation...
spoke Volumes how two fags left you dropped dead soft
Frac got blown out by BluJax & their Noise Rocked your head off
Faked being someone else? I know it’s lame right
It’s the only pegged Black Lifestyle that could rival Aero Vs Daves Wife
I stay hype in this Barn, you can’t slip by this force
Seen Drew Lock wins, but 1 punch & his face look like it was kicked by a Horse
This Long Nose have you gone bro. Fuck U fags
Only time Arms over heads? S’wen I put’em in a full Nelson & pull’m out Zuchs ass
& the wife you bout to lose? She corners the wealth of this rookie
When we role up to Chee’s Block w/Heat? We all melt in that pussy
& if it that isnt your tough time? Know what I think that hurts?
It’s you are such a dead beat dad your kids are smart enough to write a better verse

[UserName]

Frac -

Rocked ya girls pussy.. Skies full of lighters
In her pants with more hand slides than two spies in a diner
Blue face when I put you in a two day chokehold
Then pull your ribs so far apart ur shadowll look like the wutang logo
Aint shit to frac to ship this bum out in bags
Cut this nobody up.. Give his state the kind of parts unknown u find in resins kung pao from scratch
Hows your wack filler gonna be a frac killer
Leagues a joke. Everytime yall approving lines im missin 2009 like mac miller

Hand slides was cool, wu tang logo was crazy imagery, kung pao was jokes - punch was kinda long tho, mac miller was smooth. Opener and closers were not my favorite, but the middle section was dope.

Spree -

Faked being someone else? I know it’s lame right
It’s the only pegged Black Lifestyle that could rival Aero Vs Daves Wife

Bro I'm gonna be completely honest here and say I read that entire upn thread at the time it came out, and read it AGAIN in it's entirety for your verse, thinking i was really prepping myself for some hot personals and I still only really felt one line. Opener was okay, but the connection between Volumes and Noise in the punch is so stretched it was tough to even get the correlation at first. And you did the same thing with Barn/Kicked by a Horse. And Long nose and Zuch's ass? Maybe. Jury's still out on that one. Cheese block was okay. Dead beat dad was a whiff.

I'm sorry if that's a little rough of a breakdown, it just seemed odd to me, so I thought I should point it out. Anyways, cool battle. Dug a fair bit of Frac's verse, not much of Spree's, hopefully I wasn't too harsh.

V - Fracture

[Orc]

Hand spies was fire. Rest was filler or not good

Spree overdone the personals. Closest was horse line. The punches conceptually were stretched in terms of the concepts and the execution. Hard to find the correlation.

Vote Frac

[Hush]

This battle was ass

[fraze]

Originally Posted by Fracture

Frac deadly with the machete, let the pharoah work
Put two good lines on your neck, now ur just a head above an aero verse
this is kinda cool.
Rocked ya girls pussy.. Skies full of lighters
In her pants with more hand slides than two spies in a diner
don't get the two spies thing. maybe with better setup. why are we putting lighters up rn?
Blue face when I put you in a two day chokehold
Then pull your ribs so far apart ur shadowll look like the wutang logo
this is cool
Aint shit to frac to ship this bum out in bags
Cut this nobody up.. Give his state the kind of parts unknown u find in resins kung pao from scratch
wording on this bar is terrible. concept is ok. parts unknown the phrase is about location, which makes that a awkward wording choice
Hows your wack filler gonna be a frac killer
Leagues a joke. Everytime yall approving lines im missin 2009 like mac miller
this is a cool punch but a light diss.
When im around noone can tell youre there
Im moving on to battle orc who only reminds us of butlers spelling errors
not a good punch

Quotes: head above an aero verse, wu tang
Close: kung pao, 2009

Creative punches. We'll have to agree to disagree about setups and wording.

Originally Posted by Kill Spree

Fracture aka Trey aka Cheeto Arms
Real Name Drew
All proof here...

http://www.urbanprowlers.net/vb/showthread.php?t=68123
All the expos are here^^^

April Isolation...
spoke Volumes how two fags left you dropped dead soft
Frac got blown out by BluJax & their Noise Rocked your head off
ok personal. light punch
Faked being someone else? I know it’s lame right
It’s the only pegged Black Lifestyle that could rival Aero Vs Daves Wife
nice personal. ok punch
I stay hype in this Barn, you can’t slip by this force
Seen Drew Lock wins, but 1 punch & his face look like it was kicked by a Horse
not feeling this
This Long Nose have you gone bro. Fuck U fags
Only time Arms over heads? S’wen I put’em in a full Nelson & pull’m out Zuchs ass
why?
& the wife you bout to lose? She corners the wealth of this rookie
When we role up to Chee’s Block w/Heat? We all melt in that pussy
cheese block wp is there. punch is light.
& if it that isnt your tough time? Know what I think that hurts?
It’s you are such a dead beat dad your kids are smart enough to write a better verse
wording throws this off. punch is too light

Quotes: pegged black lifestyle
Close: blujax, chee's block

Nice work on the personals but to me good concepts are always going to beat personals. Even with a personal, to make the bar good you still need a creative way to flip it. Just saying the info isn't a good bar.

Vote: Fracture Spree put up a good effort but Fracture had enough heat to hold him off.

[UPN Zuch]

Need more votes here..

[El Muffin]

Frac deadly with the machete, let the pharoah work
Put two good lines on your neck, now ur just a head above an aero verse
(Negatory )
Rocked ya girls pussy.. Skies full of lighters
In her pants with more hand slides than two spies in a diner
( clever concept . )
Blue face when I put you in a two day chokehold
Then pull your ribs so far apart ur shadowll look like the wutang logo
( descriptive but again nothing worth recognizing)
Aint shit to frac to ship this bum out in bags
Cut this nobody up.. Give his state the kind of parts unknown u find in resins kung pao from scratch
(Parts unknown was an interesting angle . It’s ok )
Hows your wack filler gonna be a frac killer
Leagues a joke. Everytime yall approving lines im missin 2009 like mac miller
( condescending. Considering the output thus far this is wildly ineffective )
When im around noone can tell youre there
Im moving on to battle orc who only reminds us of butlers spelling errors
( same as above . Wasted bar . )


spoke Volumes how two fags left you dropped dead soft
Frac got blown out by BluJax & their Noise Rocked your head off
( kinda went over my head . Not familiar with the reference )
Faked being someone else? I know it’s lame right
It’s the only pegged Black Lifestyle that could rival Aero Vs Daves Wife
( didn’t like what you did with readily available information )
I stay hype in this Barn, you can’t slip by this force
Seen Drew Lock wins, but 1 punch & his face look like it was kicked by a Horse
( could of done so much more with the hood drew lock shit. Rather than tie it in with what he looks like )
This Long Nose have you gone bro. Fuck U fags
Only time Arms over heads? S’wen I put’em in a full Nelson & pull’m out Zuchs ass
( hell nah )
& the wife you bout to lose? She corners the wealth of this rookie
When we role up to Chee’s Block w/Heat? We all melt in that pussy
( nah)
& if it that isnt your tough time? Know what I think that hurts?
It’s you are such a dead beat dad your kids are smart enough to write a better vers
(Nah )

Pretty underwhelming battle . Frac takes it with hand slides

Seem soree do better against worse comp

V/ frac

[UPN Zuch]

Fracture wins 4-0 and advances.