REMATCH: Fraze VS Eviction II FRAZE WINS

UPN Zuch · 12-09-2020, 10:44 PM

You guys know the dilly

Min 10

Max 16

@fraze

@Eviction

Eviction · 12-09-2020, 10:57 PM

check, 10.

Eviction · 12-10-2020, 01:05 AM

10 sent

fraze · 12-11-2020, 03:09 PM

They told me, “Shorten up your bars.” But this week is the wrong instance.
Cause this snitch will turn bitch REALLY quick if he’s up against a long sentence
No doubt this rat gets snapped in half for letting his mouth flap,
Put cheese down to see metal make his spine crack… I call that laying a mousetrap
Recounting times you’ve pounded chicks, one is high as the count can get
Before that figure gets inflated like the doll your mother found you with
Don’t care if friends surrounding ya, our schemes ain’t the same caliber.
I’ll put the hammer to your melon, wet the crowd, and stage the scene to frame Gallagher
Hafta slum to compete with this geek. The irony’s deep as I’m ending his boring run.
I’m putting this bum on the streets while granting the league an Eviction moratorium

Eviction · 12-11-2020, 03:44 PM

He’s never impactful, so I was puzzled when they fucking said fraze won.
Talkin shit about statements, bitch you’re just jealous cuz u never made one.
He has been hanging on to old concepts too long, it’s time to cut the cord.
Zuch got his vannah white swag on, and still can’t get a fraze on the board.
Think you have a position here? That wack shit won’t earn you a spot, clown.
The way you rode scout in the champ match, u have missionary locked down.
You said you don’t respect my opinions, cool because we respect yours less.
Cuz Your word is as good as lighting a bag of shit and sitting it on our doorstep.
Giving him the L is an easy decision, I’m about to catch a body like a trust fall.
u can hit his mom up and tell her I killed him, there still wouldn’t be a tough call

UserName · 12-13-2020, 08:41 AM

fraze -

They told me, “Shorten up your bars.” But this week is the wrong instance.
Cause this snitch will turn bitch REALLY quick if he’s up against a long sentence
Recounting times you’ve pounded chicks, one is high as the count can get
Before that figure gets inflated like the doll your mother found you with

Those were cool. Mousetrap was a little on the simple side, Gallagher was ok but felt statement-ish, moratorium was ok as well, overall nothing flat out bad.

Eviction -

He has been hanging on to old concepts too long, it’s time to cut the cord.
Zuch got his vannah white swag on, and still can’t get a fraze on the board.

I wanted to like this verse more, because I think stylistically, I prefer your wording over fraze's - but you had some headscratchers here. Your opener was fine, but fairly light. The scout riding/missionary idea was a whiff, and i just wasnt feeling the execution of the idea. the doorstep line was just a hard no from me, and the closer was bland.

Overall, v - fraze. Liked more of his verse.

iSpaz · 12-13-2020, 01:26 PM

They told me, “Shorten up your bars.” But this week is the wrong instance.
Cause this snitch will turn bitch REALLY quick if he’s up against a long sentence
this is not bad, i think if you undercapitallized REALLY and changed it to just real, it woulda hit a little harder imo
No doubt this rat gets snapped in half for letting his mouth flap,
Put cheese down to see metal make his spine crack… I call that laying a mousetrap
needs more misdirection, rat, snapped in half, cheese, spine crack, i already knew mousetrap was coming
Recounting times you’ve pounded chicks, one is high as the count can get
Before that figure gets inflated like the doll your mother found you with
just ok
Don’t care if friends surrounding ya, our schemes ain’t the same caliber.
I’ll put the hammer to your melon, wet the crowd, and stage the scene to frame Gallagher
seen a lot of gallagher lines before, again hammer, melon, wet the crowd, ur already spelling gallagher out
Hafta slum to compete with this geek. The irony’s deep as I’m ending his boring run.
I’m putting this bum on the streets while granting the league an Eviction moratorium
hmm, i like the concept

Vs

He’s never impactful, so I was puzzled when they fucking said fraze won.
Talkin shit about statements, bitch you’re just jealous cuz u never made one.
ok
He has been hanging on to old concepts too long, it’s time to cut the cord.
Zuch got his vannah white swag on, and still can’t get a fraze on the board.
ehh i would have tried a diff angle
Think you have a position here? That wack shit won’t earn you a spot, clown.
The way you rode scout in the champ match, u have missionary locked down.
ok
You said you don’t respect my opinions, cool because we respect yours less.
Cuz Your word is as good as lighting a bag of shit and sitting it on our doorstep.
miss
Giving him the L is an easy decision, I’m about to catch a body like a trust fall.
u can hit his mom up and tell her I killed him, there still wouldn’t be a tough call
not feelin

V/fraze I've got two ok bars. Fraze had better misses imo.

UPN Zuch · 12-15-2020, 10:32 AM

I got Fraze here

Better than your last couple verses. Wording is more crisp and you’re simplifying your concepts. All good things.

Eviction you were decent here. It just not enough in the stand out department. Didn’t have any haymakers which hurts extremely overall. Just a bunch of jabs that were slight hits or miss.

Vote Fraze

12-09-2020, 10:57 PM	#2
Eviction Detained Join Date: Oct 2020 Posts: 1,838 Battle Record: 16-11 Rep Power: 0	check, 10. Last edited by Eviction; 12-09-2020 at 11:14 PM.

12-13-2020, 08:41 AM	#6
UserName K I N G Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 685 Battle Record: 15-10 Rep Power: 3228862	fraze - They told me, “Shorten up your bars.” But this week is the wrong instance. Cause this snitch will turn bitch REALLY quick if he’s up against a long sentence Recounting times you’ve pounded chicks, one is high as the count can get Before that figure gets inflated like the doll your mother found you with Those were cool. Mousetrap was a little on the simple side, Gallagher was ok but felt statement-ish, moratorium was ok as well, overall nothing flat out bad. Eviction - He has been hanging on to old concepts too long, it’s time to cut the cord. Zuch got his vannah white swag on, and still can’t get a fraze on the board. I wanted to like this verse more, because I think stylistically, I prefer your wording over fraze's - but you had some headscratchers here. Your opener was fine, but fairly light. The scout riding/missionary idea was a whiff, and i just wasnt feeling the execution of the idea. the doorstep line was just a hard no from me, and the closer was bland. Overall, v - fraze. Liked more of his verse. __________________ First Class

12-13-2020, 01:26 PM	#7
iSpaz Gang shit on my brain Join Date: May 2015 Posts: 265 Battle Record: 10-11 Rep Power: 161231	They told me, “Shorten up your bars.” But this week is the wrong instance. Cause this snitch will turn bitch REALLY quick if he’s up against a long sentence this is not bad, i think if you undercapitallized REALLY and changed it to just real, it woulda hit a little harder imo No doubt this rat gets snapped in half for letting his mouth flap, Put cheese down to see metal make his spine crack… I call that laying a mousetrap needs more misdirection, rat, snapped in half, cheese, spine crack, i already knew mousetrap was coming Recounting times you’ve pounded chicks, one is high as the count can get Before that figure gets inflated like the doll your mother found you with just ok Don’t care if friends surrounding ya, our schemes ain’t the same caliber. I’ll put the hammer to your melon, wet the crowd, and stage the scene to frame Gallagher seen a lot of gallagher lines before, again hammer, melon, wet the crowd, ur already spelling gallagher out Hafta slum to compete with this geek. The irony’s deep as I’m ending his boring run. I’m putting this bum on the streets while granting the league an Eviction moratorium hmm, i like the concept Vs He’s never impactful, so I was puzzled when they fucking said fraze won. Talkin shit about statements, bitch you’re just jealous cuz u never made one. ok He has been hanging on to old concepts too long, it’s time to cut the cord. Zuch got his vannah white swag on, and still can’t get a fraze on the board. ehh i would have tried a diff angle Think you have a position here? That wack shit won’t earn you a spot, clown. The way you rode scout in the champ match, u have missionary locked down. ok You said you don’t respect my opinions, cool because we respect yours less. Cuz Your word is as good as lighting a bag of shit and sitting it on our doorstep. miss Giving him the L is an easy decision, I’m about to catch a body like a trust fall. u can hit his mom up and tell her I killed him, there still wouldn’t be a tough call not feelin V/fraze I've got two ok bars. Fraze had better misses imo. __________________ But don't say I can't rap like I'm not a Rap God, Like I won't break your fucking favorite rapper's rap jaw

12-10-2020, 01:05 AM	#3
Eviction Detained Join Date: Oct 2020 Posts: 1,838 Battle Record: 16-11 Rep Power: 0	10 sent

12-11-2020, 03:09 PM	#4
fraze Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2013 Location: Louisville, KY Posts: 913 Battle Record: 14-24 Rep Power: 32898722	They told me, “Shorten up your bars.” But this week is the wrong instance. Cause this snitch will turn bitch REALLY quick if he’s up against a long sentence No doubt this rat gets snapped in half for letting his mouth flap, Put cheese down to see metal make his spine crack… I call that laying a mousetrap Recounting times you’ve pounded chicks, one is high as the count can get Before that figure gets inflated like the doll your mother found you with Don’t care if friends surrounding ya, our schemes ain’t the same caliber. I’ll put the hammer to your melon, wet the crowd, and stage the scene to frame Gallagher Hafta slum to compete with this geek. The irony’s deep as I’m ending his boring run. I’m putting this bum on the streets while granting the league an Eviction moratorium

12-11-2020, 03:44 PM	#5
Eviction Detained Join Date: Oct 2020 Posts: 1,838 Battle Record: 16-11 Rep Power: 0	He’s never impactful, so I was puzzled when they fucking said fraze won. Talkin shit about statements, bitch you’re just jealous cuz u never made one. He has been hanging on to old concepts too long, it’s time to cut the cord. Zuch got his vannah white swag on, and still can’t get a fraze on the board. Think you have a position here? That wack shit won’t earn you a spot, clown. The way you rode scout in the champ match, u have missionary locked down. You said you don’t respect my opinions, cool because we respect yours less. Cuz Your word is as good as lighting a bag of shit and sitting it on our doorstep. Giving him the L is an easy decision, I’m about to catch a body like a trust fall. u can hit his mom up and tell her I killed him, there still wouldn’t be a tough call