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10-16-2020, 06:25 AM
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Ouch vs. J.Hens. (HENS WINS)
10 lines due in one hour.
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10-16-2020, 06:37 AM
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You're hopefully pantin', when we know that you're rantin'.
Dude's system got more Booze in it than the NFL's Opening Anthem. You're random, I get it bro, I been in deep, many days. Was gonna put his head to the Concrete, but that's where he sleeps anyways. I'm confused, your awful life, it seems like dude is awfully light. Ignored, gets on the boards and is such a Rambler, Jeep sued for Copyright. I figured fuck it bro, let's try, and I hope you're gonna drop it. Haven't seen Son shine.. just Moonshine.. when you pulled it from your pocket. I ain't gonna try G, talk your shit, you're insane and behind me. You're a Dead Man, and I'll leave you carried by Paul Bearers like Kane in the 90's. |
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10-16-2020, 07:15 AM
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look kid... this might sound stooo pid i'd say that you were washed up
but that would imply you were good when your daddy bought your first Ping golf glub.. now on the matter at hand... you thought you were something rich boy, but the man your not fat and out of shape, stomach... Gyros got more than a greek sandwhich shop.. Hens, a fan i'm not.... gotta 6 pack of hotdogs on his neck god its a shame.. your parents must be proud... a man wearing a skirt tossing a big pole like its scottish games.. now that was long winded... I Get it... we can see facts.... i'll murder and have you breathing through plastic like ya wearing a halloween mask I'm not Jason, Michael Myers Freddy or Vorhees... you only got known off me beating with a person who wrote though hes a big man.. accent on the big part... Happy Gillmore wouldn't play with you in the trailer park.... Chubbs tap tap tap in in happy
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10-16-2020, 07:45 AM
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Rambler bar was cool
Vote - hens
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10-16-2020, 07:58 AM
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Son shine moonshine was a cool flip
Ouch wtf are you talking about bro Scottish games and Halloween mask was aight bro Try writing one sober on 8 hours sleep Good to see u both TRYING to write battle verses Vote hens easily
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10-16-2020, 08:00 AM
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Hens
Decent opener Rambler hit Nothing great, def. not your norm But a key, for ouch, I get it Ouch You had concepts w potential, but mann your execution was bad. Gyros & breathing thru plastic could've ben something Mvgt Hens
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10-16-2020, 08:37 AM
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7 am.. drunk as fuck and dude randomly pops up and I quick write a verse with some good concepts.. yall lucky it wasn't
lkajflkjdlakjf... alkdjflakjf//// lkjfljf---lakjfljaflfj//// yeah I lost but wasn't hens finest moment either... had I been on my toes I would've got him. regardless whatever I lost. But his shit wasn't impressive at all. Love you though Hensley you're my main man.
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10-17-2020, 07:19 AM
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imao id beat both of you easily
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10-17-2020, 09:44 PM
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10-18-2020, 02:50 AM
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Shrewd as evearthed
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man you’re so wack.
give it up.
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10-18-2020, 10:04 PM
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10-18-2020, 10:27 PM
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He wouldn't do a damn thing.. as far as writing and I think he's PJK.. or I could be wrong P~j~K basically the started of the m~ul~tis...
and I showed up like not so well... good concepts and if I would've strung them toghether right I would've beat you beacause you didn't come with any new concepts... but this was at 6 AM no sleep, copious amounts of mind altering substances.... sounds like an excuse, but its not an excuse its just a fact.... regaurdless..
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10-18-2020, 10:42 PM
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I feel ya. It was a quick key battle, no big deal brother. I'm not gonna brag about it or anything lol |
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10-18-2020, 11:46 PM
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you shouldn't my nigga.. and literally that was at like 5-6 AM...... a random thing and since you're from like seattle or whatever...
thats 3 hours difference... and you may have been drinking. and goes without me saying... I was... would be for you like 2am or wahtever because you're from the west coast.... theres a large difference between if you haven't gone to bed and itd 6 am vs... even if you haven't gone to bed at 2 or 3.... theres a huge difference.. but yeah don't let these niggas fade you
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10-19-2020, 12:57 PM
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Hens wins 3-0 TKO
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