10-24-2020, 11:22 AM | #1 |
Spoiled brat
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WEEK 4: Wanderer 2-1 VS Mod of War 1-0 WANDERER WINS
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Rules Line limit Minimum: 10 Maximum: 16 Verses due 11:59pm EST October 29, 2020 (Thursday) Extensions are granted automatically. 24-hour max. MUST BE REQUESTED BY DEADLINE Good luck, gentlemen __________________ |
10-24-2020, 11:26 AM | #2 |
My avatar is a man, urGAY
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Hey let’s do 10
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10-24-2020, 02:15 PM | #3 |
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Sure
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10-24-2020, 02:35 PM | #4 |
My avatar is a man, urGAY
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10-24-2020, 05:06 PM | #5 |
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Sent 12
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10-29-2020, 01:20 PM | #6 |
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PREPARE TO DIE
Isle end this! no expiration date. Wait till u see where this gooks headed He’s so used to the taste of defeat he developed a foot fetish I could drop straight trash. Literally a dud of a verse and I’m good Cuz when it comes to beef in this battle I already knw u bratwurst than I would And your girl? Likes to nibble, s’cool.. I’m just glad she’s not a biter A Nice broad, says she’s into innocence.. kinda weird she likes the smell of topical writers KAPOW! I hate foreigners. Best believe I’ll leave you dead mate I pack pistols.. my grain is 147, it’ll give you more than a headache! This is straight murder, it’s no secret I’m killin em The verse will either be gunbars or just dead funny like Robin Williams Death by aerial assault. Fuck around n get aired This nerd wasn’t ready but I’m sure he had his Bluetooth pre paired Last edited by Smod of War; 10-29-2020 at 05:16 PM. |
10-29-2020, 01:31 PM | #7 |
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Hey Zelph / Zaddy / Mod of War
Beat u pics AND regs so there’s no doubting that ur rattled LOL @ Mod of War.. u still can’t change the outcome of our battles Verses hitting hardly so u Clowning to think it harms me I’m Ballooning... u in the bag with that shit nobody want like lil kids parties A couple losses & u’ll ghost. War in ur name but u chicken shit, hell.. If they ever label u a Soldier it’s cos u’ll get Toasted then dip in ur Shell Ur votes are atrocious. bitterness & hate’s what ur about Learn to Brush it off properly to limit that bad taste in ur mouth I’m mentioned as a born winner. u don’t create that shit.. it’s sad Only thing u know about a name drop is failing under every alias u’ve had U never explode into action so talking that shit is wrong But overstep the line with me EVER.. I’ll make sure it’s a tripwire bomb |
10-30-2020, 10:42 AM | #8 |
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Zelph’s verse was garbage. Funny at times, but garbage
Wanderer - liked the opener, cool personal. I don’t get the Balloon bar man. Soldier bar was fire, the wording of the set up could have been tweaked to make the bar better. Brush was a weak connection to the punch imo. Name drop is fire and a good personal. Tripwire was filler. Vote Wanderer |
10-30-2020, 02:33 PM | #9 |
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Beat u pics AND regs so there’s no doubting that ur rattled
LOL @ Mod of War.. u still can’t change the outcome of our battles I’m mentioned as a born winner. u don’t create that shit.. it’s sad Only thing u know about a name drop is failing under every alias u’ve had vs idk if this was a serious verse or wut, after i read defeat/bratwurst lines. v/wand
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10-30-2020, 03:55 PM | #10 |
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Wanderer got this obviously
What the hell zelph? Mod of war and alias lines were cool Vote wanderer
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10-30-2020, 04:22 PM | #11 |
K I N G
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Wand, you didnt need much but these were tight:
Beat u pics AND regs so there’s no doubting that ur rattled LOL @ Mod of War.. u still can’t change the outcome of our battles I’m mentioned as a born winner. u don’t create that shit.. it’s sad Only thing u know about a name drop is failing under every alias u’ve had U never explode into action so talking that shit is wrong But overstep the line with me EVER.. I’ll make sure it’s a tripwire bomb Zelph i hate you V - Wand
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10-31-2020, 09:31 AM | #12 |
Bags will be avenged
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Defeat? Gtfo
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11-01-2020, 05:03 AM | #13 |
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Mod - bratwurst was good and bad for me lol... KAPOW!! LOL no gangster has ever said Kapow
Wand - outcomebof battles and failing under alias Wand wins here. Mod was decent just wasnt there conceptually
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11-01-2020, 09:15 AM | #14 |
FUCK YOU
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Wow a defeat bar? Fuckin plug
V/wanderer. |
11-01-2020, 11:53 AM | #15 |
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Overstep line and name drop were fire concepts. Opener was a nice name play too. Solid verse from Wand. Kid was kinda funny but not good.
Vote - wand
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11-01-2020, 12:04 PM | #16 |
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LMAO at Zelph's troll verse... defeat oper, inno scents lol wow
vs. Beat u pics AND regs so there’s no doubting that ur rattled LOL @ Mod of War.. u still can’t change the outcome of our battles good punch, nice personal touch in the setup... youve already won Verses hitting hardly so u Clowning to think it harms me I’m Ballooning... u in the bag with that shit nobody want like lil kids parties ehh okay conceptually, smoother connecting multis would help the wording and delivery A couple losses & u’ll ghost. War in ur name but u chicken shit, hell.. If they ever label u a Soldier it’s cos u’ll get Toasted then dip in ur Shell some coolish connections throughout but its just okay Ur votes are atrocious. bitterness & hate’s what ur about Learn to Brush it off properly to limit that bad taste in ur mouth fresh concept and good personal as hes a vote troll I’m mentioned as a born winner. u don’t create that shit.. it’s sad Only thing u know about a name drop is failing under every alias u’ve had good hit U never explode into action so talking that shit is wrong But overstep the line with me EVER.. I’ll make sure it’s a tripwire bomb nice concept but i think this shouldve been done differently.. overstep the line "with me" takes away from the impact and makes it less smooth Zelph made me laugh as he intended to, but Wand won easily with a good mix of solid concepts and personals.. |
11-01-2020, 12:47 PM | #17 |
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I Like Zelph, but this verse didn’t have much bratwurst was okay defeat is tired tbh
Wand had failing under aliases, change the outcome and soldier had potential. Your verse wasn’t a knockout punch but it had some good bars. V/Wand pretty one sided |
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