Week 3: Burd (0-0) vs. veritas (0-0) - BURD WINS

For Battling · 07-02-2018, 05:30 AM

COMPLETE RULE THREAD:
http://www.netcees.org/showthread.php?t=128411

IMPORTANT RULES:
- No biting
- No swaying
- No recycling
- No feeding

MUST VOTE ON ATLEAST 4 BATTLES

PUNCHES DUE BY FRIDAY
VOTING ENDS SUNDAY
NEW MATCHUPS UP BY SUNDAY NIGHT

@Burd @Orc @veritas

For Battling · 07-06-2018, 01:01 PM

veritas Bar:

V aint the one to step to, he shines with cold text, easily wrecks this McGregor’s effeminate nephew.
My hands always on time like a Rolex, leave him checked and flipped like an old school Rolodex do.

Burd · 07-06-2018, 02:20 PM

Fat wife aka wack life that’s inferior to mine
Boyyy ya girl cooch gota ‘Lived in look’ that’d revolutionize Interior Design

Schadenfreude · 07-06-2018, 02:35 PM

VOTE ORC V posted 2 bars-in-one & the McGregor joke was much more interesting than the hands/watch punch. Burd's punch was simple yet funny & effective.

Saint · 07-06-2018, 02:52 PM

V Burd -- veritas bar was too long an the rolodex/rolex concepts werent too great to me.
Burd used a familiar concept but it hit

veritas · 07-06-2018, 02:57 PM

I thought what I posted was one bar. My bad guys. All love. Good show orc

Twodrop · 07-06-2018, 03:06 PM

Both were cool... Veritas might have been a little stretched..

Burd was concise and hilarious, flowed nice, he got it.

v/ Burd

bleak · 07-06-2018, 03:57 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by veritas

I thought what I posted was one bar. My bad guys. All love. Good show orc

It was just a little stretched which makes it read weird. Whereas Orc was minimalistic and got the job done with the room allotted to him. Honestly V the first line was better maybe u should have transposed them it may have hit harder.

Burden

Jabari Black · 07-06-2018, 04:56 PM

V

Rhymes scheme was nice so it made the bar not feel stretched imo. Rolex/Gand in time flip is kinda played but fine for a set up. Imo the roladex flip was a little light.

Burd’s punch was just funny af. Not too much more to say than that. Live in/interior design ain’t a crazy flip but it works and like I said - funny af.

mvgt Burd

Amen · 07-06-2018, 05:07 PM

Lol @ people saying V's bar was stretched. No it wasn't - he utilized long bar format and made up for the long winded syllables with rhyme schemes. However the punch executed was fairly weak. I thought the concept in the setup bar would have been a little better if executed properly.

Orc's punch wasn't all that but he dropped just enough to take it.

Burd got it.

Chyeahhh!!! · 07-06-2018, 05:32 PM

saw what V was going for, just a little long and wordy

Burd had a short setup that I thought was gonna end dumb but came through

vote Burd

Cereal · 07-06-2018, 08:41 PM

vote = burd
ver punch was nice still, burd was just my compact..

MMLP · 07-07-2018, 05:12 AM

Burd was simple n effective, vertias probably would have taken this if not 4 doing too much

Destroyer · 07-07-2018, 07:49 AM

Man, burd’s punch really got that “lived in” look to it
But I can’t be bothered to go searching
Veritas was stretched like Armstrong

V/orc

Pinot Grij · 07-07-2018, 09:05 AM

Vote — Orc , not only was the concept fresh but the rhyming was slick too. Veritas - Rolodex concept wasn’t as effective.

Aero · 07-07-2018, 09:54 AM

Veritas - I like the set up more than the punch

Bird - I feel like lived in has been done before and this was predictable

Burd

For Battling · 07-07-2018, 09:12 PM

Burd Wins 12-0

07-02-2018, 05:30 AM	#1
For Battling Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2017 Posts: 3,986 Battle Record: 11-6 Rep Power: 5633912	Week 3: Burd (0-0) vs. veritas (0-0) - BURD WINS COMPLETE RULE THREAD: http://www.netcees.org/showthread.php?t=128411 IMPORTANT RULES: - No biting - No swaying - No recycling - No feeding MUST VOTE ON ATLEAST 4 BATTLES PUNCHES DUE BY FRIDAY VOTING ENDS SUNDAY NEW MATCHUPS UP BY SUNDAY NIGHT @Burd @Orc @veritas Last edited by For Battling; 07-03-2018 at 06:55 AM.

07-06-2018, 01:01 PM	#2
For Battling Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2017 Posts: 3,986 Battle Record: 11-6 Rep Power: 5633912	veritas Bar: V aint the one to step to, he shines with cold text, easily wrecks this McGregor’s effeminate nephew. My hands always on time like a Rolex, leave him checked and flipped like an old school Rolodex do. Last edited by For Battling; 07-06-2018 at 02:26 PM.

07-06-2018, 02:35 PM	#4
Schadenfreude Dynomite.. DYNOMITE!! Join Date: Sep 2015 Posts: 1,408 Battle Record: 42-22 Champed - Netcees Battle League (2x) - BA Tag Team Titles - Lyric Olympics Rep Power: 21049081	VOTE ORC V posted 2 bars-in-one & the McGregor joke was much more interesting than the hands/watch punch. Burd's punch was simple yet funny & effective. __________________ Aali hupatikana kwa ghali.

07-06-2018, 05:32 PM	#11
Chyeahhh!!! Saul Paul Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: remote location with a remote weapon station Posts: 6,397 Battle Record: 16-26 Rep Power: 1663348	saw what V was going for, just a little long and wordy Burd had a short setup that I thought was gonna end dumb but came through vote Burd __________________ KNOW YOUR MAKER BEFORE YOU'RE MADE TO I know the ledge, his sister's a jumpoff

07-06-2018, 08:41 PM	#12
Cereal killa Join Date: Jun 2018 Posts: 820 Battle Record: 1-6 Rep Power: 1312296	vote = burd ver punch was nice still, burd was just my compact.. __________________ A-double scribble - A 19 th century euphemism for ass

07-06-2018, 02:20 PM	#3
Burd Henchman Join Date: Apr 2010 Posts: 70 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Rep Power: 3752562	Fat wife aka wack life that’s inferior to mine Boyyy ya girl cooch gota ‘Lived in look’ that’d revolutionize Interior Design

07-06-2018, 02:52 PM	#5
Saint Scream Join Date: Jun 2015 Posts: 3,208 Battle Record: 63-35 Accomplishments - 50 Wins Champed - BA Picture Roast - Battle Royale Tournament - NBL Pic Roast - Netcees Battle League - NBL Season 11 - HoT Roast - BAL Roast - Tag Team Tourney - NBL Barcotic Cypher - SOL Pic Roast - BA Tag - XXXtentacion Roast - 1-2 LR Champ Rep Power: 22535865	V Burd -- veritas bar was too long an the rolodex/rolex concepts werent too great to me. Burd used a familiar concept but it hit

07-06-2018, 03:06 PM	#7
Twodrop Unknown Join Date: Mar 2018 Posts: 673 Battle Record: 2-2 Rep Power: 0	Both were cool... Veritas might have been a little stretched.. Burd was concise and hilarious, flowed nice, he got it. v/ Burd

07-06-2018, 04:56 PM	#9
Jabari Black Sun Tzu Join Date: Mar 2018 Location: Atlanta, GA Posts: 550 Battle Record: 13-6 Champed - Battle Arena League - 1-2 Punch League - Netcees Battle League - Netcees SOL Rep Power: 12764495	V Rhymes scheme was nice so it made the bar not feel stretched imo. Rolex/Gand in time flip is kinda played but fine for a set up. Imo the roladex flip was a little light. Burd’s punch was just funny af. Not too much more to say than that. Live in/interior design ain’t a crazy flip but it works and like I said - funny af. mvgt Burd

07-06-2018, 05:07 PM	#10
Amen As-salamu alaykum! Join Date: May 2016 Posts: 8,470 Battle Record: 19-8 Champed - 1-2 Punch League Season 6 Rep Power: 0	Lol @ people saying V's bar was stretched. No it wasn't - he utilized long bar format and made up for the long winded syllables with rhyme schemes. However the punch executed was fairly weak. I thought the concept in the setup bar would have been a little better if executed properly. Orc's punch wasn't all that but he dropped just enough to take it. Burd got it.

07-07-2018, 05:12 AM	#13
MMLP Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2013 Posts: 600 Battle Record: 15-16 Champed - Write Week 9 Rep Power: 9768087	Burd was simple n effective, vertias probably would have taken this if not 4 doing too much

07-07-2018, 09:05 AM	#15
Pinot Grij Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 863 Battle Record: 23-19 Accomplishments - OM HOF Champed - Fight Night 2 - Write Week V - Netcees Battle League (2x) - Winter Topical II - 1-2 Punch league Rep Power: 29195060	Vote — Orc , not only was the concept fresh but the rhyming was slick too. Veritas - Rolodex concept wasn’t as effective. __________________ Topical C.R.E.A.M.

07-07-2018, 09:54 AM	#16
Aero GOAT Join Date: Jul 2015 Posts: 4,825 Battle Record: 14-17 Champed - Site Diss Competition - Tag Tournament III - Lyric Olympics - Tag Tournament: "Omicron Variant" Rep Power: 0	Veritas - I like the set up more than the punch Bird - I feel like lived in has been done before and this was predictable Burd __________________ Too Rich IRL to Be Here. I'm Out.

07-07-2018, 09:12 PM	#17
For Battling Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2017 Posts: 3,986 Battle Record: 11-6 Rep Power: 5633912	Burd Wins 12-0