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Old 12-01-2020, 12:21 PM   #1
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Old 12-01-2020, 12:34 PM   #2
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We can do 20 if you want. Or 16.
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Old 12-01-2020, 05:08 PM   #3
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Old 12-02-2020, 03:21 PM   #4
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Make sure jamies watching

Ima fire hooks into ye head and cheek. Start well
Leave the top of your i more crooked than the medellín cartels
Just because im white hot, the site wants to question/sway
But my alias is forbidden...like your illiterate wife on election day
Your mugshot is a hoax. Alll phoney
Last time you had a cell block, everything 'cept your nose stopped growing
That thing's its own animal, and fucking massive
Your face came with a longer nose manual than bucky lasek
Gats loaded and I brought the big steel ..
I'll make sure jamie hears Matt Groening if I draw the springfield
I hope upn sides w me instead of this 'behind the scenes' loser
Tweaking User's lines..looking like he does lines with tweaking users
You may be a cool guy, but you have pull why? Lame
You're involved in enough inside jobs to become a full time maid;
Vote for yourself, recycle & make mags that openly sway a lot...
There's reservations when calling you out 'cause no one will take your spot
But everything I'm involved in HAS to be clicked, guy..
So this'll be more widespread than your asshole if ya actually did time
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Old 12-02-2020, 03:21 PM   #5
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You asked for this...

Killed by Ajax and now me? Give us a different challenger
You’re UPN’s “Body of the Month” but trust me we ain’t running a fitness calendar
I asked your girl what she wants from me, the timing was lit
Bitch said “Scout’s honor”, then she shoved my 3-finger salute right up her clit
I’ve been between those legs, the stank is killin’ me
It ain’t safe around her parts, there’s a lot of gang activity
Dismember your body, Funeral homes know I’m cold with the toolie
I’ll deliver your parts to the director like I just replaced your role in a movie
I’m an Eastside boy, Detroit had me growing up thug
You NEVER repped a set, but this banger will have you throwing up blood
That fucked up head of yours is in a trippy state
Dual heaters, ‘troop leader’, the boy Scout is getting touched in different ways
STOP editing your shit, I’m custom with stick work
Your verse reminds me of a bad rash, every time you touch it it gets worse
Beat you as Barc and now Scout? I’m laughing in fact @Sharp should add “Lost to Zuch” to your Accomps, you’re always champing at that
“Dope” “this is awesome!” Trust me she’s sick of caring
That’s not a battle review by Jamie, this time it’s your obituary


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Old 12-02-2020, 04:16 PM   #6
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Medallion bar u fully get but kinda corny... the Matt Groening bar was niiiiice but slightly off on pronunciation.

Zuch: scouts honor could've been good but you dont shove anything up a clit wtf are you a virgin? Jamie you dont have to deal with that. After Gang activity I knew the battle was over. Stop editing and rash was lol... superb wording as usual
Director and throw up blood could be played but worded them well enough to enjoy.

Scout that forbidden for Biden bar is disappointing




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Old 12-02-2020, 08:35 PM   #7
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Your mugshot is a hoax. Alll phoney
Last time you had a cell block, everything 'cept your nose stopped growing
That thing's its own animal, and fucking massive
Your face came with a longer nose manual than bucky lasek
Gats loaded and I brought the big steel ..
I'll make sure jamie hears Matt Groening if I draw the springfield

I hope upn sides w me instead of this 'behind the scenes' loser
Tweaking User's lines..looking like he does lines with tweaking users

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Killed by Ajax and now me? Give us a different challenger
You’re UPN’s “Body of the Month” but trust me we ain’t running a fitness calendar
I’ve been between those legs, the stank is killin’ me
It ain’t safe around her parts, there’s a lot of gang activity
I’m an Eastside boy, Detroit had me growing up thug
You NEVER repped a set, but this banger will have you throwing up blood
STOP editing your shit, I’m custom with stick work
Your verse reminds me of a bad rash, every time you touch it it gets worse

Beat you as Barc and now Scout? I’m laughing in fact @Sharp should add “Lost to Zuch” to your Accomps, you’re always champing at that

V/zuch he was more consistent. Scout had some heat with the groening bar but couple misses that were interesting
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Old 12-02-2020, 11:17 PM   #8
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Old 12-03-2020, 04:14 AM   #9
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Your mugshot is a hoax. Alll phoney
Last time you had a cell block, everything 'cept your nose stopped growing
Gats loaded and I brought the big steel ..
I'll make sure jamie hears Matt Groening if I draw the springfield
I hope upn sides w me instead of this 'behind the scenes' loser
Tweaking User's lines..looking like he does lines with tweaking users

Cool verse with a dope middle

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Killed by Ajax and now me? Give us a different challenger
You’re UPN’s “Body of the Month” but trust me we ain’t running a fitness calendar
I asked your girl what she wants from me, the timing was lit
Bitch said “Scout’s honor”, then she shoved my 3-finger salute right up her clit
I’ve been between those legs, the stank is killin’ me
It ain’t safe around her parts, there’s a lot of gang activity
Dismember your body, Funeral homes know I’m cold with the toolie
I’ll deliver your parts to the director like I just replaced your role in a movie
STOP editing your shit, I’m custom with stick work
Your verse reminds me of a bad rash, every time you touch it it gets worse
Beat you as Barc and now Scout? I’m laughing in fact @Sharp should add “Lost to Zuch” to your Accomps, you’re always champing at that

Some fire here.. I’ll give you the clit line because the idea was great. If only you’d changed right ‘up’ her clit to right ‘on’ her clit we’d be in business...

Even still, a nice drop from scout but Zuch had too much fire here.

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Old 12-03-2020, 07:06 AM   #10
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Scotic had cell block. Forbidden/for Biden was a terrible attempt.

Zuch had body of the month, scouts honor was cool but how do you stick fingers up a clit? You can’t penetrate a clit so that killed the bar for me. Safe around her parts was nice and bad rash was flames. Very consistent verse.

Zuch got it.
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Old 12-04-2020, 05:35 AM   #11
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Ima fire hooks into ye head and cheek. Start well
Leave the top of your i more crooked than the medellín cartels
start well is an awkward end rhyme. that aside, this is a really cool concept. punch is well done but the way you set this up is weird.
Just because im white hot, the site wants to question/sway
But my alias is forbidden...like your illiterate wife on election day
this is a stretch to me. even being illiterate, she's not writing in Biden's name, she's checking a box. stuttering might have worked tho
Your mugshot is a hoax. Alll phoney
Last time you had a cell block, everything 'cept your nose stopped growing
this is cool
That thing's its own animal, and fucking massive
Your face came with a longer nose manual than bucky lasek
i also liked this
Gats loaded and I brought the big steel ..
I'll make sure jamie hears Matt Groening if I draw the springfield
this is clever
I hope upn sides w me instead of this 'behind the scenes' loser
Tweaking User's lines..looking like he does lines with tweaking users
meh. too simple for me
You may be a cool guy, but you have pull why? Lame
You're involved in enough inside jobs to become a full time maid;
ok. a little light
Vote for yourself, recycle & make mags that openly sway a lot...
There's reservations when calling you out 'cause no one will take your spot
ok
But everything I'm involved in HAS to be clicked, guy..
So this'll be more widespread than your asshole if ya actually did time
not a fan
Quotes: medallion, cell block, bucky lasek, groening, reservations
Close: forbidden, inside jobs

Opener was cool, really liked nose manual and simpsons concepts. A couple misses but this was definitely a nice verse.

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Killed by Ajax and now me? Give us a different challenger
You’re UPN’s “Body of the Month” but trust me we ain’t running a fitness calendar
ok. light to me.
I asked your girl what she wants from me, the timing was lit
Bitch said “Scout’s honor”, then she shoved my 3-finger salute right up her clit
not feeling this
I’ve been between those legs, the stank is killin’ me
It ain’t safe around her parts, there’s a lot of gang activity
you're supposed to do this sniff test first bruh. this is ok, still kinda simple
Dismember your body, Funeral homes know I’m cold with the toolie
I’ll deliver your parts to the director like I just replaced your role in a movie
did we really just do two parts flips in a row? i like this one a little better, but they steal impact from each other
I’m an Eastside boy, Detroit had me growing up thug
You NEVER repped a set, but this banger will have you throwing up blood
thought this was cool
That fucked up head of yours is in a trippy state
Dual heaters, ‘troop leader’, the boy Scout is getting touched in different ways
this is nice
STOP editing your shit, I’m custom with stick work
Your verse reminds me of a bad rash, every time you touch it it gets worse
this is fresh
Beat you as Barc and now Scout? I’m laughing in fact
@Sharp should add “Lost to Zuch” to your Accomps, you’re always champing at that
i'm probably missing personals or something, this is light to me
“Dope” “this is awesome!” Trust me she’s sick of caring
That’s not a battle review by Jamie, this time it’s your obituary
this is ok
Quotes: throwing up blood, touched, bad rash, obituary
Close: Body of the Month, gang activity, funeral director

This is a nice verse. I thought you started slow but you had a string of heaters in the second half. People have been doing pieces/parts bars to death for the last few weeks, putting two in one verse is a kinda overkill to me.

Vote: Scout So I should probably vote for Zuch and not hear shit from people but I have them both with 7 mentions and Scout has more quotes. obituary and reservations were light quotes for me so I could see going either way on those, so I just counted them both. In terms of creativity medallin, bucky lasek, and groening were stand outs vs bad rash for Zuch. Zuch has better wording, but simpler concepts. It might be a style preference thing (or not liking the parts bars), Zuch you're a dope writer but I think he got you.
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That thing's its own animal, and fucking massive
Your face came with a longer nose manual than bucky lasek
Gats loaded and I brought the big steel ..
I'll make sure jamie hears Matt Groening if I draw the springfield
I hope upn sides w me instead of this 'behind the scenes' loser
Tweaking User's lines..looking like he does lines with tweaking users

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Killed by Ajax and now me? Give us a different challenger
You’re UPN’s “Body of the Month” but trust me we ain’t running a fitness calendar
Dismember your body, Funeral homes know I’m cold with the toolie
I’ll deliver your parts to the director like I just replaced your role in a movie
I’m an Eastside boy, Detroit had me growing up thug
You NEVER repped a set, but this banger will have you throwing up blood
That fucked up head of yours is in a trippy state
Dual heaters, ‘troop leader’, the boy Scout is getting touched in different ways


Close and best battle of the 3 total I've read since being back. Just came down to quotes.

V/ Zuch
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Old 12-05-2020, 09:14 PM   #13
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Scout -

Your mugshot is a hoax. Alll phoney
Last time you had a cell block, everything 'cept your nose stopped growing
That thing's its own animal, and fucking massive
Your face came with a longer nose manual than bucky lasek
I hope upn sides w me instead of this 'behind the scenes' loser
Tweaking User's lines..looking like he does lines with tweaking users
Vote for yourself, recycle & make mags that openly sway a lot...
There's reservations when calling you out 'cause no one will take your spot


These were all cool, Bucky Lasek was probably my favorite line. Groening and medellin lines were either pronounced incorrectly or worded poorly, so i left those off. Creatively, solid ideas though.

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I asked your girl what she wants from me, the timing was lit
Bitch said “Scout’s honor”, then she shoved my 3-finger salute right up her clit
Dismember your body, Funeral homes know I’m cold with the toolie
I’ll deliver your parts to the director like I just replaced your role in a movie
That fucked up head of yours is in a trippy state
Dual heaters, ‘troop leader’, the boy Scout is getting touched in different ways
STOP editing your shit, I’m custom with stick work
Your verse reminds me of a bad rash, every time you touch it it gets worse

Solid verse. Enjoyed the above, director line is dope, rash was a funny cuz its true moment. Overall, good stuff.

Good battle guys, going with Zuch. He had LOTB for me, and his misses weren't as bad as Scout's were.

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