12-01-2020, 12:21 PM | #1 |
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WEEK 9: Zuch 7-1 VS Scout 3-1 ZUCH WINS
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12-01-2020, 12:34 PM | #2 |
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We can do 20 if you want. Or 16.
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12-01-2020, 05:08 PM | #3 |
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16's good
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12-02-2020, 03:21 PM | #4 |
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Lets dance, matty
Make sure jamies watching Ima fire hooks into ye head and cheek. Start well Leave the top of your i more crooked than the medellín cartels Just because im white hot, the site wants to question/sway But my alias is forbidden...like your illiterate wife on election day Your mugshot is a hoax. Alll phoney Last time you had a cell block, everything 'cept your nose stopped growing That thing's its own animal, and fucking massive Your face came with a longer nose manual than bucky lasek Gats loaded and I brought the big steel .. I'll make sure jamie hears Matt Groening if I draw the springfield I hope upn sides w me instead of this 'behind the scenes' loser Tweaking User's lines..looking like he does lines with tweaking users You may be a cool guy, but you have pull why? Lame You're involved in enough inside jobs to become a full time maid; Vote for yourself, recycle & make mags that openly sway a lot... There's reservations when calling you out 'cause no one will take your spot But everything I'm involved in HAS to be clicked, guy.. So this'll be more widespread than your asshole if ya actually did time |
12-02-2020, 03:21 PM | #5 |
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You asked for this...
Killed by Ajax and now me? Give us a different challenger You’re UPN’s “Body of the Month” but trust me we ain’t running a fitness calendar I asked your girl what she wants from me, the timing was lit Bitch said “Scout’s honor”, then she shoved my 3-finger salute right up her clit I’ve been between those legs, the stank is killin’ me It ain’t safe around her parts, there’s a lot of gang activity Dismember your body, Funeral homes know I’m cold with the toolie I’ll deliver your parts to the director like I just replaced your role in a movie I’m an Eastside boy, Detroit had me growing up thug You NEVER repped a set, but this banger will have you throwing up blood That fucked up head of yours is in a trippy state Dual heaters, ‘troop leader’, the boy Scout is getting touched in different ways STOP editing your shit, I’m custom with stick work Your verse reminds me of a bad rash, every time you touch it it gets worse Beat you as Barc and now Scout? I’m laughing in fact @Sharp should add “Lost to Zuch” to your Accomps, you’re always champing at that “Dope” “this is awesome!” Trust me she’s sick of caring That’s not a battle review by Jamie, this time it’s your obituary Sign out thread is in the usual spot ...
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12-02-2020, 04:16 PM | #6 |
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Medallion bar u fully get but kinda corny... the Matt Groening bar was niiiiice but slightly off on pronunciation.
Zuch: scouts honor could've been good but you dont shove anything up a clit wtf are you a virgin? Jamie you dont have to deal with that. After Gang activity I knew the battle was over. Stop editing and rash was lol... superb wording as usual Director and throw up blood could be played but worded them well enough to enjoy. Scout that forbidden for Biden bar is disappointing Vote Zuch
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12-02-2020, 08:35 PM | #7 |
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Your mugshot is a hoax. Alll phoney
Last time you had a cell block, everything 'cept your nose stopped growing That thing's its own animal, and fucking massive Your face came with a longer nose manual than bucky lasek Gats loaded and I brought the big steel .. I'll make sure jamie hears Matt Groening if I draw the springfield I hope upn sides w me instead of this 'behind the scenes' loser Tweaking User's lines..looking like he does lines with tweaking users Vs Killed by Ajax and now me? Give us a different challenger You’re UPN’s “Body of the Month” but trust me we ain’t running a fitness calendar I’ve been between those legs, the stank is killin’ me It ain’t safe around her parts, there’s a lot of gang activity I’m an Eastside boy, Detroit had me growing up thug You NEVER repped a set, but this banger will have you throwing up blood STOP editing your shit, I’m custom with stick work Your verse reminds me of a bad rash, every time you touch it it gets worse Beat you as Barc and now Scout? I’m laughing in fact @Sharp should add “Lost to Zuch” to your Accomps, you’re always champing at that V/zuch he was more consistent. Scout had some heat with the groening bar but couple misses that were interesting
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12-02-2020, 11:17 PM | #8 |
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Vote - Zuch
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12-03-2020, 04:14 AM | #9 |
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Your mugshot is a hoax. Alll phoney
Last time you had a cell block, everything 'cept your nose stopped growing Gats loaded and I brought the big steel .. I'll make sure jamie hears Matt Groening if I draw the springfield I hope upn sides w me instead of this 'behind the scenes' loser Tweaking User's lines..looking like he does lines with tweaking users Cool verse with a dope middle Vs Killed by Ajax and now me? Give us a different challenger You’re UPN’s “Body of the Month” but trust me we ain’t running a fitness calendar I asked your girl what she wants from me, the timing was lit Bitch said “Scout’s honor”, then she shoved my 3-finger salute right up her clit I’ve been between those legs, the stank is killin’ me It ain’t safe around her parts, there’s a lot of gang activity Dismember your body, Funeral homes know I’m cold with the toolie I’ll deliver your parts to the director like I just replaced your role in a movie STOP editing your shit, I’m custom with stick work Your verse reminds me of a bad rash, every time you touch it it gets worse Beat you as Barc and now Scout? I’m laughing in fact @Sharp should add “Lost to Zuch” to your Accomps, you’re always champing at that Some fire here.. I’ll give you the clit line because the idea was great. If only you’d changed right ‘up’ her clit to right ‘on’ her clit we’d be in business... Even still, a nice drop from scout but Zuch had too much fire here. Vote - Zuch |
12-03-2020, 07:06 AM | #10 |
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Scotic had cell block. Forbidden/for Biden was a terrible attempt.
Zuch had body of the month, scouts honor was cool but how do you stick fingers up a clit? You can’t penetrate a clit so that killed the bar for me. Safe around her parts was nice and bad rash was flames. Very consistent verse. Zuch got it. |
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Quote:
Close: forbidden, inside jobs Opener was cool, really liked nose manual and simpsons concepts. A couple misses but this was definitely a nice verse. Quote:
Close: Body of the Month, gang activity, funeral director This is a nice verse. I thought you started slow but you had a string of heaters in the second half. People have been doing pieces/parts bars to death for the last few weeks, putting two in one verse is a kinda overkill to me. Vote: Scout So I should probably vote for Zuch and not hear shit from people but I have them both with 7 mentions and Scout has more quotes. obituary and reservations were light quotes for me so I could see going either way on those, so I just counted them both. In terms of creativity medallin, bucky lasek, and groening were stand outs vs bad rash for Zuch. Zuch has better wording, but simpler concepts. It might be a style preference thing (or not liking the parts bars), Zuch you're a dope writer but I think he got you. |
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12-05-2020, 07:32 PM | #12 |
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That thing's its own animal, and fucking massive
Your face came with a longer nose manual than bucky lasek Gats loaded and I brought the big steel .. I'll make sure jamie hears Matt Groening if I draw the springfield I hope upn sides w me instead of this 'behind the scenes' loser Tweaking User's lines..looking like he does lines with tweaking users vs. Killed by Ajax and now me? Give us a different challenger You’re UPN’s “Body of the Month” but trust me we ain’t running a fitness calendar Dismember your body, Funeral homes know I’m cold with the toolie I’ll deliver your parts to the director like I just replaced your role in a movie I’m an Eastside boy, Detroit had me growing up thug You NEVER repped a set, but this banger will have you throwing up blood That fucked up head of yours is in a trippy state Dual heaters, ‘troop leader’, the boy Scout is getting touched in different ways Close and best battle of the 3 total I've read since being back. Just came down to quotes. V/ Zuch |
12-05-2020, 09:14 PM | #13 |
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Scout -
Your mugshot is a hoax. Alll phoney Last time you had a cell block, everything 'cept your nose stopped growing That thing's its own animal, and fucking massive Your face came with a longer nose manual than bucky lasek I hope upn sides w me instead of this 'behind the scenes' loser Tweaking User's lines..looking like he does lines with tweaking users Vote for yourself, recycle & make mags that openly sway a lot... There's reservations when calling you out 'cause no one will take your spot These were all cool, Bucky Lasek was probably my favorite line. Groening and medellin lines were either pronounced incorrectly or worded poorly, so i left those off. Creatively, solid ideas though. Zuch - I asked your girl what she wants from me, the timing was lit Bitch said “Scout’s honor”, then she shoved my 3-finger salute right up her clit Dismember your body, Funeral homes know I’m cold with the toolie I’ll deliver your parts to the director like I just replaced your role in a movie That fucked up head of yours is in a trippy state Dual heaters, ‘troop leader’, the boy Scout is getting touched in different ways STOP editing your shit, I’m custom with stick work Your verse reminds me of a bad rash, every time you touch it it gets worse Solid verse. Enjoyed the above, director line is dope, rash was a funny cuz its true moment. Overall, good stuff. Good battle guys, going with Zuch. He had LOTB for me, and his misses weren't as bad as Scout's were. V - Zuch
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