07-25-2022, 09:22 PM | #1 |
HE / HIM / FRAC
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Wanderer vs Adverse - ADVERSE WINS
Netcees SOL Season II @Wanderer @Adverse
Week 5 Due Thursday, July 28th at Midnight PST Minimum: 8 Lines Maximum: 12 Lines 24hr ext given on request NO biting NO swaying NO feeding You MUST check in Don't edit after your opponent has posted 2nd person to post can't edit after the first vote comes in Don't be an idiot Don't use your opponent's pic unless it's a pic battle Agree on a line limit May God have mercy on your souls |
07-25-2022, 10:22 PM | #2 |
low tide in serotonin bay
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What does this make Wand? 5-6 times? Let’s make it fun
However many you want fam |
07-26-2022, 03:02 AM | #3 |
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You know !
Glad you’re well brother. Max |
07-27-2022, 07:52 AM | #5 |
HE / HIM / FRAC
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Fine if Ad allows it, but if he doesn't want to do 14, max will be 12
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07-27-2022, 11:45 AM | #7 |
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Aka short, frail and English
Yooo.. Sharp gassed you so hard coming in...turns out this frauds a poser Knew you had no chance against Aer, built like a strong gust of wind’d knock you over Damn it you squirt, you’ll never even know when the hammer gon burst Do em execution style - Sig tucked behind his ear like a mechanic at work It’s facts that Wand is a tink, but he’s also a rapist Dude’s literally forcing more same-sex relations than the Disney Corporation When I gather up the chaps, a gang of mafuckas like Dave n Orc pull up packin guns When you gather up the chaps, a gang of mafuckas pull up wearing assless ones You just text battling fam, I come mask on toting the 40 bruh No clash of policies here, it’s all anonymous when I open this boarder up I get in trouble w/ these cartridges, u just a shitty rhymer, I’ll buss ya This ain’t an act to me, while Wand a bigger bitch behind bars then Brittney Griner in Russia Mr. Fragility calling me fat!? Comedy...you ain’t even got the body of a man Irony, cuz say the word and he get instantly ripped, they’ll be calling him Shazam @Wanderer |
07-27-2022, 12:13 PM | #8 |
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Chafing & stout from the pies.. fuck drugs when u out with the guys
If there’s a demand for some powder u just apply more talc to ur thighs U unprepared mentally so that’s all it take to smash ya If u feeling Pumped in a ‘Warmed up State’ it’s bloating eating baked alaska With that flabby frame ur relationship seen no sex for months That one occasion involving a titjob was her chore to check ur breasts for lumps See I let my bitch think she the boss but she gets ignored A power struggle with ur girl is her strangling u with an extension cord Besides.. ya undeniably gay. Childish to say but shit is true Shirts vs skins and u all foreskin.. hoping some of that slips out too The streets raised me knowing if the odds aren’t stacked I come good Adverse/Mugger stand-off.. only time u ever pulled it out the bag for the hood Eat like a slobbering animal. reach for the wings & we fucking split Funny.. we seen Spit ducking me but u got everyone ducking spit |
07-27-2022, 12:37 PM | #9 |
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Adverse:
Sharp gassed you so hard coming in...turns out this frauds a poser Knew you had no chance against Aer, built like a strong gust of wind’d knock you over coolish.. shoutout Damn it you squirt, you’ll never even know when the hammer gon burst Do em execution style - Sig tucked behind his ear like a mechanic at work Good concept, you could've been even more creative here but I like it It’s facts that Wand is a tink, but he’s also a rapist Dude’s literally forcing more same-sex relations than the Disney Corporation current event, aight When I gather up the chaps, a gang of mafuckas like Dave n Orc pull up packin guns When you gather up the chaps, a gang of mafuckas pull up wearing assless ones Dave & Orc pulling up guns automatically ruined this bar for me. Funny bar though You just text battling fam, I come mask on toting the 40 bruh No clash of policies here, it’s all anonymous when I open this boarder up like it I get in trouble w/ these cartridges, u just a shitty rhymer, I’ll buss ya This ain’t an act to me, while Wand a bigger bitch behind bars then Brittney Griner in Russia alright Mr. Fragility calling me fat!? Comedy...you ain’t even got the body of a man Irony, cuz say the word and he get instantly ripped, they’ll be calling him Shazam Brought up Shazam lol.. uhh thisi bar was okay Wanderer Chafing & stout from the pies.. fuck drugs when u out with the guys If there’s a demand for some powder u just apply more talc to ur thighs alright, not sure what you're getting at.. U unprepared mentally so that’s all it take to smash ya If u feeling Pumped in a ‘Warmed up State’ it’s bloating eating baked alaska nah this is light With that flabby frame ur relationship seen no sex for months That one occasion involving a titjob was her chore to check ur breasts for lumps like the concept here See I let my bitch think she the boss but she gets ignored A power struggle with ur girl is her strangling u with an extension cord Needed a better setup. The concept is there the wording is not sufficient Besides.. ya undeniably gay. Childish to say but shit is true Shirts vs skins and u all foreskin.. hoping some of that slips out too WHAT? You hope his foreskin slips out? Man... The streets raised me knowing if the odds aren’t stacked I come good Adverse/Mugger stand-off.. only time u ever pulled it out the bag for the hood Concept there again just needed a better setup Eat like a slobbering animal. reach for the wings & we fucking split Funny.. we seen Spit ducking me but u got everyone ducking spit Aww you're having a nice meal with your opponent? Cute. Also, did you diss him on sloppily eating food? LOL nah Nice quick battle. Thanks for showing up early fellas. Some good ideas in both verses just needed some refinement. Adverse was more direct and swaggy.. had better punches here too. MVGT Adverse
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07-28-2022, 09:39 AM | #10 |
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Tie
Both vs decent and entertaining Keep up the good work |
07-29-2022, 03:22 AM | #11 |
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Sharp gassed you so hard coming in...turns out this frauds a poser
Knew you had no chance against Aer, built like a strong gust of wind’d knock you over GOOD ONE.. Damn it you squirt, you’ll never even know when the hammer gon burst Do em execution style - Sig tucked behind his ear like a mechanic at work NICE.. It’s facts that Wand is a tink, but he’s also a rapist Dude’s literally forcing more same-sex relations than the Disney Corporation THIS IS NICE.. When I gather up the chaps, a gang of mafuckas like Dave n Orc pull up packin guns When you gather up the chaps, a gang of mafuckas pull up wearing assless ones NIICE.. You just text battling fam, I come mask on toting the 40 bruh No clash of policies here, it’s all anonymous when I open this boarder up GOOD I get in trouble w/ these cartridges, u just a shitty rhymer, I’ll buss ya This ain’t an act to me, while Wand a bigger bitch behind bars then Brittney Griner in Russia GOOD Mr. Fragility calling me fat!? Comedy...you ain’t even got the body of a man Irony, cuz say the word and he get instantly ripped, they’ll be calling him Shazam GOOD ONE.. Chafing & stout from the pies.. fuck drugs when u out with the guys If there’s a demand for some powder u just apply more talc to ur thighs U unprepared mentally so that’s all it take to smash ya If u feeling Pumped in a ‘Warmed up State’ it’s bloating eating baked alaska With that flabby frame ur relationship seen no sex for months That one occasion involving a titjob was her chore to check ur breasts for lumps See I let my bitch think she the boss but she gets ignored A power struggle with ur girl is her strangling u with an extension cord Besides.. ya undeniably gay. Childish to say but shit is true Shirts vs skins and u all foreskin.. hoping some of that slips out too The streets raised me knowing if the odds aren’t stacked I come good Adverse/Mugger stand-off.. only time u ever pulled it out the bag for the hood Eat like a slobbering animal. reach for the wings & we fucking split Funny.. we seen Spit ducking me but u got everyone ducking spit LOL AT THE ENDING, GOOD WORK -- WANDERER.. REALLY NICE VERSES, GOOD WORK -- VOTE -- ADVERSE.. |
07-29-2022, 04:18 AM | #12 |
Bullying Yall Bitches.
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Damn it you squirt, you’ll never even know when the hammer gon burst
Do em execution style - Sig tucked behind his ear like a mechanic at work Vs Nothing. vote : Adverse. For staying consistent throughout that was my favorite bar of the battle. |
07-30-2022, 12:30 AM | #13 |
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wanderer’s flow was there but the effectiveness felt a lil too rushed, seen u drop wayyyyy better, powder was aight and was feeling titjob tho .. Ad had sig - liked the direction it went.. chaps was corny but funny and griner was simple but effective. A bit more firepower..
v adverse
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