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Old 08-07-2018, 12:49 PM   #1
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Old 08-07-2018, 01:27 PM   #2
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a nine, two rugers.. PLUS i got a large pump reeling..
then i'll add a ‘Stick to my Guns’ & pop-off at ur stomach.. now there’s a Gut Feeling
you're a loser, a solo failure without a lick of tag fame..
so if ur lookin ‘Fournette Wins’ you'd better work on a way to Fix a Jags Game
blow my load on ur bitch's tits once i'm topped to the brink..
leave her forced to get ‘so much off her chest’ she'll feel like she talked to a shrink
since i fucked her & slammed frame she won't say his damn name..
when i say i leave his girl Moet at night TRUST ME i don't bring her Champaign
attack like i'm in Nam bro, leave you dead and gone home..
‘Arm-extended, ready to Blow’.. have the Steel Take ya Breathe Away like a Trombone
claimin you gully.. ya right, clearly ur not good w/ the facts..
you could post-up on Rodney & STILL wouldn't have the Hood on your Back
kid’s too weak w/ flexin, top 5?! no way this geek is mentioned..
he'll have to start a ‘Riot up in Kansas’ if he wants Topeka Tension
tell em save the gun bars, i truly doubt that he assaults..
wouldn't have his ‘Shoulder Strapped w/ his Eye on some Green’ as my Caddy in Golf
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Gun a different type of big! You can hear PUN adlibs when i ring sum
Thats a dream huh..until the K Bayou like i abbreviated United Kingdom
God give him anoint...I road block his shit! When I roll up it ain't a joint
Standing over his whip, wit the light beaming over his face-that's a police checkpoint
I machete the weapon..bad dilemma! Kept it a secret, it been on a hidden agenda
It come out....the blade go in his gut---i got red showing on blue like he magenta
What you gone diss me with? Dick angles?...That gay shit you can miss me wit
The clip gone empty quick...dome shot--now Blue out his hair like a 360 Kit
Snatch his jewels if he eyeing me! Blade tucked, I grab the merch an dice silently
If he come back and return for it, I'll give him the 30--that's a refund policy
Choke you out with the wire! Then put him head first in the mat-Pile driver
Scope out..then the heat running through a canadian house--Fort McMurray Wildfire
Bloody scene what they discover! Jayz Album...I left blue prints on the cover
When i OD off the guns, u'll C Murder behind these bars like i'm Master P brother
I ain't for conversation! Shells around my chest, got me looking like a ammo station
No Twister...but when these cans flying off a pickup truck i ain't tornado chasin
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a nine, two rugers.. PLUS i got a large pump reeling..
then i'll add a ‘Stick to my Guns’ & pop-off at ur stomach.. now there’s a Gut Feeling
eiither it wasn’t worded good or I just don’t get it?
you're a loser, a solo failure without a lick of tag fame..
so if ur lookin ‘Fournette Wins’ you'd better work on a way to Fix a Jags Game
Who wrote this? Barcotic? Nah I’m playin this was alright
blow my load on ur bitch's tits once i'm topped to the brink..
leave her forced to get ‘so much off her chest’ she'll feel like she talked to a shrink
lol alright
since i fucked her & slammed frame she won't say his damn name..
when i say i leave his girl Moet at night TRUST ME i don't bring her Champaign
this is a no
attack like i'm in Nam bro, leave you dead and gone home..
‘Arm-extended, ready to Blow’.. have the Steel Take ya Breathe Away like a Trombone
pretty cool here
claimin you gully.. ya right, clearly ur not good w/ the facts..
you could post-up on Rodney & STILL wouldn't have the Hood on your Back
youd need a Rodney Hood tie in for this to work bro
kid’s too weak w/ flexin, top 5?! no way this geek is mentioned..
he'll have to start a ‘Riot up in Kansas’ if he wants Topeka Tension
this is nice, fresh wordplay done perfectly
tell em save the gun bars, i truly doubt that he assaults..
wouldn't have his ‘Shoulder Strapped w/ his Eye on some Green’ as my Caddy in Golf
nah lol


2 good
2 ok
4 misses

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Gun a different type of big! You can hear PUN adlibs when i ring sum
Thats a dream huh..until the K Bayou like i abbreviated United Kingdom
this is OK, I appreciate the cleverness but it’s nothing hard hitting
God give him anoint...I road block his shit! When I roll up it ain't a joint
Standing over his whip, wit the light beaming over his face-that's a police checkpoint
decent here, wording a bit forced in second line
I machete the weapon..bad dilemma! Kept it a secret, it been on a hidden agenda
It come out....the blade go in his gut---i got red showing on blue like he magenta
i fuck w/ this. Good punch here
What you gone diss me with? Dick angles?...That gay shit you can miss me wit
The clip gone empty quick...dome shot--now Blue out his hair like a 360 Kit
lol alright
Snatch his jewels if he eyeing me! Blade tucked, I grab the merch an dice silently
If he come back and return for it, I'll give him the 30--that's a refund policy
ahh this one had potential but I’m just not feelin how it was done here tbh
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Scope out..then the heat running through a canadian house--Fort McMurray Wildfire
Good here
Bloody scene what they discover! Jayz Album...I left blue prints on the cover
When i OD off the guns, u'll C Murder behind these bars like i'm Master P brother
Ancient shit here lol concept and wp pretty old and overused
I ain't for conversation! Shells around my chest, got me looking like a ammo station
No Twister...but when these cans flying off a pickup truck i ain't tornado chasin
lol this was cool


3 good
2 ok
1 Decent
2 misses


This was a cool battle here, can go either way but I feel like DynamiCz got it. Blue had LOTB but dyna was more consistent overall and had less misses than blue.

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a nine, two rugers.. PLUS i got a large pump reeling..
then i'll add a ‘Stick to my Guns’ & pop-off at ur stomach.. now there’s a Gut Feeling

I like this, nice

you're a loser, a solo failure without a lick of tag fame..
so if ur lookin ‘Fournette Wins’ you'd better work on a way to Fix a Jags Game

Cool

blow my load on ur bitch's tits once i'm topped to the brink..
leave her forced to get ‘so much off her chest’ she'll feel like she talked to a shrink

Lol nice

since i fucked her & slammed frame she won't say his damn name..
when i say i leave his girl Moet at night TRUST ME i don't bring her Champaign

No

attack like i'm in Nam bro, leave you dead and gone home..
‘Arm-extended, ready to Blow’.. have the Steel Take ya Breathe Away like a Trombone

Dope

claimin you gully.. ya right, clearly ur not good w/ the facts..
you could post-up on Rodney & STILL wouldn't have the Hood on your Back

Don’t get it

kid’s too weak w/ flexin, top 5?! no way this geek is mentioned..
he'll have to start a ‘Riot up in Kansas’ if he wants Topeka Tension

Lol Dope

tell em save the gun bars, i truly doubt that he assaults..
wouldn't have his ‘Shoulder Strapped w/ his Eye on some Green’ as my Caddy in Golf

Not the best bar of the battle but not bad.
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Gun a different type of big! You can hear PUN adlibs when i ring sum
Thats a dream huh..until the K Bayou like i abbreviated United Kingdom

Feel I should get it but I don’t

God give him anoint...I road block his shit! When I roll up it ain't a joint
Standing over his whip, wit the light beaming over his face-that's a police checkpoint

Coulda been better but okay

I machete the weapon..bad dilemma! Kept it a secret, it been on a hidden agenda
It come out....the blade go in his gut---i got red showing on blue like he magenta

Miss for me honestly.

What you gone diss me with? Dick angles?...That gay shit you can miss me wit
The clip gone empty quick...dome shot--now Blue out his hair like a 360 Kit

Cool

Snatch his jewels if he eyeing me! Blade tucked, I grab the merch an dice
silently
If he come back and return for it, I'll give him the 30--that's a refund policy

Nice

Choke you out with the wire! Then put him head first in the mat-Pile driver
Scope out..then the heat running through a canadian house--Fort McMurray Wildfire

Nice

Bloody scene what they discover! Jayz Album...I left blue prints on the cover
When i OD off the guns, u'll C Murder behind these bars like i'm Master P brother

Nice

I ain't for conversation! Shells around my chest, got me looking like a ammo station
No Twister...but when these cans flying off a pickup truck i ain't tornado chasin

Lol that rhyme with the refund policy and this one are awful like they almost ruin the bars how bad you rhymed.
But still this is dope
This battle was really close but I gotta give it to Blue

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you're a loser, a solo failure without a lick of tag fame..
so if ur lookin ‘Fournette Wins’ you'd better work on a way to Fix a Jags Game
attack like i'm in Nam bro, leave you dead and gone home..
‘Arm-extended, ready to Blow’.. have the Steel Take ya Breathe Away like a trombone
Very strict on quotes here, a couple could have made it thru. Rodney hood was close, idk what Topeka tension is lol. The others were alright but idk man u wrote a LOT of bars this week and this doesn't feel like 100% Blue. Still decent.

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God give him anoint...I road block his shit! When I roll up it ain't a joint
Standing over his whip, wit the light beaming over his face-that's a police checkpoint
gone diss me with? Dick angles?...That gay shit you can miss me wit
The clip gone empty quick...dome shot--now Blue out his hair like a 360 Kit

Policy and silently are not even close to rhyming, don't get the next one. C Murder played it would have had to be fire

I ain't for conversation! Shells around my chest, got me looking like a ammo station
No Twister...but when these cans flying off a pickup truck i ain't tornado chasin
That last shit was fire.

Decent battle, I don't think Blue came as hard as he should have. Maybe didn't have the time to reword a couple things. Dy wasn't str8 flames but I think he had enough here as a whole.

U know what, Blue? 1 a battle, I'm gonna check on that Topeka shit.

Na I still don't think so man, maybe if I had followed the story but there weren't enough tie ins with what I got from a Google.

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a nine, two rugers.. PLUS i got a large pump reeling..
then i'll add a ‘Stick to my Guns’ & pop-off at ur stomach.. now there’s a Gut Feeling
this was cool assuming ur trying to predict his bars
you're a loser, a solo failure without a lick of tag fame..
so if ur lookin ‘Fournette Wins’ you'd better work on a way to Fix a Jags Game
again this cool...nice wordplay but not too harsh of a line
blow my load on ur bitch's tits once i'm topped to the brink..
leave her forced to get ‘so much off her chest’ she'll feel like she talked to a shrink
lol whoa.... this ok
since i fucked her & slammed frame she won't say his damn name..
when i say i leave his girl Moet at night TRUST ME i don't bring her Champaign
ehh
attack like i'm in Nam bro, leave you dead and gone home..
‘Arm-extended, ready to Blow’.. have the Steel Take ya Breathe Away like a Trombone
dope
claimin you gully.. ya right, clearly ur not good w/ the facts..
you could post-up on Rodney & STILL wouldn't have the Hood on your Back
ehh
kid’s too weak w/ flexin, top 5?! no way this geek is mentioned..
he'll have to start a ‘Riot up in Kansas’ if he wants Topeka Tension
decent at best
tell em save the gun bars, i truly doubt that he assaults..
wouldn't have his ‘Shoulder Strapped w/ his Eye on some Green’ as my Caddy in Golf
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Gun a different type of big! You can hear PUN adlibs when i ring sum
Thats a dream huh..until the K Bayou like i abbreviated United Kingdom
dope
God give him anoint...I road block his shit! When I roll up it ain't a joint
Standing over his whip, wit the light beaming over his face-that's a police checkpoint
lol nice
I machete the weapon..bad dilemma! Kept it a secret, it been on a hidden agenda
It come out....the blade go in his gut---i got red showing on blue like he magenta
slick
What you gone diss me with? Dick angles?...That gay shit you can miss me wit
The clip gone empty quick...dome shot--now Blue out his hair like a 360 Kit
this alright
Snatch his jewels if he eyeing me! Blade tucked, I grab the merch an dice silently
If he come back and return for it, I'll give him the 30--that's a refund policy
st8
Choke you out with the wire! Then put him head first in the mat-Pile driver
Scope out..then the heat running through a canadian house--Fort McMurray Wildfire
cool bar
Bloody scene what they discover! Jayz Album...I left blue prints on the cover
When i OD off the guns, u'll C Murder behind these bars like i'm Master P brother
nah
I ain't for conversation! Shells around my chest, got me looking like a ammo station
No Twister...but when these cans flying off a pickup truck i ain't tornado chasin
rhyme scheme a tad off but this is st8


This is close. Blue went wordplay-heavy and I like your opener, trombone, and caddy bars but the rest wasn't up to the normal standard although that shrink line was wow. Dyn came with some harder lines(opener, police, magenta was fresh, wildfire was cool but some playedish/off worded concepts(policy, C murder). In the end, I'm going with Dyn for a more aggressive verse. Dope battle fellas.

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Everything but moet and Rodney

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Everything but dome and last two bars

Tight contest
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a nine, two rugers.. PLUS i got a large pump reeling..
then i'll add a ‘Stick to my Guns’ & pop-off at ur stomach.. now there’s a Gut Feeling
you're a loser, a solo failure without a lick of tag fame..
so if ur lookin ‘Fournette Wins’ you'd better work on a way to Fix a Jags Game
blow my load on ur bitch's tits once i'm topped to the brink..
leave her forced to get ‘so much off her chest’ she'll feel like she talked to a shrink
attack like i'm in Nam bro, leave you dead and gone home..
‘Arm-extended, ready to Blow’.. have the Steel Take ya Breathe Away like a Trombone
tell em save the gun bars, i truly doubt that he assaults..
wouldn't have his ‘Shoulder Strapped w/ his Eye on some Green’ as my Caddy in Golf


Gun a different type of big! You can hear PUN adlibs when i ring sum
Thats a dream huh..until the K Bayou like i abbreviated United Kingdom
I machete the weapon..bad dilemma! Kept it a secret, it been on a hidden agenda
It come out....the blade go in his gut---i got red showing on blue like he magenta
Snatch his jewels if he eyeing me! Blade tucked, I grab the merch an dice silently
If he come back and return for it, I'll give him the 30--that's a refund policy
Choke you out with the wire! Then put him head first in the mat-Pile driver
Scope out..then the heat running through a canadian house--Fort McMurray Wildfire
I ain't for conversation! Shells around my chest, got me looking like a ammo station
No Twister...but when these cans flying off a pickup truck i ain't tornado chasin


Both of these verses were mad consistent so I took it down to the highlights

I think dynamicz had the advantage of being personal, which I like better, but those bars weren't as hard as the gun bars. Blue actually changed up his angles which might have worked against him since some of the bars weren't as hard/direct as his gun bars. It's close, but I would edge to dynamicz for consistently hitting, while blue didn't quite do that for me. I liked the Rodney Hood and moet wordplay (half of text probably can't pronounce 'Moet' anyway so respect for going for it) but they didn't feel as harsh to me.

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