09-07-2017, 03:04 PM | #281 |
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I feel you wordcount right... mods wanted an example from 2cripple er sumn...
U ended up not putting down that style like you was a blunt and it was nothing Yeah them 2 bars right there were executed very efficiently They sounded like a freestyle by my boy fluid way they ended up dying suddenly Used to write raps back in the day er whatever But didnt realize you was swiss until i put some holes in you like you were cheddar Fell in love once on a date with an interpreter Said she liked a challenger my price gold hers was long jon silver Long after she told me a story one about her favorite pony She aint read it right though cause all it was she took from me I read sometimes though became lost outside of flow Her seed shed sowe i cant know why but it still aint joe I guess because her verse was too incomplete I had to pass her by thats when she met my boy pete I thought cypher threads were substantial and traverse Guess it was just my kitten an her little brown purse She aint look deep into the story wasnt her first Shes written 30 others they aint sposed to be conversed So she took her time whatever had something else to give Said her friend was a painter yeah and lied about where he lives I took them bars with me even if i wasnt going to heavan She popped by often but just to get to and from the local seven eleven Cause I live by a settlement locals and shit getting about Things sometime begin to look underground They deep trying to rob you of ya thought All ya lines battle with plot audio forum underneath dalmation spots I can dub mixes i do keep a deck i guess its just im honest yo Cats down with the ham but yall aint give a damn this aint ya best flow Dont know i give up cause bars are hard You give up u aint even own a tree that got bark
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09-08-2017, 07:00 PM | #282 |
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just shaking off this dust it is more than enough to make cake boys fuss
you talk such and such but it ain't sufficient enough to truly bust I am the element of exaction which adolescent are seeking the extraction you small distraction... I'll continue later... no time.. u still a hater. |
09-09-2017, 10:00 AM | #283 |
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Wow man that was impressive for real kid
And i aint the best but i still aint complaining like a bitch Yo i know i reply as much as i can in this thread But just like new jersey basketball im nothing but net Yeah i guess i could quote you or try to get more complex with my flow But just like some speedbump im going take this real slow I got standards to be honest though im not picky g Just kinda feel played out like a studio in the hiphop industry Guess ill never get a break My pops used to tell me he needed to raise me right until his concious was erased He forgot how to keep his temper under control Thats when he realized my life had barely time to unfold I learned quickly how to survive in a world so cold Even when i wasnt growing my mind was still getting old I mean things just became harder and harder And just like jesus christ i gave my life as a martyr Guess i got loads a shit to charter but still aint going be no yeast to ya lager You could call my lines appetizing way this a diner and im serving u some starters Guess i could go on and on But my defense is so ill my only option left is to prolong Like a thriller im killing yall in suspense Fit u in this present tense since nothing worse then dealing with stress Gonna take a guess i have no idea how to end this Next time ill leave you gasping though cause this verse left you breathless... Yeahhh
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09-11-2017, 07:33 PM | #284 |
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I'm just representing to scratch an itch
time goes on on I ain't trying to be the one snoozing in no ditch I pitch my presentation of vocab intellect n skillz you pick reaking of the fragments of ill prescripts Altering chemistry formulating patterns you're thirsting to sip while gaining insight on realities grip .... I'll stop at this... Sincerely, The ILL Misfit... Last edited by Master Rock; 09-11-2017 at 07:36 PM. |
09-12-2017, 01:12 PM | #285 |
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Yo im so unsure of why this verse was so hard to create
Instead im going give you a leason why people is so fake u aint understand the subject though Cause im killing young one slow like a bunch of crow Say ya ill and you can go deep with ya man trip But just like black ice yo this cat aint have no bars he can manage to flip You can sit there and bob but you dont know why he just stuck in his home Thisll be a landslide though way i gotta keep heads afloat Got ya like a river way i keep a verse that aint lack a scope Thought he finished strong way he left ya covered in bodyshots Yeah yo forget it bro those lines all sounded prewritten though Stacking paper i just still aint got any bread to playdough
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09-13-2017, 01:36 PM | #286 |
Significance over Purpose
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My mind can't put perfect thoughts or words together
Perfect letters, birds n feathers Nouns, verbs which at this point ain't worth the pleasure Cotton Swabs! Ovaries, chocolate pies & mannequins Damn, again I don't know where this goes, flies...i'm panicking Uber ratings, panda paws, a much inflated santa clause Crowd funded midget tossing waiting for the fans applause Camera crawls, poodle tails, octopus with noodle nails Sex with every manatee, or with what the mood entails
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09-20-2017, 09:32 PM | #287 |
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Let the neurons spark
providing illumination for those consumed in the dark the formulation of my thoughts.. the effect brought disastrous creation composed art capturing the naive who ought of acknowledged my passion from yapping in disorderly fashion I be the action beat jumping boombapping speaker smashing quit clashing unless ur in need of a disciplined lashing time out redirect this is simply my introspect Directing the scene lucid be the dream float on injecting addictives leaving fiends. |
10-25-2017, 03:11 PM | #288 |
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Now that the idiots are done, J must return.
There nights are lost and days become a blur. Action takes place and change must occur. Blatant rituals of fake habitual is gone. Now I thank those who pay witness to the beyond. Effigy blaze as I temper these blades Marksmanship that remembers each face. To make the cut and prolong this pain. Or change it up and put the bomb in place. Disarm the strange and continue about my day. Rhymes formulate quicker & leave no trace. The pen is mightier better believe the page This is compost given growth to lost folks. Sacrifice wherever you & your cross goes. Where raunch flows free inside a boxed post. Dial 0 to be connected to the matrix. A world further dissected from the basics. A garden hose stretched out to wet the appetite. A lawnmower to send you to the end of the afterlife. If the black snake moan there's nothing to gain. I'm tired of these motherfuckers on this plane.
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11-21-2017, 02:12 PM | #289 |
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I'm calling this post IP address
I'm going pull out a gat and aim it at your forehead You a dam in distress or someone under a lot of pressure Hard to boil that shit down to the compounds cause i ain't even remember Gotta thread to point out but now your going to have to wait In fact u stupid go ahead write this and post it with the date I ain't even prepare this writing correct Cause now I'm unsure who I should redirect Am I perfect am I a dog do I automate my presence Haven't studied and forgot all my lessons I give up anyways Left him confused under his own lab inside a cave Guess I ain't got no time left All I can dream about is a girl with a body but no head Gotta take a guess Threw so many rights im just going to hit the x
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11-22-2017, 08:04 PM | #290 |
Don't believe the hype
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Popcorn peanut punch
Lobster donut dinner dunk Heliocentric earth oblate Oceans of lemonade Concentrate Sand castle empires vouchsafed Some say it's neophyte I say neonate
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12-03-2017, 12:59 AM | #291 |
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Calibration deliberated over lunch
Egor flow with the shoulder hunch. Boast for what, boats for sluts. Rhyme nonsense, get ya poster up. My yolks are done, sunny side up. Clint Eastwood if sonny rides up. Catch the thumper, no bunny type stuff. Once he ride up he better play boy You splash but I send a wave boy. Better switch or go invest in Gameboy. Hold the flame like NBA Jam. Drop rhymes like you invest in great spam. Got a pen hand that doesn't delay..damn. What was I going to say next fam? I'm the Apex man spraying insect cans That repel them & your same sex plans. Antonio Banderas eating a taquito Spent my last 89 cents on a burrito. Banged a milf down at the blockbuster A pair of 60s bball shorts, the long socked wonder...
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12-09-2017, 08:31 AM | #292 |
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Lol couple posts couldn't wait to exacerbate
You some hips but they forgot to shake Yo I could write anything Still going be better than whatever u explain ya shrinks Yo u suck homedog Might as well order me a slice way you walking all the way home Yo I ain't need to explain Been through so much still trying to remain Yo I put one in ya brain Way ya tracks so whack I had to contemplate Just for a sec or two Cause there be rules like when u bend over to the ya shoes It's called the limit kid Guess I could indulge guess i forgot how to binge... You a clip but it ain't ever empty I got ya bitch feeling lonely way I left her for a machete...
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12-10-2017, 12:15 AM | #293 |
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My minutes low on my phone bill.
I need WIFI at my home still. writers getting held against they own will. bunch of dreamers that dont kill. choking on their own pills, so ill... pouring that syrup, some more shit to stir up got them tweeting like a bird does facebooking to get their daily word from... Hiphopdx, or some shit like double X L whatever you need to say you up on what sells does this dude from soundcloud do the job? does that tell what flow to use or not. go with a quick one, two & then I bounce put that on a ounce, what is this shit about? where is this shit going, buddy hell if I know doesnt it look so swell when I flow. I know, I know, it makes you jealous, I know. but thats how the party starts, the crowd roars gotta move this motherfucker outdoors. watch when I drop, they dont give a fuck about yours... thats how the game go if you on the same flow. if you can or cant though, come get your love. but you dont want to owe J, I dont fit that glove... what....I said you dont want to owe J... I dont fit that glove...
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12-10-2017, 05:05 AM | #294 |
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j you getting better bro on the real
ya writing feels like a contract way Im keeping it sealed yo I know you got some skills and you can write well but its funny cause that whole verse was written on a shell im trying to give ya some props im trying to say you got game but hows I supposed to respect somebody when they just a little claim for real though redirect ya spits give us something with some substance I know I aint read much I know I should take a second glance but im going move on ive had enough of reading ya spits j gonna keep you harboured though for a minute like this was a dock on a bay... and im out trip going climb straight to the top you a mountain but aint got nothing dope to devise cause j go out on a flop..
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12-13-2017, 01:00 AM | #295 |
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If I want the cut up check how I rush up.
let them hips get touched up, you know whats up? I could tell you about the first thing that comes up. put the record on & her move like she want what..? got that green 1up, dropping shells on the party. puff on that what, what? bring a well to the party wish well to the party, look how you felt at the party. & you felt upon me...but I blow out like I vape bitch your mom told me I should watch my language... if that shit aint nice then you shouldnt say shit. Im looking like I made it, burning out this atmosphere get your cry baby ass back in here... I roost like King Cock hanging like King Kong. you comparing Serena Williams to Forrest Gump ping pong.. let me get my drink on, go get your sink on. karaoke sing song...rolling up getting my rink on. thats what my drinks on, karaoke sing song... with my pimp cup like Lil Jon.. thats what I put my wisdom on... but now I gotta live by the system huh? better save the rest for rent & get along. no way I can do the same shit tomorrow... what is this about? is it the car load. in the clown car...
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12-20-2017, 07:12 PM | #296 |
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Come get your feathers ruffled
I call them 10's a bundle. You live with a sense of struggle That pretends to bubble. I see you, getting bent & humble. Holding your own breath, it's trouble. I bang bang boogie. While slanging cookies. Watch me hang like loogies Puffing on that hoobastank I'm the big bird you roosters ain't Mad cause with the words I used to paint. Feud with fakes & wear Punky Brewster capes Made outta blankets & embroidered towels Y'all still need to void your bowels Get with the times and avoid the vowels. Just imagine the freedom boys allowed. But y'all looking like oysters now. So let's get it cracking Stephen Hawking. Or play it down because I know you need an option. I been busting walls down, they need some caulking
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12-29-2017, 05:15 PM | #297 |
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My Cinderella danced barefoot
over broken glass As Humpty Dumpty seeped eggnog from his opened head, while the frog turned prince was asleep When he croaked in bed I hope, he at least, found peace with his troubled past. "... see, there's a Beauty in the Beast, he just needs a bath", Said the Big Bad Wolf to his ethics class. Look Hook sent a message in a bottle that I never read and now it's lost, boy .. ala Peter Pan. Yo, I'm a snobbish alcoholic I like my mascoto red and huffing oxygen is carci°no°genic when you're Aquaman Nah ... I'm really just a comic that forgot to laugh and that's a lazy entendre for my fans and Stans. GOTdamn, man, I think I need a Hand and a standing ovation for my favorite band. Saw John Snow getting toasty in the South of France while I stood upon the Mountain top and surveyed the land. It's crazy, fam ... How everyone's a critic of my dope, guess I'm Breaking Bad ... I'm so HBO when I post, -- that's no basic plan ... I let the draco blow like sopranos at tomato stands Marlon Brando with a 'fro and a Native tan "I sent a Wire to ya folks ... it's like 80 grand and told Proposition Joe what he didn't know about the Method Man" I roll with Marlo smokin Marlboros in an ambulance and keep a bando full of bones for the voodoo jam! ... my hoodoo can ... make u Hoola hoop through A ring of fire in the Zulu sands An ancient empire that is too adavanced For modern-day humans and their stupid Klans "Excuse me, Pam. I think I use to be your lover in another life and Brutha Man was the husband of your blood cousin's wife" So fuck yo baggage I got luggage and my shit is twice the life time supply they allowed on flights I lug this ball and chain like a symbol of my pride a simple sigil meant to visualize I ain't livin' right! ... and so I type. Last edited by ACTIVATE SELF; 12-29-2017 at 05:20 PM. |
12-30-2017, 01:55 AM | #298 |
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The concepts stumble in with a glass of kool aid.
work hard, tool raise while I continue to move weight. Weirdo with grin walking round with some toothpaste what do you say? off the top with the toupee. you where poop lay, plastic bag in the amusement park. you can find me where you usually arent. this is where you & me part, the views Im beyond. the tombs of the lost that lurk with the rude remarks who knew what route we on? squeeze my juices on. this is how you respond, spread joy & bring through the ganj sing like the rooster...dawg, whom am I? kung fu in the kumite. is this what they usually say? you can hoot hoot away, owl show you some shit. more kicks than a drum kit, mosh pit jump in... the more I ponder, the more you gon see duck shit. hoes posing with duck lips, who else you know that does this? better than what is but holding the sack like Saint Nick too fat so I break bricks send em down like take this... celebrate a white christmas with this himalyan mix. if they nose gon drip over these lines its how I say it. I forgot where I was going to end this now, aint that some shit? sitting in the bathroom with 2 squares of toilet paper. sorry I had to spoil it this way dear...
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01-01-2018, 02:45 AM | #299 |
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Once again am here back on the trend
Freeze your whole system with the rap that I send These rappers invade so I got to contend In this stage I am not your friend Blaze you with flames and that is your end The lirics I creat cause your back to bend Make you stoop the lowest you can Imediately intrude and possess a man So good you are probably obsessed with the clan Always alone and totally object to your plan You can't do it like this I come through the abyss Eventhough they are doomed they persist So I am the dude who assist Directing the masses in a skillfull way Even all the bosses and putifull astray After facing this they are diminished in a Tray Sparked and then smoked like some cigarettes Shots so letal they are destroying the sillouette |
01-05-2018, 01:45 PM | #300 |
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Suckers are feeling wet, not knowing who they dealing with.
see that banana clip? you dont want me to start peeling it. Im too broad for structure, you too broad so.....fuck her. an industrial sucker built off of nonsense and problematic wonder. another reason to say that none of yall can compare to I. optometrist theories that compete so well & cant share a mind. metamorphosis concealed in a shell of ones former life. get exposed & prosper, get exposed & pop ya. how are you gonna deal with this exposure partna? the duel wielding, that leaves it all to the conscious type like imagine how we continue in this obnoxious lie. the toxic type that suck the fun out of every room anywho. Im the one who holds clout in every tomb. leaving you dancing with that blink just like betty boop you suckers will get sauced quicker than spaghetti soup
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