08-04-2017, 08:13 PM | #1 |
ghost in the matrix
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Fucka rhymescheme
Crush a perc down
Snort a line up I figure you figured that I was doin fine huh? That I been working steady just trying ta Get my money high enough to escape the prison that binds us. No luck tho I been spending penny's to put petrol in the truck bro. You think habits that are this ingrained Are gonna leave me now like I flipped my brain To it's off position? I'll cough this instant An I'll bet you my mom's prescription That I'll hack up 4 percs and 2 vikes on the wall in the kitchen! I got lawless visions mixed with Awful convictions Fucked up beyond recognition fallin in the halls cuz I'm judging the wrong dimensions In each step I'm 1 deep breath away from hittin this peak This death. So peep this mess I'm too deep to be depressed So I keep one P to sleep and regress I mean, if I treat these keys like seeds at these depths I'll never have weed to beat the weak breaths. So fuck your opinion I don't mean to be step Daddy to a kid that needs me to be less. I'm tryna be grateful but the peeps are gettin left Behind for the moment while I prove that D's the best.
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08-04-2017, 09:28 PM | #2 |
White Earl
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Dope
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08-25-2017, 11:46 PM | #4 |
Saul Paul
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caught that fuckin flow with grace dog, which I can appreciate. Shit's nice. Introspective and mos def a good read.
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08-26-2017, 09:59 AM | #5 |
Shrewd as evearthed
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lmao not sure why i was tagged but this was dope
i used to write with this 'free-flowing' format myself many moons ago few spots where the flow could have been tightened up many and the line lengths shortened, but kudos best ive read from you in a minute
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09-10-2017, 04:26 AM | #6 |
death warmed over
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This was alright i guess.... wasnt bothered with the subjec5t matter though in all honesty
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