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05-14-2018, 11:45 AM
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WK2: Enbombz 1-0 vs. Infiltrate 0-0 - Infiltrate WINS!!
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05-14-2018, 05:11 PM
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05-15-2018, 06:39 AM
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Yeh 10-12. Match whoever drops first.
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05-19-2018, 12:33 AM
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05-19-2018, 04:17 AM
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05-19-2018, 08:02 AM
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they say your elite now, but its over simpistic, an expression
the truth is being reduced to tiers, only makes you think of your depression you'd get overwhelmed, hope for help, tell yourself your Not a bitch g Then hide in a quiet place with a blunt, your just a lame ass John krazinsky I'll hop over the pond, once I start throwing you gonna die bro "I'll see you on the other side" yes i'm quoting shit from your suicide note The tags had you riled, u know you mad don't try to front kid Took it on the Chin so bad you'd swear you got tagged by machida's front kick Already got eyes on you, another so called king'll get toppled I'm the guy pulling the strings to lift your frame like a ship in a bottle how you even raked so high? Now my semi re writing the order What i seen Isreal suspect, so its about time someone light up this boarder Last edited by Enbombz; 05-19-2018 at 06:08 PM. |
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05-19-2018, 07:13 PM
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05-19-2018, 08:41 PM
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UK huh?
My price went up recently, 100 bucks mean ur stock can drop Minnow me money while ur one to get ate by this Big Fish Across the Pond Cuzz i got US weapons for this Brit faggot, I'm cookin w/ flair.. Wave the Flag singin Star Spangled Banner as Rockets have Bombz Bursting in Air Aim the machine at your squad, i'll take ya life & triumph My Tom Sizemore bodies up & leave the scene lookin like Saving Private Ryan This loss # 2. My Quick 1-2 punch'll blatantly end em.. 1 LightBox Session put En to sleep on schedule, u'd think it'd reset Circadian Rhythm Brought a cam to ur wifey, she showed alll ass t'il it blind me.. Call it a BubbleTape. Bitch Stripped Down & let the kid snack like shit in the 90s Boy you're a sci fi geek. who NEVERS leaves his crib for weeks, see Endors stay shut.. while he inside watchin Return of the Jedi battles on Repeat |
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05-19-2018, 11:44 PM
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they say your elite now, but its over simpistic, an expression the truth is being reduced to tiers, only makes you think of your depression played, not a good flip you'd get overwhelmed, hope for help, tell yourself your Not a bitch g Then hide in a quiet place with a blunt, your just a lame ass John krazinsky opposite of ur opener, pretty damn creative. fresh concept, wording couldve ben a bit better but this was still above average I'll hop over the pond, once I start throwing you gonna die bro "I'll see you on the other side" yes i'm quoting shit from your suicide note decent The tags had you riled, u know you mad don't try to front kid Took it on the Chin so bad you'd swear you got tagged by machida's front kick chin is mad played n this didnt have a good enough flip to make it nice. kudos for trying to incorporate a recent fight but u still really only used chin as ur concept Already got eyes on you, another so called king'll get toppled I'm the guy pulling the strings to lift your frame like a ship in a bottle dope how you even raked so high? Now my semi re writing the order What i seen Isreal suspect, so its about time someone light up this boarder another israel wp? this was played way b4 it being used twice in the same week. the other usage had a tie in that saved it, which unfortunately this one lacked. miss 2 gd punches 1 jab 3 misses vs Quote:
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05-20-2018, 02:21 AM
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they say your elite now, but its over simpistic, an expression
the truth is being reduced to tiers, only makes you think of your depression I just recently saw this flip done better, forget by who, but a miss for me you'd get overwhelmed, hope for help, tell yourself your Not a bitch g Then hide in a quiet place with a blunt, your just a lame ass John krazinsky yup I'll hop over the pond, once I start throwing you gonna die bro "I'll see you on the other side" yes i'm quoting shit from your suicide note just ok The tags had you riled, u know you mad don't try to front kid Took it on the Chin so bad you'd swear you got tagged by machida's front kick I dont see a flip on chin, but the bar itself hit for me Already got eyes on you, another so called king'll get toppled I'm the guy pulling the strings to lift your frame like a ship in a bottle simple but effective how you even raked so high? Now my semi re writing the order What i seen Isreal suspect, so its about time someone light up this boarder ya, second isreal play, thought bleak did it better, miss My price went up recently, 100 bucks mean ur stock can drop Minnow me money while ur one to get ate by this Big Fish Across the Pond just ok, had to google this Cuzz i got US weapons for this Brit faggot, I'm cookin w/ flair.. Wave the Flag singin Star Spangled Banner as Rockets have Bombz Bursting in Air doppppe Aim the machine at your squad, i'll take ya life & triumph My Tom Sizemore bodies up & leave the scene lookin like Saving Private Ryan this was nice, coo wp w/ the movie tie in This loss # 2. My Quick 1-2 punch'll blatantly end em.. 1 LightBox Session put En to sleep on schedule, u'd think it'd reset Circadian Rhythm even after another google search, didn't like this Brought a cam to ur wifey, she showed alll ass t'il it blind me.. Call it a BubbleTape. Bitch Stripped Down & let the kid snack like shit in the 90s lol, decent Boy you're a sci fi geek. who NEVERS leaves his crib for weeks, see Endors stay shut.. while he inside watchin Return of the Jedi battles on Repeat fks w/ it I got inf with the edge here. He had LOTB for me w/ the star spangled banner, and both had same number of misses. Good battle, mvgt/ inf |
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05-20-2018, 12:39 PM
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they say your elite now, but its over simpistic, an expression
the truth is being reduced to tiers, only makes you think of your depression Decent opener I'll hop over the pond, once I start throwing you gonna die bro "I'll see you on the other side" yes i'm quoting shit from your suicide note Nice here Already got eyes on you, another so called king'll get toppled I'm the guy pulling the strings to lift your frame like a ship in a bottle Dope how you even raked so high? Now my semi re writing the order What i seen Isreal suspect, so its about time someone light up this boarder Ehh played, but still worded nice ------- Cuzz i got US weapons for this Brit faggot, I'm cookin w/ flair.. Wave the Flag singin Star Spangled Banner as Rockets have Bombz Bursting in Air Dope Aim the machine at your squad, i'll take ya life & triumph My Tom Sizemore bodies up & leave the scene lookin like Saving Private Ryan Nice This loss # 2. My Quick 1-2 punch'll blatantly end em.. 1 LightBox Session put En to sleep on schedule, u'd think it'd reset Circadian Rhythm Dope Boy you're a sci fi geek. who NEVERS leaves his crib for weeks, see Endors stay shut.. while he inside watchin Return of the Jedi battles on Repeat Nasty Dope battle! I'm going with Inf on this one. Bombz had lines that hit, but Inf lines was hitting and applying pressure. Shit was a dope read frfr props on both ends. V-Inf
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05-20-2018, 07:24 PM
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05-20-2018, 07:30 PM
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they say your elite now, but its over simpistic, an expression
the truth is being reduced to tiers, only makes you think of your depression (Tear/tier is a very basic flip. I like the personal touch to it but it didn’t elevate it much. Not bad but I thought it was elementary) you'd get overwhelmed, hope for help, tell yourself your Not a bitch g Then hide in a quiet place with a blunt, your just a lame ass John krazinsky (Had to look this one up but it checks out. Not bad) I'll hop over the pond, once I start throwing you gonna die bro "I'll see you on the other side" yes i'm quoting shit from your suicide note (Lol I liked this line. Funny and I liked the concept) The tags had you riled, u know you mad don't try to front kid Took it on the Chin so bad you'd swear you got tagged by machida's front kick (Decent. Like your opener, the flip is very elementary but I like the personal touch to it) Already got eyes on you, another so called king'll get toppled I'm the guy pulling the strings to lift your frame like a ship in a bottle (Lmao I had no idea wtf this meant til I YouTubed putting a ship in a bottle. Had no idea that’s how you do it - didn’t care to know either lol but whatever - learn something new every day. Good line though. The flip works perfect) how you even raked so high? Now my semi re writing the order What i seen Isreal suspect, so its about time someone light up this boarder (Cool closer. Once again the personal touch elevated the bar. One or two more tie ins coulda helped made it hit even harder.) My price went up recently, 100 bucks mean ur stock can drop Minnow me money while ur one to get ate by this Big Fish Across the Pond (This was pretty good. The minnow wp was clever. Punch didn’t hit that hard as hard to me but still a good line.) Cuzz i got US weapons for this Brit faggot, I'm cookin w/ flair.. Wave the Flag singin Star Spangled Banner as Rockets have Bombz Bursting in Air (Took a knee on this bar Kaepernick style to protest Zelph brutalizing niggas. This wasnt too crazy to me but solid. The phrases ‘wave the flag’ ‘star spangled banner’ and ‘in air’ didn’t really have a tie in...like there was no second meaning that tied into shooting Enbombz. I didn’t like the concept though and that’s a solid name flip. This line landed imo) Aim the machine at your squad, i'll take ya life & triumph My Tom Sizemore bodies up & leave the scene lookin like Saving Private Ryan (I liked this. The wordplay was good, the punch was there, and all the subtle tie ins made this a good line.) This loss # 2. My Quick 1-2 punch'll blatantly end em.. 1 LightBox Session put En to sleep on schedule, u'd think it'd reset Circadian Rhythm (This is good writing. The reference might be too obscure but then ‘light box session’, and ‘end to sleep’ flip is pretty good.) Brought a cam to ur wifey, she showed alll ass t'il it blind me.. Call it a BubbleTape. Bitch Stripped Down & let the kid snack like shit in the 90s (I didn’t catch this reference.) Boy you're a sci fi geek. who NEVERS leaves his crib for weeks, see Endors stay shut.. while he inside watchin Return of the Jedi battles on Repeat (En doors was a pretty slick name flip/wp and you set up the punch well) Excellent battle hear. Two good pens for on display. Enbombz had the better and harsher angles and I thought your personals hit a little harder because of that. Inf’s angles weren’t as harsh and were more on the humorous side. However, inf had the better pen imo. His wp and punches just came off more polished and clever. Imo the deciding factor was Infs punches just landed harder. Mvgt: Inf |
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05-21-2018, 05:15 AM
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they say your elite now, but its over simpistic, an expression
the truth is being reduced to tiers, only makes you think of your depression alright you'd get overwhelmed, hope for help, tell yourself your Not a bitch g Then hide in a quiet place with a blunt, your just a lame ass John Krazinsky wasnt feelin I'll hop over the pond, once I start throwing you gonna die bro "I'll see you on the other side" yes i'm quoting shit from your suicide note idk why but I really liked this, nice. I like how you executed it a lot The tags had you riled, u know you mad don't try to front kid Took it on the Chin so bad you'd swear you got tagged by machida's front kick decent Already got eyes on you, another so called king'll get toppled I'm the guy pulling the strings to lift your frame like a ship in a bottle ive read this like 50 different times and I still don’t get it. 1950’s olde English reference or something? how you even raked so high? Now my semi re writing the order What i seen Isreal suspect, so its about time someone light up this boarder isreal wordplay is too played you know that, but the flip is decent and gives this some credit Vs My price went up recently, 100 bucks mean ur stock can drop Minnow me money while ur one to get ate by this Big Fish Across the Pond min owe doesn’t sound like men owe. Reach here Cuzz i got US weapons for this Brit faggot, I'm cookin w/ flair.. Wave the Flag singin Star Spangled Banner as Rockets have Bombz Bursting in Air ok good Aim the machine at your squad, i'll take ya life & triumph My Tom Sizemore bodies up & leave the scene lookin like Saving Private Ryan alright good This loss # 2. My Quick 1-2 punch'll blatantly end em.. 1 LightBox Session put En to sleep on schedule, u'd think it'd reset Circadian Rhythm nah I’m not looking this shit up Brought a cam to ur wifey, she showed alll ass t'il it blind me.. Call it a BubbleTape. Bitch Stripped Down & let the kid snack like shit in the 90s lol decent at best Boy you're a sci fi geek. who NEVERS leaves his crib for weeks, see Endors stay shut.. while he inside watchin Return of the Jedi battles on Repeat it works but I find it corny tbh Really close match here. After reading a few times I gotta go with Enbombz for that suicide note line. Shit was great. Good battle. Vote: UNDECIDED BUT LEANING TOWARSS ENBOMBZ Last edited by GUDELJ; 05-21-2018 at 05:29 AM. |
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05-21-2018, 09:15 AM
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Enbombz had a cool story type diss going here. A little diff then im uses to. Thought that misdirectes some of his punches though. I mean i get what you were doing but it led the ands astray imo Inf had more to the point punches and thought his shit was a lot more dirext. This was close though imo enB had a dope verse it just wasnt enough. V/inf
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