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06-14-2015, 05:19 PM | #1 | |
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SINCE MUFF GOT FLAWLESSED IN THE NBL CHAMP MATCH HE NEVER DESERVED AND THEN SIGNED OUT THE LEAGUE LIKE A CRYBABY FAGGOT HERE'S THE PINKSLIP VERSE I WROTE FOR HIM
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FUCK ur father's legacy. Only thing ur father's legacy is an operating table He got one foot in the grave. That shits a bad look dog. Good luck trynna lean on him as a father figure wen they cut that fat niggers foot off U too busy writing gunbars to help him, shit is just bogus U Lost ur job n he's gon die cuz the only real shots u dodgin are his insulin doses. An u said ur white mom's a Revlon model. Man that's the stuff! But ain't enuff make ups in the world to take back all them black cocks she sucked Me? I got the winning ticket. ur parents r just cursed... But fuck Mulatto scratch off.... YOUR mother clawed at ur skin in embrassment at birth Darin nigpen jr. Lesson is? muff's name is painful. Fuckin mongrel. They named u nigpen after the cage they kept u in under the table. Shoulda aborted u. Boardin got ur sad ass breaking down But u died inside ages ago cuz wen u went off the deep end the black half of u drowned. He ain't been hungry since b boys. An on rb he's the fagot type. Guess all that jiz he was talm bout eatin off his hand musta curbed his fuckin appetite. Got fired from his submarine gig...wow. but the best shit is.... He can't even harbor a grudge.....cuz this piece of shit ain't allowed on the premises Ur a freakin slob. Maybe u could get work if u speak to god? for that to happen it'd B Magic.....but u too busy bitin all his bars to apply for a decent job. Muff u a lame forever. |
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06-14-2015, 05:24 PM | #2 |
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Not bad.
Some ass bars sprinkled w/ gems Opener was dope af I must admit But no @ nig pen and a cpl others Lol that's pretty bad Otherwise good drop
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06-14-2015, 05:26 PM | #3 |
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Stfu lame. Gtfo my thread. Get sum air.
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06-14-2015, 05:27 PM | #4 |
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You would have lost
I'm kinda mad you didn't keep this Because you aren't that good. Lol tbr Not enough make ups ti make up black cock she sucked! haha boy u ass Cool opener
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06-14-2015, 05:29 PM | #5 |
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Of course u would say that.
I waited for u Even said let's do it in nbl Then u signed out. Ur a cornball dude An u wouldn't have beat that verse lol. |
06-14-2015, 05:31 PM | #6 |
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These are all terrible bags
He got one foot in the grave. That shits a bad look dog. Good luck trynna lean on him as a father figure wen they cut that fat niggers foot off U too busy writing gunbars to help him, shit is just bogus U Lost ur job n he's gon die cuz the only real shots u dodgin are his insulin doses. An u said ur white mom's a Revlon model. Man that's the stuff! But ain't enuff make ups in the world to take back all them black cocks she sucked Me? I got the winning ticket. ur parents r just cursed... But fuck Mulatto scratch off.... YOUR mother clawed at ur skin in embrassment at birth Darin nigpen jr. Lesson is? muff's name is painful. Fuckin mongrel. They named u nigpen after the cage they kept u in under the table. Shoulda aborted u. Boardin got ur sad ass breaking down But u died inside ages ago cuz wen u went off the deep end the black half of u drowned. He ain't been hungry since b boys. An on rb he's the fagot type. Guess all that jiz he was talm bout eatin off his hand musta curbed his fuckin appetit I'm dodging my dad's insulin doSes Black half drowned? What r u talking about lol Lmao. All of the above is absolute ass The rest is good So 6/20
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06-14-2015, 05:35 PM | #7 |
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DEAD @ THOSE FIRST FOUR LINES THO AHAHAHAHAHAHAHHA
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06-14-2015, 05:35 PM | #8 |
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Lol sn00p shit was wack
Bunch of generics on the most personal ridden person here An u still lost An idk why u "trying to give me props" About a verse where I called your father a nigger and wished death on him Lol What is wrong with u ? |
06-14-2015, 05:36 PM | #9 |
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stick to writing about slurpin cock from the 1st person Amen perspective...
you excel at that This is garbage |
06-14-2015, 05:38 PM | #10 |
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LMFAO this butt hurt faggot is back after a 4 day hiatus an deleting every post he posted then quitting nbl!?
Lol I'm glad u overcame that breakdown. Emotional fuckin loser lol. |
06-14-2015, 05:38 PM | #11 |
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06-14-2015, 05:39 PM | #12 |
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The nigpen was personals homeboh prolly dont know about.
This shit was killer for realz. I mean make a man hide his head under the blanket and stay put killer.
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06-14-2015, 05:39 PM | #13 |
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Anyone who is currently battling can testify
Thst this is trash I'm not even kidding lol. Bags . I'll sign BACK in just to demolish this verse lol
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06-14-2015, 05:43 PM | #14 |
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So snoops verse was wack now?/generic
Umm his whole verse was chock full of personals U can't cut it. Sorry @Sn00p Take a long look bro lol
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06-14-2015, 05:44 PM | #15 |
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Dude..
The shit aint trash though by any means. Im a pretty fair judge of battle bars and persojals.. and this is loaded with personals u mighg not realize. Thats why its not trash. It actually hits pretty hard imo
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06-14-2015, 05:45 PM | #16 |
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Every1 seen the verse now ?
Ur a lame for real dude. An only people sayin shits wack in here are butt hurt faggots who mad at me |
06-14-2015, 05:47 PM | #17 |
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U have not participated in or voted on any battles What do u mean personals I don't realize lol Like his concepts were creative They are not. Dude he said nig pen I'd the name of the cage I'm locked in under the dining table That's incredibly corny Dude is not a good writer At all lmao
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06-14-2015, 05:47 PM | #18 |
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that opener would have slayed your entire verse filled with movie references from 1996
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Lmaaao "the only ppl sayin it's wack" Lool Dude YOU MUST REALLY THINK THIS IS GOOD ROFL
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