Wanderer vs Aero - AERO WINS

[Sharp]

Netcees SOL Season II
Week 3

Due Thursday, July 14th at Midnight PST

Minimum: 8 Lines
Maximum: 12 Lines
24hr ext given on request

NO biting
NO swaying
NO feeding
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2nd person to post can't edit after the first vote comes in
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Agree on a line limit
May God have mercy on your souls

@Wanderer @Aero

[Aero]

8 good to see ya

[Wanderer]

Sure thing, 8 it is

[Sharp]

@Aero I have Wanderer's 8

[Aero]

Sharp

[Sharp]

Aero's Verse

You lost with ease, all that fake talk is cheap
User saying Pardon at birthdays: another cakewalk for me
Shoot your children dead with assaulting burst from matics
Head shots. Wanda never see those kids again like the multiverse of madness
I get bitches on Tinder, results don't seem to vary for single/married
Only your bitch didn't swipe right for me, left my dick with dingleberries :(
Let's talk FACTS, he was a house squatter. It's true this guy's broke
You haven't had a legal pad since your last suicide note


Wanderer's Verse
A case of mistaken arrogance never seen before on the lime
U said ur word is law.. & when u speak it feels like we’ve served time
Yo I get ur unique style of writing. Even tho it’s homo as fuck
For u it’s a form of escapism.. from battles u were hoping to duck
Even if you got a laugh from me I’d still end u so take stock
Tac deployed like an asteroid. When I look thru the scope see the whole space rock
Sent me advice in the past, I didn’t ask but hurtful facts man:
If ur tips anywhere near fire it’s fingerless gloves over a burning trash can

[MaCe]

Originally Posted by Sharp

Aero's Verse

You lost with ease, all that fake talk is cheap
User saying Pardon at birthdays: another cakewalk for me

could have been batter

Shoot your children dead with assaulting burst from matics
Head shots. Wanda never see those kids again like the multiverse of madness
good nameplay

I get bitches on Tinder, results don't seem to vary for single/married
Only your bitch didn't swipe right for me, left my dick with dingleberries :(
if this isn't a personal reference then nah

Let's talk FACTS, he was a house squatter. It's true this guy's broke
You haven't had a legal pad since your last suicide note
didn't hit to me

Wanderer's Verse
A case of mistaken arrogance never seen before on the lime
U said ur word is law.. & when u speak it feels like we’ve served time
didnt hit

Yo I get ur unique style of writing. Even tho it’s homo as fuck
For u it’s a form of escapism.. from battles u were hoping to duck
weak

Even if you got a laugh from me I’d still end u so take stock
Tac deployed like an asteroid. When I look thru the scope see the whole space rock
what no

Sent me advice in the past, I didn’t ask but hurtful facts man:
If ur tips anywhere near fire it’s fingerless gloves over a burning trash can

Haha not bad..your best bar



Well, as the saying goes... "Not All Those Who Wander Are Lost"...

except in this case, Wander definitely lost.

[Adverse]

Aero:
You lost with ease, all that fake talk is cheap
User saying Pardon at birthdays: another cakewalk for me
^ LOVE the idea here, made me laugh, may have been able to be worded better

Shoot your children dead with assaulting burst from matics
Head shots. Wanda never see those kids again like the multiverse of madness
^ damn bro. I’ve seen the ‘Wanda’ wordplay before but this shit was hard

I get bitches on Tinder, results don't seem to vary for single/married
Only your bitch didn't swipe right for me, left my dick with dingleberries :(
^ lmao same here. Funny bar but could use some restructuring IMO

Let's talk FACTS, he was a house squatter. It's true this guy's broke
You haven't had a legal pad since your last suicide note
^ I get this but I didn’t really like it

Wand:
A case of mistaken arrogance never seen before on the lime
U said ur word is law.. & when u speak it feels like we’ve served time
^ ehh decent enough, cool idea

Yo I get ur unique style of writing. Even tho it’s homo as fuck
For u it’s a form of escapism.. from battles u were hoping to duck
^ the idea is cool but I don’t think it hits

Even if you got a laugh from me I’d still end u so take stock
Tac deployed like an asteroid. When I look thru the scope see the whole space rock
^ this was decent enough

Sent me advice in the past, I didn’t ask but hurtful facts man:
If ur tips anywhere near fire it’s fingerless gloves over a burning trash can
^ really like this one. Dope concept

I think I’ll take Aero off consistency, I think you both missed on some good opportunities but I think Aero had higher low points IMO so going for him. Nice battle though from both

V/Aero

[Ghost1]

strong vote from the guy who said hed play keep away with macs lungs CTACH YA BREATH lol fucking literal retard

Aero's Verse

You lost with ease, all that fake talk is cheap
User saying Pardon at birthdays: another cakewalk for me

lol told u this sucked yeesterday idiot

Shoot your children dead with assaulting burst from matics
Head shots. Wanda never see those kids again like the multiverse of madness

nice who wrote this, blue?

I get bitches on Tinder, results don't seem to vary for single/married
Only your bitch didn't swipe right for me, left my dick with dingleberries :(

lol wtf such a gross human

Let's talk FACTS, he was a house squatter. It's true this guy's broke
You haven't had a legal pad since your last suicide note

lol this was dope


Wanderer's Verse
A case of mistaken arrogance never seen before on the lime
U said ur word is law.. & when u speak it feels like we’ve served time

lol wording off but I like it. it truly is a task to listen to austins nonsense sometimes.

Yo I get ur unique style of writing. Even tho it’s homo as fuck
For u it’s a form of escapism.. from battles u were hoping to duck

hows he escaping from the battles by writing for them

Even if you got a laugh from me I’d still end u so take stock
Tac deployed like an asteroid. When I look thru the scope see the whole space rock

oh cool man yea watch out aero wands gonna fucking watch the moon with his telescope ...hide the children

Sent me advice in the past, I didn’t ask but hurtful facts man:
If ur tips anywhere near fire it’s fingerless gloves over a burning trash can

wording sucks again but the concept is there


give it to aero for wanda and legal pad but it was closer than it shouldve been

[Saint]

Wanda (think it was used on him iirc, but k cool)
Legal Pad

Wand had almost opener, tips

The difference here was effective wording
conceptually close but a good example of how cleaner writing changes it.

Vote Aero

[Dominate]

You lost with ease, all that fake talk is cheap
User saying Pardon at birthdays: another cakewalk for me
lol @ flip. Not sure about “a cake walk for me” meaning you don’t get any cake. Am I missing something?
Shoot your children dead with assaulting burst from matics
Head shots. Wanda never see those kids again like the multiverse of madness
nice
I get bitches on Tinder, results don't seem to vary for single/married
Only your bitch didn't swipe right for me, left my dick with dingleberries :(
Lol ok. Gross though
Let's talk FACTS, he was a house squatter. It's true this guy's broke
You haven't had a legal pad since your last suicide note
nice



A case of mistaken arrogance never seen before on the lime
U said ur word is law.. & when u speak it feels like we’ve served time
Almost. There’s a good punch concept here but the wp connections are too tenuous for me. A better rhyme might have helped it land better
Yo I get ur unique style of writing. Even tho it’s homo as fuck
For u it’s a form of escapism.. from battles u were hoping to duck
Same as above. His pseudo rhyming erotic fiction and penchant for phoning it in are valid personal angles but the wordplay/punchline just isn’t doing it for me
Even if you got a laugh from me I’d still end u so take stock
Tac deployed like an asteroid. When I look thru the scope see the whole space rock
Thought this one was pretty dope. Swaggy and good rhymes in 2nd line
Sent me advice in the past, I didn’t ask but hurtful facts man:
If ur tips anywhere near fire it’s fingerless gloves over a burning trash can
thought this was pretty good too[/QUOTE]


Aero got it 3 bars to 2