Trag. 1-1 Vs Destroyer 2-3 - DESTROYER WINS

[Allen Knight]

Netcees Battle League Season VIII

Rules

Due Dates:

• Verses are due Thursday, June 18th 2015 11:59 PM PST. and will be open until the following Sunday
• Battles that lack votes may close later.
• One sided battles may get closed early.
• Extensions are 24 hours

Line Limit:

• Minimum of 10, maximum of 16
• If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first

For additional Rules refer to rule thread


First to 5, win by at least two votes
Good luck!

@Trag. @Destroyer

[Destroyer]

trag aka kyo

i don't give a fuck if it's played. i'm throwing crane kick shots at ur eye
they'll be screaming 'put him in a body bag,' after i pull out my cobra, ky
that's my derringer name... & if u think that i am joking sir...
it'll spin u around til ur insides come out... i call it my can opener
or let's meet at dawn & throw hands. u think my blows don't astound, T
but in the daylyt u be like ooops... and then start crying after around three
this battle is me ending u. so just stop pretending dude.
i'll add IC to ur name, which is also the unit where they'll be sending u
they'll have to wire ur jaw shut, before u even ate yet...
& they'll feed u fluid from a small prick...no Muff semen taste test
ur garbage. if we had a poll if you could even harm des...
people'd be writing LMAO every time, like the start of a fucking Lars thread

[Trag.]

12

i seen ya pic last wk...n u look like the guy who shot kennedy
eyes need a cover up for inner circles big as the one to plot^ that conspiracy
Ur a hypocrite. If votes go my way des turns shifty quick
Pull ya best snake move when u lose... the way u constrikta hissy fit
& for that I'm shootin from long...steady movin them arms
I'll make deceitful clips like promising trailers b4 shitty movies that bomb
Des is a lonely geezer... lectures kids on how growing old is like
No personal bond with em...NC's is his get outta jail free card for a social life
N ur wife was skeptical on ur size the night u begged her for sex
that big talk got d bunked...cuz she made u sleep wit it ina separate bed
A neg to ur rep is what's next. I'll flawless u and win on default
I'm a breath of fresh air - u give us that Arnold look at the end of total recall

[Greed]

i seen ya pic last wk...n u look like the guy who shot kennedy
eyes need a cover up for inner circles big as the one to plot^ that conspiracy
This is cool

Ur a hypocrite. If votes go my way des turns shifty quick
Pull ya best snake move when u lose... the way u constrikta hissy fit
Ehh

& for that I'm shootin from long...steady movin them arms
I'll make deceitful clips like promising trailers b4 shitty movies that bomb
Doesnt work. De seat full? Dis heat full? Im unclear on this

Des is a lonely geezer... lectures kids on how growing old is like
No personal bond with em...NC's is his get outta jail free card for a social life
Haha

N ur wife was skeptical on ur size the night u begged her for sex
that big talk got d bunked...cuz she made u sleep wit it ina separate bed
Lol

A neg to ur rep is what's next. I'll flawless u and win on default
I'm a breath of fresh air - u give us that Arnold look at the end of total recall
Okay


i don't give a fuck if it's played. i'm throwing crane kick shots at ur eye
they'll be screaming 'put him in a body bag,' after i pull out my cobra, ky
Ehh

that's my derringer name... & if u think that i am joking sir...
it'll spin u around til ur insides come out... i call it my can opener
Okay

or let's meet at dawn & throw hands. u think my blows don't astound, T
but in the daylyt u be like ooops... and then start crying after around three
Okay

this battle is me ending u. so just stop pretending dude.
i'll add IC to ur name, which is also the unit where they'll be sending u
This is cool

they'll have to wire ur jaw shut, before u even ate yet...
& they'll feed u fluid from a small prick...no Muff semen taste test
Lol nah

ur garbage. if we had a poll if you could even harm des...
people'd be writing LMAO every time, like the start of a fucking Lars thread
Ha

3-2 in quotes

V trag

[~RustyGunZ~]

i seen ya pic last wk...n u look like the guy who shot kennedy
eyes need a cover up for inner circles big as the one to plot^ that conspiracy
Eh
Ur a hypocrite. If votes go my way des turns shifty quick
Pull ya best snake move when u lose... the way u constrikta hissy fit
no, i don't see where you;re going with it but it's played either 3 ways
& for that I'm shootin from long...steady movin them arms
I'll make deceitful clips like promising trailers b4 shitty movies that bomb
Cool idea wording def lacked but a dope concept
Des is a lonely geezer... lectures kids on how growing old is like
No personal bond with em...NC's is his get outta jail free card for a social life
No?
N ur wife was skeptical on ur size the night u begged her for sex
that big talk got d bunked...cuz she made u sleep wit it ina separate bed
Cool idea but saying debunked for the bed part of the connection would imply he was no longer sleeping on a bunk and therefore would be sleeping in the same bed
A neg to ur rep is what's next. I'll flawless u and win on default
I'm a breath of fresh air - u give us that Arnold look at the end of total recall
Lol okay, not hard hitting and most people won't get it. A simple play on a Muff-esque concept.

vs

i don't give a fuck if it's played. i'm throwing crane kick shots at ur eye
they'll be screaming 'put him in a body bag,' after i pull out my cobra, ky
Lol cool
that's my derringer name... & if u think that i am joking sir...
it'll spin u around til ur insides come out... i call it my can opener
WOOO
or let's meet at dawn & throw hands. u think my blows don't astound, T
but in the daylyt u be like ooops... and then start crying after around three
These been used way to much the past year or so, nah
this battle is me ending u. so just stop pretending dude.
i'll add IC to ur name, which is also the unit where they'll be sending u
Okay but his name is shortened from being tragic so it takes from it for me
they'll have to wire ur jaw shut, before u even ate yet...
& they'll feed u fluid from a small prick...no Muff semen taste test
Lol, but been done a bunch lately
ur garbage. if we had a poll if you could even harm des...
people'd be writing LMAO every time, like the start of a fucking Lars thread
Cool, not really harsh but creative

v/des

pretty much for the can opener bar

[Allen Knight]

-1 vote for trag.

-1 vote for des

[Unfukwitable]

that's my derringer name... & if u think that i am joking sir...
it'll spin u around til ur insides come out... i call it my can opener

vs

i seen ya pic last wk...n u look like the guy who shot kennedy
eyes need a cover up for inner circles big as the one to plot^ that conspiracy
N ur wife was skeptical on ur size the night u begged her for sex
that big talk got d bunked...cuz she made u sleep wit it ina separate bed

Wasnt the battle I expected but one had the better lines bout had some creative'ish but it lacked the hits imo .. v/Trag

[murda sho]

Trag.

N ur wife was skeptical on ur size the night u begged her for sex
that big talk got d bunked...cuz she made u sleep wit it ina separate bed


Destroyer

that's my derringer name... & if u think that i am joking sir...
it'll SPIN u around til ur insides come out... i call it my can opener

this battle is me ending u. so just stop pretending dude.
i'll add IC to ur name, which is also the unit where they'll be sending u



A lot of misses in this battle but the LOTB was the bolded line... that was a well thought out and clean punch... Tag wasn't terrible but he still got some work to do on his punchlines I see him being better in the future... anyway I got Des taking this with LOTB and more quotes

[fraze]

Originally Posted by Destroyer

i don't give a fuck if it's played. i'm throwing crane kick shots at ur eye
they'll be screaming 'put him in a body bag,' after i pull out my cobra, ky
nostolgia bars. cool. could have done more setup, but it works if you've seen k.k.
that's my derringer name... & if u think that i am joking sir...
it'll spin u around til ur insides come out... i call it my can opener
aight. not a huge fan but it works.
or let's meet at dawn & throw hands. u think my blows don't astound, T
but in the daylyt u be like ooops... and then start crying after around three
didn't like this one
this battle is me ending u. so just stop pretending dude.
i'll add IC to ur name, which is also the unit where they'll be sending u
needed to set up this np for this to work
they'll have to wire ur jaw shut, before u even ate yet...
& they'll feed u fluid from a small prick...no Muff semen taste test
could have worded this diff to hit harder, but cool
ur garbage. if we had a poll if you could even harm des...
people'd be writing LMAO every time, like the start of a fucking Lars thread
aight. but not really a hard punch

Originally Posted by Trag.

12

i seen ya pic last wk...n u look like the guy who shot kennedy
eyes need a cover up for inner circles big as the one to plot^ that conspiracy
this is straight. a little wordy but cool
Ur a hypocrite. If votes go my way des turns shifty quick
Pull ya best snake move when u lose... the way u constrikta hissy fit
nope. too forced
& for that I'm shootin from long...steady movin them arms
I'll make deceitful clips like promising trailers b4 shitty movies that bomb
light, and not really directed at your opponent
Des is a lonely geezer... lectures kids on how growing old is like
No personal bond with em...NC's is his get outta jail free card for a social life
didn't like the way you worded this. you need tie ins to make this effective.
N ur wife was skeptical on ur size the night u begged her for sex
that big talk got d bunked...cuz she made u sleep wit it ina separate bed
i see what you're going for but this isn't worded well
A neg to ur rep is what's next. I'll flawless u and win on default
I'm a breath of fresh air - u give us that Arnold look at the end of total recall
haha. nice closer.

Another close battle. I have Destro with his first 2 bars, but he falls off after that. muff bar was close, but not much else. Trag has kennedy and total recall. Some other stuff was cool conceptual but missed on wording. You could probably vote this either way, but I'm going with Destroyer because I don't think his misses were as bad.


Vote: Destroyer

[ill nik-A]

Trag, not ur best verse... Debunk is a played concept and ur execution was aight, opener was just aight for what it was
Des, opener was cool, can opener was lotb

Old man wins

[Sn00p]

i don't give a fuck if it's played. i'm throwing crane kick shots at ur eye
they'll be screaming 'put him in a body bag,' after i pull out my cobra, ky
^decent
that's my derringer name... & if u think that i am joking sir...
it'll spin u around til ur insides come out... i call it my can opener
^cool
or let's meet at dawn & throw hands. u think my blows don't astound, T
but in the daylyt u be like ooops... and then start crying after around three
^see the connection, but isn't that direct
this battle is me ending u. so just stop pretending dude.
i'll add IC to ur name, which is also the unit where they'll be sending u
^okay
they'll have to wire ur jaw shut, before u even ate yet...
& they'll feed u fluid from a small prick...no Muff semen taste test
^ehhh, okay
ur garbage. if we had a poll if you could even harm des...
people'd be writing LMAO every time, like the start of a fucking Lars thread
^okay

vs.

i seen ya pic last wk...n u look like the guy who shot kennedy
eyes need a cover up for inner circles big as the one to plot^ that conspiracy
^okay
Ur a hypocrite. If votes go my way des turns shifty quick
Pull ya best snake move when u lose... the way u constrikta hissy fit
^not streamlined enough w/ the constrikta hissy fit part to hit. good idea tho
& for that I'm shootin from long...steady movin them arms
I'll make deceitful clips like promising trailers b4 shitty movies that bomb
^des eat full clips? maaan, this was a dope idea yo. but the simile was kinda blah. u could'a done more, but this was cool.
Des is a lonely geezer... lectures kids on how growing old is like
No personal bond with em...NC's is his get outta jail free card for a social life
^kinda statementish. doesnt rly hit cuz of that
N ur wife was skeptical on ur size the night u begged her for sex
that big talk got d bunked...cuz she made u sleep wit it ina separate bed
^not bad
A neg to ur rep is what's next. I'll flawless u and win on default
I'm a breath of fresh air - u give us that Arnold look at the end of total recall
^okay

both had some nice ideas for sure. trag had cool lines too and a rly dope concept w/ des eat full clips. but des was more consistent. his wording made his lines hit harder. cool read.
v/des

[Sharp]

that's my derringer name... & if u think that i am joking sir...
it'll spin u around til ur insides come out... i call it my can opener
they'll have to wire ur jaw shut, before u even ate yet...
& they'll feed u fluid from a small prick...no Muff semen taste test


i seen ya pic last wk...n u look like the guy who shot kennedy
eyes need a cover up for inner circles big as the one to plot^ that conspiracy


thought des took it. that deceitful clips line was a nice idea but wording wasn't too good

v/des