WK3: Cred 0-0 vs. BodySnatcher 2-0 - Cred WINS!!

[Incredible]

Rules

Due Dates:

• Verses are due FRIDAY MAY 25th and will be open until Sunday.
• Battles that lack votes may close later.
• One sided battles may get closed early.
• Extensions are 24 hours

Line Limit:

• Minimum of 8, maximum of 16
• If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first.

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@Cred @BodySnatcher

[BodySnatcher]

@Cred......12?

[Cred]

Cash.... cus we don’t do checks.




Sounds good.

[BodySnatcher]

I got 14 ready when you are @Cred

[Cred]

if Rounds hit the air, they'll have me in the central for bookin
red dots peporoni his face.. bitch I got a different Metal for Cookin
I'll hit wit the six - can't Weave these wen they spit out the mac
black bitch instagram pic.. the Shot 'll have ur wig on ur lap
spray the shotty route, or a hook get u knocked out ur boots
this is how you Lay Body out.. n bitch i'm NOT a massuese
i got ?'s deep inside - ur the epitome of wack n here's the reason why
how Finnys Pizza Toppings get in the tourney b4 the fuckin pizza guy?!

[BodySnatcher]

I say...



As soon as Cred seaweed...I’ma sneak up & give his throat gills...this knife chaotic
Dump his body like Dexter...call me Wes Anderson...nigga I’ll turn your Life Aquatic
Im RAW but I don’t need ringside commentators...Cred will be clutchin in his jaw
But it’ll do more than Sting when this Hitman leaves a Hacksaw Duggan his skull
It’ll be a horror film when I kill`em & keep shooting while his spirit is inclining
& I wont stop pulling the trigger...my finger will look like Danny’s in The Shining
NBL 11 ya got blue up, Marge’s hairdo...then ya sent Doh to Orc for y`all to pair up?
But it won’t help...if a high yellow nigga is rockin a crown...it’ll be ya avatar’s hair cut

[Lenox]

Vote cred. This was a body

Cred: everything was hard hitting . Besides closer maybe.

Vs

Body: Dugan was cool

Vote: cred

[Amen]

Originally Posted by Cred

if Rounds hit the air, they'll have me in the central for bookin
red dots peporoni his face.. bitch I got a different Metal for Cookin
Concept ok but wording was rough.
I'll hit wit the six - can't Weave these wen they spit out the mac
black bitch instagram pic.. the Shot 'll have ur wig on ur lap
Meh.
spray the shotty route, or a hook get u knocked out ur boots
this is how you Lay Body out.. n bitch i'm NOT a massuese
Ok.
i got ?'s deep inside - ur the epitome of wack n here's the reason why
how Finnys Pizza Toppings get in the tourney b4 the fuckin pizza guy?!
Nah...

Originally Posted by BodySnatcher

As soon as Cred seaweed...I’ma sneak up & give his throat gills...this knife chaotic
Dump his body like Dexter...call me Wes Anderson...nigga I’ll turn your Life Aquatic
You said a lot of nothing here.
Im RAW but I don’t need ringside commentators...Cred will be clutchin in his jaw
But it’ll do more than Sting when this Hitman leaves a Hacksaw Duggan his skull
Jaw/Skull aren't even slant rhymes man. Old reference but well executed, IMO.
It’ll be a horror film when I kill`em & keep shooting while his spirit is inclining
& I wont stop pulling the trigger...my finger will look like Danny’s in The Shining
Another odd/old reference. Don't like it, tho.
NBL 11 ya got blue up, Marge’s hairdo...then ya sent Doh to Orc for y`all to pair up?
But it won’t help...if a high yellow nigga is rockin a crown...it’ll be ya avatar’s hair cut
Nah...

niggas too pussy to be the 1st vote or what? This was actually really close. Seems Cred just through some quick simple shit together. Body snatch needs to work on wording his concepts more effectively. Struggle to word/deliver his concepts. That wrestling reference was his best bar but wasn't that effective. Tough call but I think Cred slightly edges this one out here. HIs delivery and wording was much cleaner which IMO gave him the edge.

v/Cred

[Twodrop]

if Rounds hit the air, they'll have me in the central for bookin
red dots peporoni his face.. bitch I got a different Metal for Cookin
yup
I'll hit wit the six - can't Weave these wen they spit out the mac
black bitch instagram pic.. the Shot 'll have ur wig on ur lap
wasnt feeling this
spray the shotty route, or a hook get u knocked out ur boots
this is how you Lay Body out.. n bitch i'm NOT a massuese
lol. fire
i got ?'s deep inside - ur the epitome of wack n here's the reason why
how Finnys Pizza Toppings get in the tourney b4 the fuckin pizza guy?!
ok

As soon as Cred seaweed...I’ma sneak up & give his throat gills...this knife chaotic
Dump his body like Dexter...call me Wes Anderson...nigga I’ll turn your Life Aquatic
this was dope
Im RAW but I don’t need ringside commentators...Cred will be clutchin in his jaw
But it’ll do more than Sting when this Hitman leaves a Hacksaw Duggan his skull
yup
It’ll be a horror film when I kill`em & keep shooting while his spirit is inclining
& I wont stop pulling the trigger...my finger will look like Danny’s in The Shining
thought this was fire
NBL 11 ya got blue up, Marge’s hairdo...then ya sent Doh to Orc for y`all to pair up?
But it won’t help...if a high yellow nigga is rockin a crown...it’ll be ya avatar’s hair cut
miss

iono.... Body w/ the edge. Both verses went in ... thought massuese was lotb but body was more more consistent.

v/ body

[DynamiCz]

if Rounds hit the air, they'll have me in the central for bookin
red dots peporoni his face.. bitch I got a different Metal for Cookin

Nice Opener

I'll hit wit the six - can't Weave these wen they spit out the mac
black bitch instagram pic.. the Shot 'll have ur wig on ur lap

Lmao Nice

spray the shotty route, or a hook get u knocked out ur boots
this is how you Lay Body out.. n bitch i'm NOT a masseuse

Light

i got ?'s deep inside - ur the epitome of wack n here's the reason why
how Finnys Pizza Toppings get in the tourney b4 the fuckin pizza guy?!

Lmao! I had pizza personals! Niggas wasn't fucking with it tho! Funny closer!

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As soon as Cred seaweed...I’ma sneak up & give his throat gills...this knife chaotic
Dump his body like Dexter...call me Wes Anderson...nigga I’ll turn your Life Aquatic

Nice opener

Im RAW but I don’t need ringside commentators...Cred will be clutchin in his jaw
But it’ll do more than Sting when this Hitman leaves a Hacksaw Duggan his skull

Didn't rhyme, but this was actually nice

It’ll be a horror film when I kill`em & keep shooting while his spirit is inclining
& I wont stop pulling the trigger...my finger will look like Danny’s in The Shining

This was ight!

NBL 11 ya got blue up, Marge’s hairdo...then ya sent Doh to Orc for y`all to pair up?
But it won’t help...if a high yellow nigga is rockin a crown...it’ll be ya avatar’s hair cut

Lol, coo closer

This battle was actually close! Cool read on both ends! Wouldn't call this a body tho I think Cred edged this one by a bar! That boy @BodySnatcher becoming a problem, lol yall niggas stop sleeping on this man! Props to both

V-Cred

[El Muffin]

if Rounds hit the air, they'll have me in the central for bookin
red dots peporoni his face.. bitch I got a different Metal for Cookin
(ok)
I'll hit wit the six - can't Weave these wen they spit out the mac
black bitch instagram pic.. the Shot 'll have ur wig on ur lap
(lol .)
spray the shotty route, or a hook get u knocked out ur boots
this is how you Lay Body out.. n bitch i'm NOT a massuese
(niiice)
i got ?'s deep inside - ur the epitome of wack n here's the reason why
how Finnys Pizza Toppings get in the tourney b4 the fuckin pizza guy?!
(nah b)

As soon as Cred seaweed...I’ma sneak up & give his throat gills...this knife chaotic
Dump his body like Dexter...call me Wes Anderson...nigga I’ll turn your Life Aquatic
(not feeling this. i see what u did tho)
Im RAW but I don’t need ringside commentators...Cred will be clutchin in his jaw
But it’ll do more than Sting when this Hitman leaves a Hacksaw Duggan his skull
(i like the wp. little longwinded but u did the concept justice)
It’ll be a horror film when I kill`em & keep shooting while his spirit is inclining
& I wont stop pulling the trigger...my finger will look like Danny’s in The Shining
(Lmao this is good. i know the motion your talking about)
NBL 11 ya got blue up, Marge’s hairdo...then ya sent Doh to Orc for y`all to pair up?
But it won’t help...if a high yellow nigga is rockin a crown...it’ll be ya avatar’s hair cut
( hate this. avatar punches are lame. dont do them going forward..trust me.)


cloooose. i think creds misses werent as bad so i got him

tied in quotes

v/cred

[Flow]

Vote cred. Only bar i disliked was his lay body out line, which i felt could of been harsher.

Body had a lot of concepts but they were over worked, too much going on an it took away from the hits in a lot of cases.some cool ideas mind you but it didnt work for me

Vote cred

[bleak]

Thought this would be an easy vote, was wrong. Voting on tablet so I'll give a quick little rundown

Body really the only thing add a whole that sours me to your verses is the line length. Feel like you can fit your concepts in w/o having to stretch it out. This was consistent and I was halfway into most of it but kept disconnecting mid line to make sure I want missing anything. Might just be my inclination to keep my lines inside of the site's margins, Nik has had success for like 50 years now stretching his lines.

Cred, this was an off week but I can see where u may have sold ur opponent short. That being said, I did like a couple. Lay body was kinda awkward but it was to the point. I liked the pizza toppings shit. Dont worry Body this shit is getting old quick lol but i liked it here. Cred ur first two seemed like a key, just some generic hood shit but the tone was right. Looking forward to advanced gun bar lessons next week

V/Cred but your heels were on fire in this one

[Jabari Black]

if Rounds hit the air, they'll have me in the central for bookin
red dots peporoni his face.. bitch I got a different Metal for Cookin

(Lmao this is funny. My only critique is ‘Metal for cooking’ in the shooting meaning is kind of a stretch...you can cook someone or cook him but you wouldn’t call it cooking. Prob sound nitpicky but I feel like you get what I’m saying. Anyways I liked the bar)

I'll hit wit the six - can't Weave these wen they spit out the mac
black bitch instagram pic.. the Shot 'll have ur wig on ur lap

(Yep. I like this)

spray the shotty route, or a hook get u knocked out ur boots
this is how you Lay Body out.. n bitch i'm NOT a massuese

(Simple body flip. Still hit, but just a jab imo)

i got ?'s deep inside - ur the epitome of wack n here's the reason why
how Finnys Pizza Toppings get in the tourney b4 the fuckin pizza guy?!

(Lol this is funny. Them niggas really gotta team up on brothers keeper 2 lmao)




As soon as Cred seaweed...I’ma sneak up & give his throat gills...this knife chaotic
Dump his body like Dexter...call me Wes
Anderson...nigga I’ll turn your Life Aquatic

(This is a good opener. You did a lot here. ‘Soon as Cred seaweed’ was a forced tie in imo and didn’t go with the rest of the bar, but the other tie ins were nice. The actual punch wasn’t too crazy but it worked. Overall nice bar)

Im RAW but I don’t need ringside commentators...Cred will be clutchin in his jaw
But it’ll do more than Sting when this Hitman leaves a Hacksaw Duggan his skull

(This is fire. The hacksaw duggan wp was dope.)

It’ll be a horror film when I kill`em & keep shooting while his spirit is inclining
& I wont stop pulling the trigger...my finger will look like Danny’s in The Shining

(This is fire as well. You set this up perfect and I liked the spirit tie in)

NBL 11 ya got blue up, Marge’s hairdo...then ya sent Doh to Orc for y`all to pair up?
But it won’t help...if a high yellow nigga is rockin a crown...it’ll be ya avatar’s hair cut

(This was okay imo. The concept is bad but this is perfect execution of a corny concept. Paradoxical, but the blue up/marge, doh/dough, then the avatar thing all worked from in a technical sense and they tied into each other well. Then it was a good personal angle as well. It’s just the whole simpsons then the avatar thing came off corny to me. Hard to judge this bar but I’m going to go with okay)



Dope battle fellas. Straight bar fest.

Even though both these guys are straight punchers, it felt like a styles clash to me. Cred’s punches are very straight to the point, shorter bars, with a dope cadence. You instantly get the bar and they sting instantly.

Body Snatcher is a puncher as well but he has longer bars, more subtle tie ins, and a added layer of complexity. On the other hand, his flow isn’t as smooth his punches don’t always instantly sting like Cred.

This was a tough one to judge. Cred was more consistent imo. He had no misses, his lowest low was higher than Body Snatcher’s lowest low. Body Snatcher had the lowest low with the Simpson’s bar, but also had two very heavy punches including lotb imo.

Like I said this one was tough to judge but I’m slightly edging Body Snatcher on this one. In a punchline heavy battle he had an added layer of complexity in his punches and I thought his Shining line and WWE lines helped him edge it.

Mvgt Body Snatcher

[Incredible]

Cred:

"if Rounds hit the air, they'll have me in the central for bookin
red dots peporoni his face.. bitch I got a different Metal for Cookin"

"spray the shotty route, or a hook get u knocked out ur boots
this is how you Lay Body out.. n bitch i'm NOT a massuese"

BodySnatcher:

"Im RAW but I don’t need ringside commentators...Cred will be clutchin in his jaw
But it’ll do more than Sting when this Hitman leaves a Hacksaw Duggan his skull"


Overall was a decent read here a little less than what I was expecting from both but was still decent. Avy disses don't work, I think even if its super clever, gives off a kind of stank. Body think tried too hard here and went overboard with a couple bars, ironically I guess, I like the bar from body the most that everyone is saying doesn't rhyme, but hey still dug the concept, and in an actually rap song I think the rhyme could work, for whatever that's worth. Think cred took it a little easy here but did just enough, props to both but MVGT - Cred