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Old 02-05-2018, 02:18 PM   #1
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FAILURE TO VOTE ON 3 BATTLES IS A DQ. NO MATTER WHO YOU ARE!!! YOU WILL BE DISQUALIFIED. VOTE ON 3 BATTLES OR YOU LOSE. SIMPLE!
THERE’S BEEN A LOT OF COMPLAINTS ABOUT VOTING RECENTLY, IF THERE IS SOMEONE WHO YOU DON’T WANT TO VOTE IN YOUR BATTLE YOU MUST STATE THEIR NAME IN YOUR CHECK IN. IF IT’S A CRAZY AMOUNT OF PEOPLE THEN SORRY YOU’RE JUST A BITCH AND ALL VOTES WILL COUNT. AS PER ORC

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Old 02-05-2018, 02:46 PM   #2
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His girls a known slut she can easily swallow a whole Mandingo
If Anytime she mentions Facts, we know shes dumb as fuck and speaks that new lingo
My Eagle shine like that superbowl ring though, draw faster than Foles out the pocket
Once the bullets Philly go crazy, im coming with Blount Force then Im Running Back to talk shit
Gunplay is not his topic, Joe got many weapons in store
Once i see Sheen Spray shots then watch his Soul Glow after the barrel sing like Quentin Moore
If im kicking in his door for sure im gaining forced entry
come equipped with those cans while his barrell only holds recycables and empties
in the ring you dont wanna tempt me, with these hands i got the upper
you think your Cornerback you up, your defense sucks call it Pats witn no Malcom Butler
Your peeking out your windowshutters petrified i got that scope on the tripod
My location on the roof be the Westside,Gunn u down as u pray let me FlyGod
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Old 02-08-2018, 09:13 PM   #5
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Dude's retarded. There's no way this vermin could be stopping me.
He's so stupid, he threw cancer patients out a plane, just to watch them hit terminal velocity.
I could leave early and win off a low-blow. He's not the greatest dude.
Shit I'd split just to have him get hit in the nuts, that's Johnny Cage's move.
This is me throwing a wrench in to your plans just to have you bleeding some more.
You can't dodge, so it proves you're just an Average Joe, you're Peter Lafleur.
Dude's a drag queen. So many Estrogen pills have gone to his head.
In the back streets? He'll tuck more on the corner than nurses do hospital beds.
He's been lying to you all, so I'm aiming right at this kid's cheek till he's lying in six-deep.
Nick Foles in the Super Bowl: this man'll catch a bullet just for trying to trick me.
Your bitch says I'm outstanding with the cheese I'm flossing.
I took her and got the W cause you've always been Sloppy, Joe. You're getting sandwiched in-between the losses.
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Old 02-08-2018, 09:22 PM   #6
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If im kicking in his door for sure im gaining forced entry
come equipped with those cans while his barrell only holds recycables and empties
in the ring you dont wanna tempt me, with these hands i got the upper
you think your Cornerback you up, your defense sucks call it Pats witn no Malcom Butler

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Idk I wasnt feelin too much from facts.. the concepts didnt do ya much justice bro.

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Old 02-08-2018, 09:34 PM   #7
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Gunplay is not his topic, Joe got many weapons in store
Once i see Sheen Spray shots then watch his Soul Glow after the barrel sing like Quentin Moore
If im kicking in his door for sure im gaining forced entry
come equipped with those cans while his barrell only holds recycables and empties
in the ring you dont wanna tempt me, with these hands i got the upper
you think your Cornerback you up, your defense sucks call it Pats witn no Malcom Butler

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nothing


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Old 02-09-2018, 10:53 AM   #9
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Facts got the right idea, but the concepts themselves were corny. More direct disses would help you out. Like, that opener is corny as all hell and really doesn't make your opponent look bad at all.

Joe -- shit was cool.. for me, the Malcolm Butler line was really the main one that connected front and back and was pretty harsh. That was enough to win it for me.

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Old 02-09-2018, 11:51 AM   #10
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Once i see Sheen Spray shots then watch his Soul Glow after the barrel sing like Quentin Moore

Nice..

in the ring you dont wanna tempt me, with these hands i got the upper
you think your Cornerback you up, your defense sucks call it Pats witn no Malcom Butler

Dope..

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Facts you had the right idea you just didn't connect them and make them hit towards your opponent. You figure it out just stay down. Cool battle...

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Old 02-09-2018, 01:17 PM   #11
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His girls a known slut she can easily swallow a whole Mandingo
If Anytime she mentions Facts, we know shes dumb as fuck and speaks that new lingo
didnt like this
My Eagle shine like that superbowl ring though, draw faster than Foles out the pocket
Once the bullets Philly go crazy, im coming with Blount Force then Im Running Back to talk shit
didnt like this
Gunplay is not his topic, Joe got many weapons in store
Once i see Sheen Spray shots then watch his Soul Glow after the barrel sing like Quentin Moore
nah man
If im kicking in his door for sure im gaining forced entry
come equipped with those cans while his barrell only holds recycables and empties
ok
in the ring you dont wanna tempt me, with these hands i got the upper
you think your Cornerback you up, your defense sucks call it Pats witn no Malcom Butler
this coulda been dope execution made it decent
Your peeking out your windowshutters petrified i got that scope on the tripod
My location on the roof be the Westside,Gunn u down as u pray let me FlyGod
this was ok

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Dude's retarded. There's no way this vermin could be stopping me.
He's so stupid, he threw cancer patients out a plane, just to watch them hit terminal velocity.
this made me laugh but not because it was a good punch
I could leave early and win off a low-blow. He's not the greatest dude.
Shit I'd split just to have him get hit in the nuts, that's Johnny Cage's move.
this was ok coulda been better with a different execution
This is me throwing a wrench in to your plans just to have you bleeding some more.
You can't dodge, so it proves you're just an Average Joe, you're Peter Lafleur.
had potential fell flat as is
Dude's a drag queen. So many Estrogen pills have gone to his head.
In the back streets? He'll tuck more on the corner than nurses do hospital beds.
should that be in the corner? again execution is off. this is ok as is
He's been lying to you all, so I'm aiming right at this kid's cheek till he's lying in six-deep.
Nick Foles in the Super Bowl: this man'll catch a bullet just for trying to trick me.
didnt like this
Your bitch says I'm outstanding with the cheese I'm flossing.
I took her and got the W cause you've always been Sloppy, Joe. You're getting sandwiched in-between the losses.
lol @ cheese your flossing. i actually really dig this concept. Again wording is off. another ok one.

This battle is reallly close. I almost want to vote for facts because his concepts were better. however i basically have it 3-3 with joes cornerback line being lotb.

Facts you've got concepts down just need to fix wording issues.

v/joe boston
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Joe -- Soul Glow, Malcolm Butler
Had some clunky wording issues, but these stood out to me.

Facts -- Like it's been said....your concepts are ok, the way u put em together is ehh like the 'average joe' and 'sloppy joe' could be good but fell flat. U just need more exp.

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