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07-19-2015, 08:54 PM | #1 |
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BATTLE ARENA SPOTLIGHT: Bags vs Vulgar (Pic battle) {Bags wins}
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Pics Due in like 3 days I wanna write tonight, like right now if possible Hit me with that pic plz @Bags |
07-19-2015, 08:57 PM | #2 |
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07-19-2015, 08:58 PM | #3 |
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lolololololol ammo. Thanks. gl
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07-19-2015, 09:38 PM | #4 |
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You look awful with hair. Looking at Heidi with the most unlawful of stares. You're a white square. I'll hit you square in the sternum with the one that's already there. When I do this text verse shit, I come off like a bear, ur a weasel & it's a pain to write one ya beard's got so many Combs lost in it, I thought u worked for Bad Boy...til Veritas spanked u like 1. You're an anal mite, son. When I air your career choice out, it's purely fair. to say u've made Progressive steps to being a loser and it's not because u sell insurance there. The ring of power ain't yours, lord knows this bitch ain't a draw Lookin like Gimli's son went to Legolas's birthday bash with Arwen's ugly sister in law Ever been split in the jaw? Even when it's wired it hurts, let me know what u desire, squirt u signed ur soul over to Satan to get a date that night. That's him behind u blending in w/ the fireworks Expect predictable punchlines & topical personals. Possibly PM's, I know it's a bitch move! I doubt your image flips'll be as original as the photo hosting site you uploaded this pic to I mean, how the fuck you gonna let all those people converge on your property?! I'm gonna murk you so properly... subconsciously, know why this ragamuffin cayn't change? Could BARELY celebrate Independence Day cuz his lame brain was connected to NC's mainframe. I wonder which aftershock was worse. When that rocket serenaded that charade or when u whipped out your little NASA shuttle & rained on her parade I shit on rhyme schemes, u pee on color schemes. Silver's forever in ur heart, yellow's over ur shoulder u look like an unemployed Orc with il-nika's gray hair, & ur dating an Animaniacs gopher (Bahahahaha.... You a sad fucking display of an assortment of rap forum culture.) You should be thankful you're ruined.. sincerily, u're not a prankster of music The explosion in the background embodies Bag's frustration w/ being mid-tier, & Destro's anger at losing Last edited by Vulgar; 07-19-2015 at 09:45 PM. |
07-22-2015, 04:43 PM | #6 |
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Vulgar on that gangster shit. Really lettin bangers spit. Cuz this rat faced fagot sends buckshots every time he takes a pic. But for real u need to save the lip. Stay safe an shit. Or I'll put hands on you with no regard like the artist of that painting did. U ass an it's written on ya face...Watre u doin bruh? I shine like the sun so it'll be easy to eclipse u since ur forehead is mooning us U worthless. Malnourished. Wat happened to ya lame body? How's ur life not on track!? ur day to day look like a scene out of trainspotting So dont ever talk shit or ull regret it if u flexin on me tweaker. Bitch u gon bite ur tongue...nah for real he look like he Havin an epileptic seizure U are half the food chain ghoul face. Man stop. Lookin like a grasshopper slash rat lobster got his face smashed with a padlock. U a snitch punjab. Anything happens an he's surely yappin. Guaranteed this songbird Swansberg gone singh. Fuckin Pakistani lookin fagot. U surround ya self w bums an crude guys dude why? I been pedaling for meals while U 2 junkies look like u just left a food drive W that face an grill there's no need to talk don't doubt fam Why even open ya mouth? I mean u could brush ya teeth without that Fagot. I'll choke u to death An make my point hard. Have ya veins poppin out ya neck worse then ya boys arms. @Sharp move us to nbl? |
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Okay tbh I thought bags took this battle easily. I don't have much to say just found his verse landed better...u both had your moments but I think bags edged this one imo
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You look awful with hair. Looking at Heidi with the most unlawful of stares.
You're a white square. I'll hit you square in the sternum with the one that's already there. (mkk easy association but this is ok) When I do this text verse shit, I come off like a bear, ur a weasel & it's a pain to write one ya beard's got so many Combs lost in it, I thought u worked for Bad Boy...til Veritas spanked u like 1. (the concept itself is eh but I liked how u tied it in w/ the bad boy..the combs shit was eh) You're an anal mite, son. When I air your career choice out, it's purely fair. to say u've made Progressive steps to being a loser and it's not because u sell insurance there. (ha I like this. simple but effective) The ring of power ain't yours, lord knows this bitch ain't a draw Lookin like Gimli's son went to Legolas's birthday bash with Arwen's ugly sister in law (retarded in a good way, lol vintage vulg) Ever been split in the jaw? Even when it's wired it hurts, let me know what u desire, squirt u signed ur soul over to Satan to get a date that night. That's him behind u blending in w/ the fireworks (no not this one) Expect predictable punchlines & topical personals. Possibly PM's, I know it's a bitch move! I doubt your image flips'll be as original as the photo hosting site you uploaded this pic to (dope ass transition but not a hard pic diss ..just some real shit..still like but not dissing him hard tbh. at an empasse. but do u seewhat im sayin?) I mean, how the fuck you gonna let all those people converge on your property?! I'm gonna murk you so properly... subconsciously, know why this ragamuffin cayn't change? Could BARELY celebrate Independence Day cuz his lame brain was connected to NC's mainframe. (weird section) I wonder which aftershock was worse. When that rocket serenaded that charade or when u whipped out your little NASA shuttle & rained on her parade (not really feelin this tbh) I shit on rhyme schemes, u pee on color schemes. Silver's forever in ur heart, yellow's over ur shoulder u look like an unemployed Orc with il-nika's gray hair, & ur dating an Animaniacs gopher (random but pretty funny) (Bahahahaha.... You a sad fucking display of an assortment of rap forum culture.) You should be thankful you're ruined.. sincerily, u're not a prankster of music The explosion in the background embodies Bag's frustration w/ being mid-tier, & Destro's anger at losing (ok) well obv vulg went with something different it got hard to judge which segment or whatever so I followed to best of my ability n just said If I liked the section or not. I appreciate the originality but I wasn't feeling the interepretation. but I see what u did. some hot shit sprinkled throughout. Vulgar on that gangster shit. Really lettin bangers spit. Cuz this rat faced fagot sends buckshots every time he takes a pic. (this shit killed me. buck shots lmfaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaao exaggerated but fucking dumb. buck as in teeth vulgie prolly doesn't get it.) But for real u need to save the lip. Stay safe an shit. Or I'll put hands on you with no regard like the artist of that painting did. (yes) U ass an it's written on ya face...Watre u doin bruh? I shine like the sun so it'll be easy to eclipse u since ur forehead is mooning us (u saying he got an ass forehead . hahahaaa I smirked) U worthless. Malnourished. Wat happened to ya lame body? How's ur life not on track!? ur day to day look like a scene out of trainspotting (ehhh ok) So dont ever talk shit or ull regret it if u flexin on me tweaker. Bitch u gon bite ur tongue...nah for real he look like he Havin an epileptic seizure (hahahah cooooking) U are half the food chain ghoul face. Man stop. Lookin like a grasshopper slash rat lobster got his face smashed with a padlock. (wtf I kinda like it tho lol) U a snitch punjab. Anything happens an he's surely yappin. Guaranteed this songbird Swansberg gone singh. Fuckin Pakistani lookin fagot. (oh) U surround ya self w bums an crude guys dude why? I been pedaling for meals while U 2 junkies look like u just left a food drive (ok) W that face an grill there's no need to talk don't doubt fam Why even open ya mouth? I mean u could brush ya teeth without that (eh) Fagot. I'll choke u to death An make my point hard. Have ya veins poppin out ya neck worse then ya boys arms. (didn't grab me) Lmfao vulg did some things but bags fucking cooked this shit. his best were miles above vulgs in effect. that singh shit really made me say oh Immediately afgter I read it. I said Oh! lmfaaaaaaaaao good shit yo bags had some shtupi shit too but when he was at his best he had me like oh boy v.bags
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07-23-2015, 05:21 AM | #9 |
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bags got this, his verse started good and seemed to wear off towards the end...first cpl lines had me in, painting line was creative, great use of pic.
Vulgar - had some observations, lines a bit too long to my taste...i also think he didn't land too many hits that had me lol. Tried a diff route. V-bags |
07-23-2015, 10:48 AM | #10 |
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Bags was funny and had in general a lot more sting but I found vulgar made use of the photo better and had better concepts, though bags edged him in execution. Best battle I've read this week props to both. |
07-23-2015, 03:11 PM | #11 |
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vulg bars were crazy long winded yo
lol @ opener. thats a rectangle bro not a square so that fell short combs was a cool idea but execution was corny to me progressive steps was dope imo weird names - don't have a clue whatg you're talkin about so fell short satan shit had potential but execution was mild image flips was nice wtf @ this 3 bar shit? lost me there nasa shuttle was mild gopher was a swing an miss attempt at being funny cause he looks nothing like orc but do see the gray hair maybe? still bad closer was mild but another 3 line shit? weird structure vs lol buckshots hands on you was cool forehead moonin us hahaha good trainspotting was ok epileptic seizure was mild animal references were wack lol he do look paki tho food drive looooooool another buck tooth reference lol dece tho veins poppin out neck was mild vulg shit was long winded and his weird structured 3 line shits through me off bags got this - more enjoyable verse |
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why my niggas why vulg had the lotb but then he had some acid inducing shit bags was consistent and had a hard hit aswell u both were funny well vulg was funny and bags was funny in a laugh at him way bags won tho tbh i wana see a rematch and not cuz i enjoyed this one but bcuz u both owe me a good verse now after this debacle lol vbags
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