WK 8: Contender: BodySnatcher 5-2 vs. DynamiCz 4-3 - DynamiCz WINS!!

[Incredible]

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@BodySnatcher @DynamiCz

[BodySnatcher]

16 Brodie.

[DynamiCz]

Cooley!

[BodySnatcher]

I say....



U failed epically dissin my pic & for that THIS roast is merciful
Cuz if I FaceTime, this gun talk will show u how to get up close & personal
This dose is surgical - it’s a damn hassle to make ur plan dazzle
I’ll let you build it up...but when I wet ur house, it’ll look like a sandcastle
Like a grad I’ll flip this man’s tassel - bro, cld ur heart be greener?
Even my shotty’s pumped to see ur insides hang from the ceilin like a party streamer
I know my art be cleaner - it’s enough to make this child use grace
& if he’s ‘bettor in the long run’...my money says he’s on a wild goose chase
I gotta dynamic duo...1’s a 45 to leave ur waves cap & mind douse
+ a thigh holster got me shootin from the leg like Rose McGowan in Grindhouse
Before you sign out...I got the best rocket, let’s see if ur vest stop it
Cuz this launcher will wet ur body like a pen exploded in ur chest pocket
Nigga watch it - I'll steal Thor’s hammer & let a shell shock to ur mug
So if we see any Dynamic friction it’ll be as electrifying as a sock on a rug
Stop bein a thug - I lived The Life of Pablo & I’m still in the winner circle
Cuz if I lay a beat down...ur features will have no Chance like Kanye’s inner circle

[DynamiCz]

Mid sentence! Catch you ordering ya margaritas with the salt
This 40 bend back & make Body jump over the bar like a Pole Vault
Twist his neck, when you backup dont worry about a rearview
Pulled up! Rounds hot n ready out the window-lil ceasers drive thru
The bird get threaded on ya shirt, this here the Ovo Owl
Fire shots..that u'll make violent contact on Body like a flagrant foul
I need that first win back, you should thank me for the loan
12 gauge to ya face, then fully decorate it like a Model Home
Blind robbery, crazy how the judges hit me with embezzlement
Blade back & fourth! I can resolve the dispute..that's a settlement
Last week you had a Georgia line, but i move better with the tech
Incase i miss! Gun let off rings back to back-think doppler effect
Give you a dome shot in the seat, getting rid of you is a must
When Body stretched across the chair, it ain't a AB Lounge Plus
Scope aiming while you drive, try a real gun to ya brains
The arm start waving in traffic like a biker switching lanes

[Cereal]

bodysnatcher:

up close & personal - nice
sandcastle - loved it
all round style pretty clean
pen exploded in ur chest pocket - fav line
sock on a rug - cool but meh
some only average lines and closer was eahh..
but yeh all round was pretty dope..

dy:
polevault line ok
lil cease ok aswell
style is original to..
think doppler effect - fav line

vote = DynamiCz

this was close alot of punches nice work

[DMS]

V/ Dynamic,
BodySnatcher had some lines I just wasn’t feeling, some lines I was like meh.
I did find the daisy chains cool. But they weren’t done well all the time. Could’ve been better for sure.

Dy has some good lines and didn’t have as many misses.

[Jabari Black]

U failed epically dissin my pic & for that THIS roast is merciful
Cuz if I FaceTime, this gun talk will show u how to get up close & personal

(This was okay. Idk if people going to catch the personal angle but it’s a nice little touch. The punch was simple but effective. My critique is the ‘If I FaceTime’ doesn’t have enough tie in (unless the pic was a FT screenshot but I don’t think it was). Overall it was fine)

This dose is surgical - it’s a damn hassle to make ur plan dazzle
I’ll let you build it up...but when I wet ur house, it’ll look like a sandcastle

(This was just okay as well. You needed a better set up or wordplay for that punch to really hit. I see where you were going with plan/build up but it was still like the punch and setup were going in two different directions)

Like a grad I’ll flip this man’s tassel - bro, cld ur heart be greener?
Even my shotty’s pumped to see ur insides hang from the ceilin like a party streamer

(Nice. This is dope)

I know my art be cleaner - it’s enough to make this child use grace
& if he’s ‘bettor in the long run’...my money says he’s on a wild goose chase

(Hmm I’m feeling the subtle bettor/bettor/money on flip but the ‘wild goose chase part is throwing me off. Wild goose chase doesn’t tie back in to betting set up unless I missed the reference. Overall, this was decent)

I gotta dynamic duo...1’s a 45 to leave ur waves cap & mind douse
+ a thigh holster got me shootin from the leg like Rose McGowan in Grindhouse

(HA! This was clever as well)

Before you sign out...I got the best rocket, let’s see if ur vest stop it
Cuz this launcher will wet ur body like a pen exploded in ur chest pocket

(This is pretty good as well. Nitpicky but you prob should have used a different word than ‘body’ so that the flip would fit better. It’s still a good punch but you coulda polished it up more)

Nigga watch it - I'll steal Thor’s hammer & let a shell shock to ur mug
So if we see any Dynamic friction it’ll be as electrifying as a sock on a rug

(This was okay. The ‘Dynamic friction’ phrase feel slightly forced )

Stop bein a thug - I lived The Life of Pablo & I’m still in the winner circle
Cuz if I lay a beat down...ur features will have no Chance like Kanye’s inner circle

(Good concept. I guess the only thing that threw me off is that chance was featured on TLOP lol. The scheme was strong enough to carry this bar though. Pretty good)




Mid sentence! Catch you ordering ya margaritas with the salt
This 40 bend back & make Body jump over the bar like a Pole Vault

(Lol this is good. Good imagery and this is a creative punch. Didn’t take off points for this but you coulda used ‘stick’ instead of ‘40’ and it woulda tied into the punch even more. Good punch though)

Twist his neck, when you backup dont worry about a rearview
Pulled up! Rounds hot n ready out the window-lil ceasers drive thru

(Yep this is good as well. The twist his neck/back up/rear view punch in the set up is subtle but nice)

The bird get threaded on ya shirt, this here the Ovo Owl
Fire shots..that u'll make violent contact on Body like a flagrant foul

(Pretty good. Pretty sure you had a typo and meant to say ‘that’ll’ instead of ‘that u’ll’ our I still followed it. Wasn’t a haymaker but a landed punch)

I need that first win back, you should thank me for the loan
12 gauge to ya face, then fully decorate it like a Model Home

(This is just decent. Not bad but you needed a bit more to tie in because you wouldn’t typically refer to shooting someone as decorating their face. You could def but it would need a bit more tie in to not feel forced)

Blind robbery, crazy how the judges hit me with embezzlement
Blade back & fourth! I can resolve the dispute..that's a settlement

(This would have been fine but I’ve heard similar to the back and forth concept. Gotta score this one as a miss)

Last week you had a Georgia line, but i move better with the tech
Incase i miss! Gun let off rings back to back-think Doppler effect

(That’s pretty dope. Once again, props for punch in the setup)

Give you a dome shot in the seat, getting rid of you is a must
When Body stretched across the chair, it ain't a AB Lounge Plus

(This is a light jab. As a name play it was light but you set it up good enough to make the punch work.

Scope aiming while you drive, try a real gun to ya brains
The arm start waving in traffic like a biker switching lanes

(Yep, this is a dope closer)


This was a dope battle. I think it definitely lived up to how most of us thought it would turn out. This was a straight bar fest (as we expected) with both guys trying to punch each other’s heads off.

Even with two gun bar, punch heavy styles i still saw a bit of a styles clash with Dy going for the haymakers and Body with a subtler more intricate approach.

I think the difference in this battle came down to the execution. Both guys were consistent with no bad misses from either. However, Body has a few punches were the set up kinda took you in a different direction than the punch (ie look at my sandcastle feed). I also would have loved to see Body go a little more scheme heavy. Body’s really getting good at those intricate schemes (ie the screws loose bar from last week), but kinda veered away from that.

Dynamicz had good execution pretty much throughout. The problem Dy runs into is using phrases and wording that a lot of folks aren’t use to. Didn’t really run into that hear - I think you kept your wording simple and effective.

Overall both were old but dynamicz slightly edged it

Mvgt DynamiCz

[Schadenfreude]

Originally Posted by BodySnatcher

This dose is surgical - it’s a damn hassle to make ur plan dazzle
I’ll let you build it up...but when I wet ur house, it’ll look like a sandcastle
I know my art be cleaner - it’s enough to make this child use grace
& if he’s ‘bettor in the long run’...my money says he’s on a wild goose chase
Nigga watch it - I'll steal Thor’s hammer & let a shell shock to ur mug
So if we see any Dynamic friction it’ll be as electrifying as a sock on a rug

versus

Originally Posted by DynamiCz

Mid sentence! Catch you ordering ya margaritas with the salt
This 40 bend back & make Body jump over the bar like a Pole Vault
Blind robbery, crazy how the judges hit me with embezzlement
Blade back & fourth! I can resolve the dispute..that's a settlement
Last week you had a Georgia line, but i move better with the tech
Incase i miss! Gun let off rings back to back-think doppler effect

VOTE BODYSNATCHER..he gets the edge. Overall there were way too many pointless gun bars in this battle & this is from the biggest gun play advocate, second only to Cred. But y'all got really fucking irritating w/ that shit lol.

[Barcotic]

Originally Posted by BodySnatcher

U failed epically dissin my pic & for that THIS roast is merciful
Cuz if I FaceTime, this gun talk will show u how to get up close & personal
dont like
This dose is surgical - it’s a damn hassle to make ur plan dazzle
I’ll let you build it up...but when I wet ur house, it’ll look like a sandcastle
fire concept, weak execution. ill give it a decent, but what u could have done w this woulda been a haymaker
Like a grad I’ll flip this man’s tassel - bro, cld ur heart be greener?
Even my shotty’s pumped to see ur insides hang from the ceilin like a party streamer
decent again, shotty's pumped helped
I know my art be cleaner - it’s enough to make this child use grace
& if he’s ‘bettor in the long run’...my money says he’s on a wild goose chase
nahh
I gotta dynamic duo...1’s a 45 to leave ur waves cap & mind douse
+ a thigh holster got me shootin from the leg like Rose McGowan in Grindhouse
not feelin
Before you sign out...I got the best rocket, let’s see if ur vest stop it
Cuz this launcher will wet ur body like a pen exploded in ur chest pocket
could have been dope but this is a miss for me, needed more
Nigga watch it - I'll steal Thor’s hammer & let a shell shock to ur mug
So if we see any Dynamic friction it’ll be as electrifying as a sock on a rug
corny
Stop bein a thug - I lived The Life of Pablo & I’m still in the winner circle
Cuz if I lay a beat down...ur features will have no Chance like Kanye’s inner circle
weak + circle/circle scheme? nah

2 jabs
6 misses

vs

DynamiCz
Mid sentence! Catch you ordering ya margaritas with the salt
This 40 bend back & make Body jump over the bar like a Pole Vault
good
Twist his neck, when you backup dont worry about a rearview
Pulled up! Rounds hot n ready out the window-lil ceasers drive thru
nah, rounds concepts are whack
The bird get threaded on ya shirt, this here the Ovo Owl
Fire shots..that u'll make violent contact on Body like a flagrant foul
no, weak execution
I need that first win back, you should thank me for the loan
12 gauge to ya face, then fully decorate it like a Model Home
played n corny tbh
Blind robbery, crazy how the judges hit me with embezzlement
Blade back & fourth! I can resolve the dispute..that's a settlement
same as last
Last week you had a Georgia line, but i move better with the tech
Incase i miss! Gun let off rings back to back-think doppler effect
cool
Give you a dome shot in the seat, getting rid of you is a must
When Body stretched across the chair, it ain't a AB Lounge Plus
miss
Scope aiming while you drive, try a real gun to ya brains
The arm start waving in traffic like a biker switching lanes
ok

2 gd punches
1 jab
5 misses

v/dy

[Incredible]

DynamiCz:

"Mid sentence! Catch you ordering ya margaritas with the salt
This 40 bend back & make Body jump over the bar like a Pole Vault"

"Twist his neck, when you backup dont worry about a rearview
Pulled up! Rounds hot n ready out the window-lil ceasers drive thru"

"The bird get threaded on ya shirt, this here the Ovo Owl
Fire shots..that u'll make violent contact on Body like a flagrant foul"

"Give you a dome shot in the seat, getting rid of you is a must
When Body stretched across the chair, it ain't a AB Lounge Plus"

BodySnatcher:

"This dose is surgical - it’s a damn hassle to make ur plan dazzle
I’ll let you build it up...but when I wet ur house, it’ll look like a sandcastle"

"I know my art be cleaner - it’s enough to make this child use grace
& if he’s ‘bettor in the long run’...my money says he’s on a wild goose chase"

"I gotta dynamic duo...1’s a 45 to leave ur waves cap & mind douse
+ a thigh holster got me shootin from the leg like Rose McGowan in Grindhouse"

"Stop bein a thug - I lived The Life of Pablo & I’m still in the winner circle
Cuz if I lay a beat down...ur features will have no Chance like Kanye’s inner circle"


Overall this was a dope battle a lot of good bars from both at least one more I could've quoted from Dy but yeah good shit. I felt like body had a lot of really good concepts and just didn't hit the wording on them right. Dy to me only had a couple misses and first 3 bars he came out swinging and with that and an overall better verse I gotta give this to DynamiCz. Really props to both for real, Body is really improving a lot I hope he sees that.