Infiltration vs Swerve - Swerve wins

[Orc]

Netcees Battle League: The Legends Edition

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@Infiltration @Swerve

[Saint]

10 or 12?

[Swerve]

10 plz

[Saint]

Originally Posted by Swerve

I don't think I know how to do this anymore, tbh.

aka pat

The NBL's back! Get ran off before u dead it fellow
Made a dick move... a bad swerve rexazyte faster than threads by Geno.
U don't kill like Vikings or spike kings u wack geek
If Pat Shurmur da head of anything it's the OC coach of ^that team.
& votes wont be straight down the middle... got it nerd?
Dog, u can swayback all u want it only projects that lordotic curve.
Man ya scare easy. Up & flee seein these hands I bare
But I'll bring u down from your flight mechanism when I land w/ flair.
Youz'a mega buster; head is covered if the choppa firing
Shots pop violently til your skulls on the machine, that's Dr Wiley.

[Swerve]

Inf ran shit while I was gone; held it down better yet,
But now Greatness RETURNS!!!....and I'm glad to see mediocrity never left.
Swerve gun you down with the 22, get these fed toys to sing,
So many bullets'll enter filtration system, a whole city'll get lead poisioning.
You're my son, just check my history of merrits and kills,
I'll beat you so bad, Zelph's next vid will comment on my parenting skills.
No lie, it's been hard, sometimes every day is a curse,
Life's full of Growing Pains...I had those while reading your Open Mic verse.
You collect garbage from other sites, it stays depressing me,
That's the most pathetic arc-I've seen since your career trajectory.

[Captain Neckbeard]

Originally Posted by Infiltration

aka pat

The NBL's back! Get ran off before u dead it fellow
Made a dick move... a bad swerve rexazyte faster than threads by Geno.

this is ok...I liked karps flip on this better but the wordplay was a nice touch

U don't kill like Vikings or spike kings u wack geek
If Pat Shurmur da head of anything it's the OC coach of ^that team.

nah

& votes wont be straight down the middle... got it nerd?
Dog, u can swayback all u want it only projects that lordotic curve.

wat

Man ya scare easy. Up & flee seein these hands I bare
But I'll bring u down from your flight mechanism when I land w/ flair.

idk what is happening in this verse anymore honestly

Youz'a mega buster; head is covered if the choppa firing
Shots pop violently til your skulls on the machine, that's Dr Wiley.

set up was horrible punch was dece

Originally Posted by Swerve

Inf ran shit while I was gone; held it down better yet,
But now Greatness RETURNS!!!....and I'm glad to see mediocrity never left.

ok ok

Swerve gun you down with the 22, get these fed toys to sing,
So many bullets'll enter filtration system, a whole city'll get lead poisioning.

not bad

You're my son, just check my history of merrits and kills,
I'll beat you so bad, Zelph's next vid will comment on my parenting skills.

lol ok

No lie, it's been hard, sometimes every day is a curse,
Life's full of Growing Pains...I had those while reading your Open Mic verse.

meh weak

You collect garbage from other sites, it stays depressing me,
That's the most pathetic arc-I've seen since your career trajectory.

fire

I got swerve in this one pretty handily. inf tried to do too much with a couple of his bars. just trynna be too complex at times....I seen him do it before....I don't want to be trying to solve a riddle when I read a verse....theres a line between clever and obscure and incomprehensible.

v swerve

[Chyeahhh!!!]

Inf-----Good flow, concepts, and structure

Swerve-----good flow, concepts, and structure

damn near neck n neck but I vote Swerve, more direct verse and a good showing being his 1st battle in a minute. Inf held it down

[Habitat]

The NBL's back! Get ran off before u dead it fellow
Made a dick move... a bad swerve rexazyte faster than threads by Geno.
-reach.
U don't kill like Vikings or spike kings u wack geek
If Pat Shurmur da head of anything it's the OC coach of ^that team.
-not feeling this
& votes wont be straight down the middle... got it nerd?
Dog, u can swayback all u want it only projects that lordotic curve.
-not a fan
Man ya scare easy. Up & flee seein these hands I bare
But I'll bring u down from your flight mechanism when I land w/ flair.
-i dont like how u tried to tie this all together.. "bring u down from ur flight mechanism" like who says that lol
Youz'a mega buster; head is covered if the choppa firing
Shots pop violently til your skulls on the machine, that's Dr Wiley.
-i hate "and thats something" style bars. not a fan

vs

Inf ran shit while I was gone; held it down better yet,
But now Greatness RETURNS!!!....and I'm glad to see mediocrity never left.
-this is good
Swerve gun you down with the 22, get these fed toys to sing,
So many bullets'll enter filtration system, a whole city'll get lead poisioning.
-this was dope
You're my son, just check my history of merrits and kills,
I'll beat you so bad, Zelph's next vid will comment on my parenting skills.
-lol this is good
No lie, it's been hard, sometimes every day is a curse,
Life's full of Growing Pains...I had those while reading your Open Mic verse.
-was his vers called growing pains? this was light either way for me..
You collect garbage from other sites, it stays depressing me,
That's the most pathetic arc-I've seen since your career trajectory.
-career projectory makes sense and is good, just not seeing where arc came form.
it seems like it was just plopped in there and doesn't make sense.. unless im missing something..

This was one sided in my eyes. infilatration u need some work my friend.

v-swerve

[Schadenfreude]

Inf is infamous for using obscure references or subject matter to base his concepts on lol. I respect that tho, because of the creativity. The problem is the wording doesn't get the ideas across some times, which in turn diffuses the punch impact. 'Lordotic curve' & 'Doc Wiley' were both good, even tho niggas hated. The rest of the verse was lacking tho tbh. Swerve was cool w/ an overall decent offering, 'filtration system' & 'parenting skills' were the stand-outs, which won the battle for you, VOTE SWERVE.

[For Battling]

The NBL's back! Get ran off before u dead it fellow
Made a dick move... a bad swerve rexazyte faster than threads by Geno.
this could have been good but execution hurt it
U don't kill like Vikings or spike kings u wack geek
If Pat Shurmur da head of anything it's the OC coach of ^that team.
forced but I liked it for what it was, not bad
& votes wont be straight down the middle... got it nerd?
Dog, u can swayback all u want it only projects that lordotic curve.
someone else recently used the word lordotic, ima have to bar check this one..
Man ya scare easy. Up & flee seein these hands I bare
But I'll bring u down from your flight mechanism when I land w/ flair.
nah wasn’t feeling this
Youz'a mega buster; head is covered if the choppa firing
Shots pop violently til your skulls on the machine, that's Dr Wiley.
this was dope to me


I feel like you switched up your style a bit since the last few battles of yours that I’ve read. You were reaching for the sky here but only a few worked. You know what you need to improve on for next week, and I’m sure you’ll deliver.

Vs


Inf ran shit while I was gone; held it down better yet,
But now Greatness RETURNS!!!....and I'm glad to see mediocrity never left.
tbh I didn’t like this, real basic to me. 2005 type ish
Swerve gun you down with the 22, get these fed toys to sing,
So many bullets'll enter filtration system, a whole city'll get lead Poisoning.
this was FIRE
You're my son, just check my history of merrits and kills,
I'll beat you so bad, Zelph's next vid will comment on my parenting skills.
alright
No lie, it's been hard, sometimes every day is a curse,
Life's full of Growing Pains...I had those while reading your Open Mic verse.
not bad
You collect garbage from other sites, it stays depressing me,
That's the most pathetic arc-I've seen since your career trajectory
lol nice I liked this


Swerve dropped a good verse here, nothing to complain about tbh. Didn’t like his opener but everything else was a hit. Filtration system & trajectory LOTB

VOTE: Swerve

[DMVsToneB]

Originally Posted by Infiltration

aka pat

The NBL's back! Get ran off before u dead it fellow
Made a dick move... a bad swerve rexazyte faster than threads by Geno.
dunno wth this was about ...
U don't kill like Vikings or spike kings u wack geek
If Pat Shurmur da head of anything it's the OC coach of ^that team.
or this ... ok
& votes wont be straight down the middle... got it nerd?
Dog, u can swayback all u want it only projects that lordotic curve.
wtf is a lordotic curve?
Man ya scare easy. Up & flee seein these hands I bare
But I'll bring u down from your flight mechanism when I land w/ flair.
nah
Youz'a mega buster; head is covered if the choppa firing
Shots pop violently til your skulls on the machine, that's Dr Wiley.
not feelin

Originally Posted by Swerve

Inf ran shit while I was gone; held it down better yet,
But now Greatness RETURNS!!!....and I'm glad to see mediocrity never left.
decent
Swerve gun you down with the 22, get these fed toys to sing,
So many bullets'll enter filtration system, a whole city'll get lead poisioning.
decent concept, didnt like the wording
You're my son, just check my history of merrits and kills,
I'll beat you so bad, Zelph's next vid will comment on my parenting skills.
huh?
No lie, it's been hard, sometimes every day is a curse,
Life's full of Growing Pains...I had those while reading your Open Mic verse.
not bad
You collect garbage from other sites, it stays depressing me,
That's the most pathetic arc-I've seen since your career trajectory.
nice

v/ swerve

[Victor.]

Swerve