10-10-2017, 02:00 PM | #1 |
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Yoooooo
Made a beat what do u guys think? feedback appreciated in any form https://soundcloud.com/fivelions/0ne
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10-10-2017, 02:13 PM | #2 |
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Enjoyed your drums, snares and bass but the sample sucked, IMO. Didn't like the looped sample at all.
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10-10-2017, 02:14 PM | #3 |
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the hook feels cluttered...an something about the voice...like the pitch is off? idk
I love samples like that tho....was hype when the beat dropped at 37 sec too....feels like something Bronson would've laced in his early days cool shit...needs some work but I fuck w it |
10-10-2017, 02:24 PM | #4 |
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any changes i could add in your opinion? switch the sample more often? change it? renew the hook? let me know thanks bro bless |
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Like I said, the drums were straight, IMO. |
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10-10-2017, 02:51 PM | #8 |
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Sample was fire.
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10-10-2017, 03:28 PM | #9 |
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Diggin it. Thought it was dope. A little more balancing out and i would hop on this shit
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10-10-2017, 09:34 PM | #10 |
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10-11-2017, 12:12 PM | #11 |
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10-11-2017, 12:13 PM | #13 | |
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https://soundcloud.com/fivelions/modulations
https://soundcloud.com/fivelions/sovngarde made 2 new beats today, what you guys think? sample: Last edited by wasim; 10-11-2017 at 12:22 PM. |
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10-11-2017, 12:36 PM | #14 |
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real soulful....think the drop of the sample when the verse came in was a lil' rough sounding an could be smoothed out... but from that point it's nice...good mix of the horns...drums soundin' dope.... wish they switched up here an there tho'
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push the sample to the back a lil more, its too prominent, would improve the shit 10 fold i reckon, def dont get rid of it though same with the shit at 50 sec mark, shit sounded too sharp in this bitch, & this beat mellow as a muthafucka so yeah i like it though |
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10-22-2017, 03:02 PM | #16 |
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WILL FEEDBACK
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