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02-15-2014, 10:02 PM
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Kwality vs James Bond - KWAL WINS
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House rules No two line breakdowns(vote wise) Get your links Due 48 hrs |
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02-15-2014, 10:04 PM
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02-15-2014, 10:04 PM
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I've got links, but I can't link them on my phone.
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02-15-2014, 10:06 PM
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@James Bond just write in who they are ..
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02-15-2014, 10:08 PM
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Orc vs Vulgar
Someone vs Certain in a topical battle. |
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02-15-2014, 10:20 PM
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You don't pack heat & wear a pistol, ur pussy that's very simple
No one is running from 'bond' ... Unless it's Strikta or Gregory Crystal Don't act 'tough' you 'soft' like the meat is tender Cause when there is beef you always want to bail bond like a repeat offender You wouldn't do time in the pen your a snitch coward Only time we see a good bond posting I'm released in 6 hours Your a faggit dude & love when they rail your throat You & girls only have a bond james when they take the male approach You actually Show up james? Would be surprising for me Cuz I figured we 'Wood' see 'Bonduc' but that's the only place to find that tree Last edited by KwaL!ty; 02-16-2014 at 11:34 PM. |
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02-21-2014, 10:18 PM
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02-21-2014, 10:40 PM
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You're funny. You'd really put that drop in the public?
I could shop for Tyson's gloves and see more Kwal!ty punches. You're horse shit on tracks, you need a jockey to buffer Cause you pack crap and love it like some sodomist fuckers. You bite others bars, but you're claiming there's nothing common? You'd rather die before you take the rap, I'm naming you Tutankamen. That's a woman's rap with how you're missin the frees. So if it's quality before Bond? It's prison release. He's at his locker if we see this faggot next in the hall While he's another name on my list like Veteran Walls. |
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02-26-2014, 12:46 PM
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Kwality
Solid flow and excellent ending rhymes scheme..your verse was an easy ready and flowed nice Bond Again you had a decent verse as well..wish your punches could have connected just a little harder..you had a nice flow as well and was a pretty easy read..your closer could have been harder to finish strong MVGT Kwality for stronger verse stay up |
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02-26-2014, 02:17 PM
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JB- your punchlines not stronger enuff, you opener need more work. This was a good verse but stronger enuff win.
Vote-Kwality. |
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02-26-2014, 04:25 PM
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There were 3 bail bond lines in this damn battle. Talk about redundant as shit.
Don't act 'tough' you 'soft' like the meat is tender Cause when there is beef you always want to bail bond like a repeat offender You wouldn't do time in the pen your a snitch coward Only time we see a good bond posting I'm released in 6 hours Your a faggit dude & love when they rail your throat You & girls only have a bond james when they take the male approach vs You're horse shit on tracks, you need a jockey to buffer Cause you pack crap and love it like some sodomist fuckers. I felt like Kwality was more consistent and had better concepts MVGT - Kwality |
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02-27-2014, 04:23 AM
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I hated all the bail bond lines. They seemed played right out of the gate. Kwalitys flips were way more fresh.though, the good bond posting line being the best. James had one good bar that really stood out because the wording was crisp(sodomist fucker line) but the line is still played.
I got kwality taking this with the more cleanly written verse.
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02-27-2014, 10:48 AM
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Don't act 'tough' you 'soft' like the meat is tender
Cause when there is beef you always want to bail bond like a repeat offender You wouldn't do time in the pen your a snitch coward Only time we see a good bond posting I'm released in 6 hours vs You're horse shit on tracks, you need a jockey to buffer Cause you pack crap and love it like some sodomist fuckers. Kwality's punches were more effective, IMO. James seems like he has the grasp of battling, wording is nice but his concepts are outdated. Work on some fresh concepts and you'll be straight. The only bar quoted was nicely worded/executed but played as hell, bro. v/KawLy |
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02-27-2014, 01:07 PM
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You don't pack heat & wear a pistol, ur pussy that's very simple
No one is running from 'bond' ... Unless it's Strikta or Gregory Crystal You wouldn't do time in the pen your a snitch coward Only time we see a good bond posting I'm released in 6 hours vs You bite others bars, but you're claiming there's nothing common? You'd rather die before you take the rap, I'm naming you Tutankamen. This was one sided, honestly I wasn't feeling Kwal that much, alot of stuff was played out and/or weak hitting, I think you over did it with some of your ideas. On the other hand James I wasn't feeling your punches too simple and some frankly didn't make much sense, your flow was good so just work on harder hitters. Vote-Kwality |
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