Destroyer vs. Jayson fresh {Destroyer wins}

[~RustyGunZ~]

Round One

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FIGHT!

DUE: Friday, the 5th of June @ 11:59 PM PST aka 3 am on the beast coast

12-16 lines, NO MORE AND NO LESS
The rest you already know, I won't accept tom foolery and fuckery

@Destroyer
@Jayson Fresh

[Destroyer]

Hello mr. fresh.
I will be going 14 lines cause fuck 12

[JaysonFresh]

check, sounds good

[Destroyer]

dude got the weirdest style ever seen with dubious stuff
with that Odwalla text no wonder we think ya fruity as fuck
Man, u were missed bro. But des won’t. The SIG still got 9 left
make no mistake. there will be lots of clapping on ur return to the lime, fresh
des will hurt this bitch. I’m old, but I’m still current kid
u had to research me to write ur bars. I already knew that u weren’t shit
it’s hard out here for a pimp. harder even when u da bitch
Fuck with D Jay? End up on a bathroom floor bleeding like Ludacris
that’s filler. not a punch. gotta bring that fire. I feel u, coop.
when I light up the Jay son, I get that head pounding before smoke even fills the room
this Katniss to go... cue the pointing and yelling...
They’ll be mocking jay long before district 2 joins the rebellion
des will damage nerds. we both know how this battle turns.
if they see a jay v, it just proof that this classic’s filled with amateurs

[JaysonFresh]

Mafucka its showtime.
Cue the training montage. Release confetti. Des wanna brawl ?
real head turner 2nite when I pop ya top followed by series of spin offs u Better Call Saul
Fresh in clutch form. Readjust the sniper scope target
no Undertaker Documentary I unload clip after clip on this choke artist
..sooo.. browsed ur archives & only one conclusion I could see..
planned parenthood pamphlets. not one reading material viable that came out this pussy
Ur records proof. That style. The concepts. over & over. Give us something new
running same game different beast nigga stop it ya careers Temple Run 2
take it to the streeeeet.. gut shot.. record n go viral when I knock your ass
No Applebees but ya ribs’ll lay out roadside u’d think bums used em for doordash
Next round pleeeaaase .. this warm up was truly nonsense
Fresh the type to knock roof of ya mouth off with a roundhouse.. n lose the security deposit
Destroyer vs the king of punchlines.. This battle phased me hardly
While panic aint just settling in on u, its hosting the housewarming party

[UserName]

going with Des here.

Close battle.

dude got the weirdest style ever seen with dubious stuff
with that Odwalla text no wonder we think ya fruity as fuck
it’s hard out here for a pimp. harder even when u da bitch
Fuck with D Jay? End up on a bathroom floor bleeding like Ludacris
this Katniss to go... cue the pointing and yelling...
They’ll be mocking jay long before district 2 joins the rebellion

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Fresh in clutch form. Readjust the sniper scope target
no Undertaker Documentary I unload clip after clip on this choke artist
take it to the streeeeet.. gut shot.. record n go viral when I knock your ass
No Applebees but ya ribs’ll lay out roadside u’d think bums used em for doordash
Next round pleeeaaase .. this warm up was truly nonsense
Fresh the type to knock roof of ya mouth off with a roundhouse.. n lose the security deposit

Overall, I felt Des came stronger - same amount of quotables from each, but I liked Des' wording and execution of the concepts more. Jay's in particular sometimes came off too wordy, or didn't really land because of the wording. Best battle I've read yet though, and as i said, it's fairly close. I could see this going either way depending on who's style you prefer more.

v - Des

[Ajax]

I got destroyer winning this. It was fairly close, but I thought destroyer was more concise and executed his concepts better. I think Jayson might have been able to take it if he worded his ideas better, but as it stands, Destroyer won.

[Steve Fox]

dude got the weirdest style ever seen with dubious stuff
with that Odwalla text no wonder we think ya fruity as fuck

Katniss is forced wp as fuck. Don't have any gifs to currently react to that, but slowly thinking about it makes me depressed.

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nothing

V - Destroyer. I liked the opener and didn't really like much else from the verse. I thought the Katniss wp was forced, again, but I almost quoted the Ludacris bar. I assume it was a reference to the "Get Back" music video lol, but then, it wouldn't be accurate. Jayson Fresh, for the most part, your bars were long as everlasting shit. Every bar started off somewhere, then the next one was just ridiculously long to the point the punch didn't hit for me. Closest bar for me to a quotable was the Undertaker line, but the wording was soft as hell to me, and it didn't really attack the opponent in a harsh way. It was like a soft jab, and that's the best out of the verse to me. Maybe it's a stylistic thing, or I just don't like the verse, but nothing really hit overall.

[Fracture]

Not sure what everyone else is reading. Destroyer took it pretty easy imo


Destoryer hit a good stride startiing with the 'you werent shit' line. The rest had a good vibe with some mixed in quotables

Jayfresh the last two punches were pretty good, but eberything that led up to it fell flat

Vote- destroyer

[Resin M-I-C]

spin off, undertake, housewarming.. shit with adjustment in wording all those concepts woulda been solid and coulda been made it into good ass lines .. as it is it felt like it was all over.. i did like temple run 2

des was pretty consistant, and in contrast felt effortless, which is a positive.. opener, mocking jay.. yeah u took it

v Des

[~RustyGunZ~]

Destroyer wins