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05-29-2014, 12:24 PM
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raw vs. sublime [Sublime WINS]
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05-29-2014, 03:16 PM
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this fag's nervous. cuz Word is I Excel at text, so he'll probably choke bad
quit. don't even type shit. it'll be a Dizaster if he go to his Notepad. I'm your Master, bitch. i'll rob your new kicks, leave u barefoot in the rain. this nigga must think he Django the way he was losing his chain this weakling can't stand pain. a punch to his face'll feel like an A-bomb i bet getting a fat lip would kill this bitch, like Kanye's mom think you nicer than me? it's the other around, you fuckin trick bastard check his name. anyone thinkin' his words are raw has got that shit backward must'a been high to challenge me. cuz u don't got enough balls to defeat me I'll Show the World. he must'a been a Lil Boosie to think to think he beat me |
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05-29-2014, 08:32 PM
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excellence. purified.
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i'd instruct ya to become a winner.. follow a G, nobody has to tell me..
but if nc 'lettuce the subway'.. we'd just classify this fruit as a BLT even? no shame to odds but pleeease.. this boy is even lame to God coz the chances of him getting rank 4/10's .. lies in the looks of the average broad! perv. find a job, real shit herb u couldnt blossom raised in a flower batch.. coz ill break lime's "limb in (lemon) thru his mouth" til the kid resembles a sour patch! your lines make me laugh & shit.. peep the scene, hoes? no, u cant grasp a chick me?! i smack a bitch! yours? 'i stick her (sticker) in every hole' .. u barely scratch n sniff! i bust bars, target practice site... a submarine? ha! i doubt he the deadliest, type?! chances are, he's fishin for a shark but instead the 'boy caught ah L' like medicated lesbian heists! (boycott ah L)
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05-30-2014, 08:52 AM
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think you nicer than me? it's the other around, you fuckin trick bastard
check his name. anyone thinkin' his words are raw has got that shit backward Wack but your best attempt, tbh. vs i'd instruct ya to become a winner.. follow a G, nobody has to tell me.. but if nc 'lettuce the subway'.. we'd just classify this fruit as a BLT What does this even mean? And how is it a punch? Please elaborate. even? no shame to odds but pleeease.. this boy is even lame to God coz the chances of him getting rank 4/10's .. lies in the looks of the average broad! Not sure what you're talkin about, again tbh. perv. find a job, real shit herb u couldnt blossom raised in a flower batch.. coz ill break lime's "limb in (lemon) thru his mouth" til the kid resembles a sour patch! Super forced. LEM-IN sounds nothing like LIMB. your lines make me laugh & shit.. peep the scene, hoes? no, u cant grasp a chick me?! i smack a bitch! yours? 'i stick her (sticker) in every hole' .. u barely scratch n sniff! Simple but your best attempt, yet. i bust bars, target practice site... a submarine? ha! i doubt he the deadliest, type?! chances are, he's fishin for a shark but instead the 'boy caught ah L' like medicated lesbian heists! Simile is horrible, boycott.boy caught wordplays are played as well. v/ Not sure at the moment, both verses were pretty weak/bad. I'll return to edit in a WINNER, shortly. |
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05-31-2014, 01:59 AM
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V/ raw
Better attempts at punches. Some played attempts but still had a better thought process and a better flow to his verse. |
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06-01-2014, 08:51 PM
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Accomplishments - can recite entirety of shrek 2
Champed - tangoed with spider man behind scenes in spider-man 2
- was candidate for gerber baby 3x
- smush parker like bb comment on instagram saying "u fucka suck idiyote"
- smush beer on head and didn't cry
- parallel parked in between 2 ferrari's in tonky truck once
- when saying pledge of allegiance i said "i don't" lmao deadass bb satan
- won tshirt from taco bell saying "taco cat" is the same backwards for filling out 500 surveys in a
- neighbor house caught on fire i call FIRE department and saved lives, was in newspaper
- set neighbor house on fire lmao
- fuck neighbor husband and wife
- first fish caught resembled david ortiz
- colin kaepernick
- related to genghis khan
- elected assistant to the vice president assistant to the president for regional chess club
- never lost game of hide and seek
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HMPH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Didnt enjoy either. Both had this wirey tacky feel to it. Especially words. Didn't like the wordplay employed, especially boy caught an l. Bad. Sometimes you do less with trying to do too much. You don't have to have cool punchlines to win. Just have to have little stingers. Sublime provided more of da stingers.
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06-25-2014, 07:40 PM
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Vote-sublime. Punches hit harder and he made me chuckle more. Pretty weak battle tho. Favorite bar
I'm your Master, bitch. i'll rob your new kicks, leave u barefoot in the rain. this nigga must think he Django the way he was losing his chain
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07-10-2014, 11:40 PM
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V raw
Liked the limb line the most. Blime had kanye line but raw was a lil better n more creative. |
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07-13-2014, 04:01 AM
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both guys are decent but have too much filler for my personal preference. the kanyes mom line got a chuckle but the scratch and sniff line edged it imo
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07-13-2014, 08:12 PM
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Location: fucka idiyote
Posts: 5,716
Battle Record: Faggot-1
Accomplishments - can recite entirety of shrek 2
Champed - tangoed with spider man behind scenes in spider-man 2
- was candidate for gerber baby 3x
- smush parker like bb comment on instagram saying "u fucka suck idiyote"
- smush beer on head and didn't cry
- parallel parked in between 2 ferrari's in tonky truck once
- when saying pledge of allegiance i said "i don't" lmao deadass bb satan
- won tshirt from taco bell saying "taco cat" is the same backwards for filling out 500 surveys in a
- neighbor house caught on fire i call FIRE department and saved lives, was in newspaper
- set neighbor house on fire lmao
- fuck neighbor husband and wife
- first fish caught resembled david ortiz
- colin kaepernick
- related to genghis khan
- elected assistant to the vice president assistant to the president for regional chess club
- never lost game of hide and seek
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SUBLIME PROVIDED MROE STINGER SO HE MORE STINGERY
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07-14-2014, 08:42 AM
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07-23-2014, 12:43 AM
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4-2 raw.
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07-23-2014, 05:02 AM
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think you nicer than me? it's the other around, you fuckin trick bastard check his name. anyone thinkin' his words are raw has got that shit backward Vs Raw your lines make me laugh & shit.. peep the scene, hoes? no, u cant grasp a chick me?! i smack a bitch! yours? 'i stick her (sticker) in every hole' .. u barely scratch n sniff! Raws punches were forced. Sublime was simple even though not much landed V/Sub |
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07-23-2014, 05:12 AM
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I also thot both verses didnt have anything special but for each one doing his thing ducking sublime came with a much more legible verse whereas raw wasnt impressing me and most his lines werent connecting the way he wanted them to
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07-25-2014, 07:49 PM
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07-26-2014, 12:11 AM
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this was a weak battle. im not sure where raw was going with explaining wordplay in the middle of the line. made it hard to read. sublime, had some ok lines, nothing dope, enough to get my vote tho.
vote: sublime
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07-27-2014, 11:59 PM
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Sublime Wins. 6-4
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