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Old 05-25-2013, 05:39 PM   #1
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Nomads all day, fuck the vets, were running nets
Cause I haven't met a Mike I wouldn't love to wreck
Were the toughest yep leaving em a sluggish mess
So indirect Geno dosent even have any punches left
Above the rest? man you guys are some duds at best
No shaking off those cob webs G when ya rust to death
Ya suck at text, closet full of things you must regret
Set those objectives but beating us you aint done it yet
Prolly netcees dumbest set, I can tell ya weaker
Kinda rhetorical ya witty but dont do well with pheaturez
We wander above the rest, the reason their calling us nomads
Wanted to cuss out dude but realized hes only Vulgar with vocab
More like a washed up throw back, Im not fearing the old
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Old 05-25-2013, 05:54 PM   #2
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Old 05-25-2013, 06:09 PM   #3
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Crew battle?????? tbh I think Geno came harder with the flows and punches but this
was still solid had some nice nameplays.
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Old 05-25-2013, 07:32 PM   #4
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a good old fashioned crew diss. pretty cool, nothing out of this world or phenomenal but it seemed typed up quick. flowed nicely. the problem with pieces like this is that it doesn't really prove anything. except that we are in your head. but hey most definitely some battles will arise out of this
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Old 05-25-2013, 08:51 PM   #5
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Lol. Its amazing what a om post can start. Things are finna get real direct soon, don't even wory bout it.
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Old 05-25-2013, 09:12 PM   #6
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Wack. Didnt geno wax ur whole crew last time then zygote pissed on ur graves?
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Old 05-25-2013, 10:20 PM   #7
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Lmao pretty sure me and geno went toe to toe...maybe the old
Nomads but we have new faces...

Take that as a complement Bags...and game on Geno...glad it sparked some fun
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Actually, from nameplay punchline perspective sane took this. Geno's was too indirect. Sure geno's read smoothly but thats not enough. I'm sure mores to come....but tbh being a better battle artist doesn't make you the better writer as a whole. You wanna beat the Nomads and be able to proovingly say your a better writer? Beat us in every category then. Topical, s&f, bragodocio, etc etc. Good look. Eventually adolf does die you know? Along with his entire regime. @Genocide @EndSane
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Geno the god of all those catergories btw.
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Lol. Crew vs Crew tournament would solve this..
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Old 05-25-2013, 10:56 PM   #11
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Old 05-26-2013, 12:13 PM   #14
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My lil prodigy bout to get in y'all ass lolol. Hand them that work objective. Ill be here with something after my daughter goes home and shit. Good lil drop tho @EndSane
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Nomads all day, fuck the vets, were running nets
Cause I haven't met a Mike I wouldn't love to wreck
Were the toughest yep leaving em a sluggish mess
So indirect Geno dosent even have any punches left
Above the rest? man you guys are some duds at best
No shaking off those cob webs G when ya rust to death
Ya suck at text, closet full of things you must regret
Set those objectives but beating us you aint done it yet

Very smooth flow..... Drop as a whole was real nice...
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This was cool, I felt like it could have came stronger
buuuut this was the beginning of everything, sooo it's understandable
I feel like you may have sacraficed word usage for punches though
can't wait to see where the rest of this goes though...


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We wander above the rest, the reason their calling us nomads
Wanted to cuss out dude but realized hes only Vulgar with vocab

lol this was a pretty cool diss, seemed more like playful jabs than a true trendsetter for any beef to follow.
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Thanks it wasnt suppose to be hard hitting tbh...thanks tho...kind of hard to really diss a plethera of dudes...
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playful, ticklish jabs that amused me.
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no clue about beef battling crews whatever the fuck but as far as a verse i liked it. came off pretty aggressively. quick precise flowing. nothing crazy technical, but served its purpose. couple little jabs... didn't see any haymakers but for something that seemed quickly written it was respectable so nice job, i enjoyed it.
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