05-25-2013, 05:39 PM | #1 |
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Fuck a Warning Shot(Im indirectly above the rest)
Nomads all day, fuck the vets, were running nets
Cause I haven't met a Mike I wouldn't love to wreck Were the toughest yep leaving em a sluggish mess So indirect Geno dosent even have any punches left Above the rest? man you guys are some duds at best No shaking off those cob webs G when ya rust to death Ya suck at text, closet full of things you must regret Set those objectives but beating us you aint done it yet Prolly netcees dumbest set, I can tell ya weaker Kinda rhetorical ya witty but dont do well with pheaturez We wander above the rest, the reason their calling us nomads Wanted to cuss out dude but realized hes only Vulgar with vocab More like a washed up throw back, Im not fearing the old Since yall wanna get real might as well recruit the serial bowl Mikes clearly a foe, deliriously watch me bomb these pest Iambent only when his little mans thinking about Kanye West Ouch...ur up gentlemen
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05-25-2013, 05:54 PM | #2 |
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Dope ish fam a lam
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05-25-2013, 06:09 PM | #3 |
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Crew battle?????? tbh I think Geno came harder with the flows and punches but this
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05-25-2013, 07:32 PM | #4 |
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a good old fashioned crew diss. pretty cool, nothing out of this world or phenomenal but it seemed typed up quick. flowed nicely. the problem with pieces like this is that it doesn't really prove anything. except that we are in your head. but hey most definitely some battles will arise out of this
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05-25-2013, 08:51 PM | #5 |
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Lol. Its amazing what a om post can start. Things are finna get real direct soon, don't even wory bout it.
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05-25-2013, 09:12 PM | #6 |
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Wack. Didnt geno wax ur whole crew last time then zygote pissed on ur graves?
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05-25-2013, 10:20 PM | #7 |
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Lmao pretty sure me and geno went toe to toe...maybe the old
Nomads but we have new faces... Take that as a complement Bags...and game on Geno...glad it sparked some fun
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Actually, from nameplay punchline perspective sane took this. Geno's was too indirect. Sure geno's read smoothly but thats not enough. I'm sure mores to come....but tbh being a better battle artist doesn't make you the better writer as a whole. You wanna beat the Nomads and be able to proovingly say your a better writer? Beat us in every category then. Topical, s&f, bragodocio, etc etc. Good look. Eventually adolf does die you know? Along with his entire regime. @Genocide @EndSane
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05-25-2013, 10:52 PM | #9 |
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Geno the god of all those catergories btw.
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Lol. Crew vs Crew tournament would solve this..
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05-25-2013, 10:56 PM | #11 |
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O snap
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05-26-2013, 12:10 AM | #12 |
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welp.
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05-26-2013, 12:02 PM | #13 |
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That would be boring as people already know the outcome. Ya'll aint got shit on us.
EndSane: It's on. Dope shit tho'.
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05-26-2013, 02:03 PM | #15 |
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Nomads all day, fuck the vets, were running nets
Cause I haven't met a Mike I wouldn't love to wreck Were the toughest yep leaving em a sluggish mess So indirect Geno dosent even have any punches left Above the rest? man you guys are some duds at best No shaking off those cob webs G when ya rust to death Ya suck at text, closet full of things you must regret Set those objectives but beating us you aint done it yet Very smooth flow..... Drop as a whole was real nice... |
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This was cool, I felt like it could have came stronger
buuuut this was the beginning of everything, sooo it's understandable I feel like you may have sacraficed word usage for punches though can't wait to see where the rest of this goes though... nice drop breh
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We wander above the rest, the reason their calling us nomads
Wanted to cuss out dude but realized hes only Vulgar with vocab lol this was a pretty cool diss, seemed more like playful jabs than a true trendsetter for any beef to follow. |
05-26-2013, 11:00 PM | #18 |
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Thanks it wasnt suppose to be hard hitting tbh...thanks tho...kind of hard to really diss a plethera of dudes...
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05-29-2013, 10:50 AM | #19 |
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playful, ticklish jabs that amused me.
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05-31-2013, 01:22 AM | #20 |
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no clue about beef battling crews whatever the fuck but as far as a verse i liked it. came off pretty aggressively. quick precise flowing. nothing crazy technical, but served its purpose. couple little jabs... didn't see any haymakers but for something that seemed quickly written it was respectable so nice job, i enjoyed it.
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