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Old 05-23-2013, 04:37 PM   #1
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Mike Wrecka..
I confess, we the best, and above the rest,
making some people nervous but I love the stress/
looking beneath the surface of the mud I press,
as I'm doing pushups till blood floods my chest/
see underground, power down and unplug this mess,
then fuckin raise up, like I was possessed/
try to get on our level, I will shove you pests,
off our pedestal, these sentinels, leave you crushed to death/
other crews cant interrupt, this much success,
we leave their bones scattered like a vultures nest/
text is dead, and were gonna kill whatever cultures left,
go head up with these vets and leave with punctured necks/

Geno..
On cloud fucking nine I sit, where im pateintly waiting
For everyone beneathe to complete the basics of training
Meditating, my companies strengths reflect the bars of class
Those who's mirrors broke get their throats stabbed with the shards of glass
The scars, the scabbs, you need plastic surgery to alter my plans
We'll split the white rabbits ears with the darkness at hand
To many carcasses land flat, so many caskets and types
That you need to be above the rest, in every aspect of life
Every absence of light, is where you'll find we gather
Saving the craft, storing words, until it finally matters

Vulgar..
These may be the days of the clones but we'd hate to be known
as caterers prone to praying to thrones, when the mainstream's
An estranged scene that only hastens the slope like a sleigh in the snow
that's why we trim the hedges so Mother Eden favors our growth
and dismantle simple legends to discover regions, patrons of Jobe
hovering scents of rotten economics leave scents like Reagan's cologne
Shackles get latched, ankles get swole
Spectacular shrines, anklets get stones
I'm ancient from the frames of my toes to the symbol of Ankh on my lobes
Hellacious rogues; please understand the higher elevation we hold

Objective..
Our writtens shows precedence from peasants to presidents,
the essence of elegance questions the relevance of veterans.
Located at heaven sent's residence we represents intelligence,
release excellence in debris of negligence to exceed the elements.
We freed the settlements to be better than angels that fell,
Even Abel can tell fighting us's the same as vacating in Hell;
A rehearsal of one verse makes a high priest's crusifix melt,
Above The Rest - lyrics of iron's the shit that we smelt.
The scales of doom can't measure the damage we've dealt
as we're surrounding the source of violence like a warrior's belt.

IAmBent..
We A-T-R's Blazing Stars, slicing night'sface, leavin crazy scars
Put rap battles on the Travel Channel, it'll lack these amazing bars
Fuck all you lady parts-having ass rappers, stay down
What keeps me elevated isa hellish hatred for gay clowns
Red-nosed hobo homos, get sleighed first, like Rudolph
Metamucil'd dudes catch this hard shit & get their stool soft
You'll cough, gag and Die from the Bite as this AtR rises
Just Stop rappin, guys - we flow tight like a blocked bladder siphon
We elevated,so celebrate it more than my Writer's League rise
These guys stay hot, bring the beef spice and we eatcha like chilli cheese fries

Witty..
Even in the simplest minds, ridiculous rhymes delivered with shine
Can open a river inside, a thirst for knowledge growing bigger with time
So we aren't a sig or a crew, we're a group of Kings in their prime
With the exact same mission, our ambitions aligned
Creating an entire army, and we've hired the entire higher part of the hierarchy
You gotta stay below with the liars and biters, where Dia parties
Nothing left I need to say, you're weak and gay, we're fucking blessed
You need to pray, cuz til we decay, we'll lead the way...

...Above The Rest
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Old 05-23-2013, 04:48 PM   #2
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LOL Witty's last bars had me rolling. Holy shit OBjective came nice with it, and Vulgar's verse was pretty spectacular. Geno, you were hiding that from us, well done lol loved Mike's image of the pushups and the hard work.

damn, that's how you COLLAB!!
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Old 05-23-2013, 04:59 PM   #3
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Mike Wrecka you started this off very slow. Elevate

Ok Geno went in

On cloud fucking nine I sit, where im pateintly waiting
For everyone beneathe to complete the basics of training
Meditating, my companies strengths reflect the bars of class
Those who's mirrors broke get their throats stabbed with the shards of glass
The scars, the scabbs, you need plastic surgery to alter my plans
We'll split the white rabbits ears with the darkness at hand
To many carcasses land flat, so many caskets and types
That you need to be above the rest, in every aspect of life
Every absence of light, is where you'll find we gather
Saving the craft, storing words, until it finally

Vulgar

when the mainstream's
An estranged scene that only hastens the slope like a sleigh in the snow

Ur closing lines were nice too

Objective
We get u can rhyme but switch up the flow

I ambent you've got potential


Witty I like how you came out addressing us. The hierarchy line was swagged



Decent collab. Witty, Vulgar and Genocide are at the top of the crew. I ambent is an up and comer. Objective can rhyme but u can tell he's plateaued. Mike Wrecka you've got one more bad drop and you're out if the crew.
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Old 05-23-2013, 09:27 PM   #4
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Nice collab gentlemen. I liked all verses.
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Old 05-24-2013, 10:25 AM   #6
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@Mike Wrecka
In my eyes you were definitely the weakest verse in comparison to the rest in the piece.
I don't think it was "bad" but i don't think it was "dope" either.
I was not a fan of the way you structured it with the slashes and shit.

Brag pieces like this i enjoy. I just felt like for a first drop as a new crew it should have been amongst your best work especially since its bragodocio. I would be more forgiving in my feed if you had to do a story or heartfelt piece but all you had to do here was brag about yourself and your crew. An up in complexity scheming wise would have helped.
Bottom line is it came off as too simplistic to me. It was avarage at best. Although someone may differ, but thats my two cents.

@Genocide
Your piece was aight. Below average for what i know your capabilities can craft.
Its on point but content is weaker than i expected. But aye you win some you losw some...im sure you'll come back with a vengeance.

@Vulgar
Tbh i felt you went out in left field here. It was mechanically on point and i know you can write so im not hating but i don't get why u wrote what you wrote. Maby its just over my head. So be it if thats the case but i can't say i dig.

@Objective
I actually liked this verse the best so far because it is schemed much better and demonstrates some complexity. I am obsessed with the technical side of rap so this at least held my attention from start to finish.
Although it did seem like you were rhyming to just rhyme at some points.
Mechanically sound none the less and thus far strongest verse in my eyes(keep in mind im feeding as i read).

@IamBenT
I dug. Seems to finally be heating up. Got a lil swag in this and good balance between simplicity and complexity. I dig.

@Witty
Tie between you and bent for best verse. Flow was dope. Easily spit. Structure was good. Content was ehh but still amongst the strongest here.
Creating an entire army, and we've hired the entire higher part of the hierarchy
^ that was dope i liked that.

Ayo im only one dude but i keep it real and give my opinion. No hate intended. I ain't even tryin to downplay ya'll as competition i just felt ya'll coulda executed this better. I'm sure my feed ain't what ya'll would prefer but take it for what it is and come with that fire next drop.

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Old 05-24-2013, 10:48 AM   #7
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lol dope breakdown Natural, I appreciate im sure the crew does too, can't wait to see what you and the Nomads are cooking up!
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Old 05-24-2013, 11:11 AM   #8
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ya thanks for the bump Natural. and how uncreative of you to repeat my negative feedback of your verse with negative feedback on mine. u mad bro?

ATR dont fuck around

tbh ive very recently beat half your crew. ur next
set up the battle me vs you. topical
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I will free post once. Sorry to rest of ya'll but this dude got shit twisted.
I fed you genuinely honest feed as i see it. Sorry your pussy hurt it wasn't what u wanted to hear. I hold no grudge in regards to your feed on a true emcee. So give it a rest man.
If you got anything else u wanna say to me or my crew feel free to throw it up in discussion.

Am i mad? Lmao da fuck outta here with that shit
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Old 05-24-2013, 12:02 PM   #10
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Natural that post could have easily been posted in the Open Mic Chat thread. Don't freepost man.
And to this collab, it was fucking dope. Each one of these verses would sound fuckin ill to a beat but all 7 of them together would probably cause my speakers to implode from awesomeness. This is gonna be featured in the mag for sure.
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Old 05-24-2013, 12:17 PM   #11
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Shots fired.

Btw, lest we not forget... geno already smashed the nomads with one verse. Do I have to pull it out the oven and repost it lol
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