A True Emcee(EndSane,Genocide,Natural, King Keith)

EndSane · 05-21-2013, 01:15 AM

Was on old netcees...One of my favorite pieces Us four done tbh...Just felt like posting again

Natural:
I be a true emcee its all i breathe, sleep, and, eat, I vibe to beats
I collect that inner strength thats deep in me to craft my steeze
I rap and rhyme with relax & ease even catch me hash a free
Confident not bashfully strongest to casually cause u casualtys
Baffling you whack half ass rappers Happily with my strategy
i'm straight packin heat when i body ah hotty scheme accurately
Monsterous slaughtering constant consciencness slobbering
I clobber the flow and ejaculate the oddities on all of these
People with no remorse or apologies i'm a flow balla beast
The doctor of Assault and Battery Badly Battering and ravaging
Corpses, lavishly, savagely with the tomahawk hatchet mastery
I'm out of the cage, tore out of it like plastic, destined to wreck havoc
It's about time, cuz finally ive had it, i'm slayin this illmatic
Explosion on deck my swag is corrosive to most ah tha vets
Adjust the dosage potent correct, i'm demanding respect
CodeMan the bandit i guess i brandished the weps damage is done..

Genocide:
I talk about the shit I survived, relationships -prison and time
The basic shit, simple designs, how chronologically we live and let die
I hope we find a better system next time, but fuck it I guess
A true emcee never backs down, he writes something instead
Hunts with a pen, to put food on the table if its nothing but bread
Goes hard in the storm, sworn, until his life fucking comes to an end
Doesn't pretend, cause I ain't got no fucking friends to convince
Besides, I'm pretty confident that no one better exists
My magnun opus is a letter to him, because he's either dead or a kid
And ill deliver it myself, to the whole that the devil is in
I'll never settle for shit, without a fucking argument first
Cause I will never be bitch, long as I got a heart and it works
Pardon the verse, I only curse to get across a serious thought
It doesn't take an eavesdrop to know your hearing is hard
Superior, dark, I feed upon inferior frauds with serious fangs
If you remember one thing, my fucking theory is BANG!!!

Hook:
A True Emcee don't be flashin no guns
He shoots his victims with vernacular son
He's full of wit, the only imaginative one
We are true emcee's on spectacular runs

EndSane:
It’s a lyricist slang and in time I may go through a period of change
EndSane cause early I developed a furious rage and delirious brain
Clearly the strange was fascinating as I created sinister sacraments
True emcees practice this perfecting there craft above the average shit
I turn the fastest pen and burn the masses with pure nerve and badness then
Some edit words with Photoshop I create jpegs with verbs and adjectives
No ass to kiss we rap that’s it, lifestyle of a master mind and wordsmith
Placing vivid imagery upon our canvas only to capture lines with purpose
After time it’s certain you become a diligent writer when feeling inspired
Natural talent shows but the skill is acquired…so hot you kill em with fire
The illest with style always staying true to your form proving its more
Not about losing the war but conquering the enemy and wooing his whore
Infusing the gore of my victims together I make ’em bleed for their beliefs
These douche bags gave me every reason to unleash the demon and the beast
You’re seeing the peace sign because the deuce doesn’t deal with baloney
You put-on the gold chain and baggy shit, man your only real as a phony..

King Keith:
Mastered the art of a concept, you should swim in my conscious
My thought process is complex but filled with logic & content
Bring life to particular objects, yeah, I bleed when I write
The imagery I paint is surreal, the diction quite strong when I type
Right? Imagine the skill if brought to the mic- hype & dopeness
Psyched & focused, light of Christ golden enough to ignite explosives
Gimmick emcees I might expose ya', your nakedness is shameful
Cuz y'all be plague'n the airwaves with that lazy shit & same bull
It's painful how hip hop died & was buried in casket
Due to worry & acid, a habit that always burned her while it lasted
Couldn't handle her absence so I meditated & spoke with Venus
She said, "Uncover her body, poke your penis & revive her with a stroke of genius"
You bastards should thank me, I wrote the thesis & gave birth to your motivation & drive
Fabricated the lines calibrated to enhance your fascination & vibe
Leave the competition assassinated, any witness'll feel the chill
Truth is truth, a lies a lie.... but real recognize real.

Hook:
A True Emcee don't be flashin no guns
He shoots his victim's with vernacular son
He's full of wit, the only imaginative one
We are True Emcees on spectacular runs

Geno · 05-21-2013, 07:57 AM

Werd @ this piece
Still think king murked it.

Good to see again,

IamBenT · 05-21-2013, 08:22 AM

wow great verses from everyone involved, from Natural's crazy rhymes to Geno's vivid pictures and straight up swag attack, Endsane's line about wooing the whore, that whole section there was bananas and some of my fav in the verse.

King really killed it here too, with the conceit at the ended and basically the punctuation mark verse, yall created a fantastic piece and everyone's verse gelled well with this topic. NICE

Natural · 05-21-2013, 05:33 PM

I think @King Ra. had the strongest verse content wise...but i really think everyone was at a pinnacle of sorts with this drop inrespective to their own talent. I still can't mechanically top my verse yet.
If we're rating best verses in order i think it goes
King
Geno
EndSane
Natural

I'll never settle for shit, without a fucking argument first Cause I will neverbebitch, long asI got a heart and it works Pardon the verse, I only curse to get across a serious thought It doesn't take an eavesdrop to know your hearing is hard Superior, dark, I feed upon inferior frauds with serious fangs If you remember one thing, my fucking theory is BANG!!!
^ that ish was fire @Genocide

True emcees practice this perfecting there craft above the average shit I turn the fastest pen and burn the masses with pure nerve and badness then Some edit words with Photoshop I create jpegs with verbs and adjectives No ass to kiss we rap that’s it, lifestyle of a master mind and wordsmith.
^Fire @EndSane

She said, "Uncover her body, poke your penis & revive her with a stroke of genius" You bastards should thank me, I wrote the thesis & gave birth to your motivation & drive Fabricated the lines calibrated to enhance your fascination & vibe Leave the competition assassinated, any witness'll feel the chill Truth is truth, a lies a lie.... but real recognize real.
Strong creative finish @King Ra.

UnoQuattroThres · 05-21-2013, 08:53 PM

Ill collab...this was an epic drop...I haven't read any of King's drops but whoa....I can't say who was the best because everyone has their own style and you all were able to mesh it together while still keeping you uniqueness....superb..

Mike Wrecka · 05-22-2013, 06:30 PM

ya this was pretty cool. good work guys. genocide and king keiths verses were real dope. endsane was decent. your bars are a bit too long for my liking but overall you did your thing. natural I gotta say your verse lacked a bit. I don't wanna come off like a dick for saying that , but im just keepin it real. it doesn't mean your not a great writer cause honestly ive never read anything from you nat, but you didn't come to the others level on this go round. you guys shouldn't have opened with that verse.

re reading king keiths verse I have to mention it again. damn keith that shit was epic. fully quotable.

with all that being said. cool piece. I enjoyed it. good work. thanks for the read.

Natural · 05-22-2013, 11:11 PM

@Mike Wrecka
Appreciated feed. I agree my verse was not as content heavy as the rest. If you read in my own feed i did rate mine under theirs. Mechanically(scheming,rhyming, flow wise) i believe it to be above par though. It would be nice to hear your reasoning for disliking my verse.

King Ra. · 05-23-2013, 08:51 AM

Damn, I didn't think anyone still had this collab saved. I have my verse saved on my computer. Great job @EndSane for the revisit. Everyone did their thing. I feel opposite of what Mike felt about Natural's verse, though I've seen him put together much better works, this was still pretty hot. My boy @Genocide- I remember during that time you were doing collabs & drops like crazy in the OM, and each drop/verse was consistently dope, you were on fire man. OM MVP! Haha. EndSane, despite the stretched lines, which I really don't mind, because the shit flowed well, also came correct. This was that collab. I'll be getting active here in the OM soon.

I'm humbled by the love for the verse. I still don't feel I am at the pinnacle yet in writing, which, if everyone is saying I'm pretty good now, I can only imagine where I would be when I reach where I'm trying to get at. Preciate the love for real.

05-21-2013, 01:15 AM	#1
EndSane Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 88 Battle Record: 0-1 Champed Challenge Week I Challenge Week II Challenge Week III Challenge Week IV Challenge Week V Challenge Week VI Challenge Week VII Challenge Week VIII Challenge Week IX Challenge Week X Rep Power: 35	A True Emcee(EndSane,Genocide,Natural, King Keith) Was on old netcees...One of my favorite pieces Us four done tbh...Just felt like posting again Natural: I be a true emcee its all i breathe, sleep, and, eat, I vibe to beats I collect that inner strength thats deep in me to craft my steeze I rap and rhyme with relax & ease even catch me hash a free Confident not bashfully strongest to casually cause u casualtys Baffling you whack half ass rappers Happily with my strategy i'm straight packin heat when i body ah hotty scheme accurately Monsterous slaughtering constant consciencness slobbering I clobber the flow and ejaculate the oddities on all of these People with no remorse or apologies i'm a flow balla beast The doctor of Assault and Battery Badly Battering and ravaging Corpses, lavishly, savagely with the tomahawk hatchet mastery I'm out of the cage, tore out of it like plastic, destined to wreck havoc It's about time, cuz finally ive had it, i'm slayin this illmatic Explosion on deck my swag is corrosive to most ah tha vets Adjust the dosage potent correct, i'm demanding respect CodeMan the bandit i guess i brandished the weps damage is done.. Genocide: I talk about the shit I survived, relationships -prison and time The basic shit, simple designs, how chronologically we live and let die I hope we find a better system next time, but fuck it I guess A true emcee never backs down, he writes something instead Hunts with a pen, to put food on the table if its nothing but bread Goes hard in the storm, sworn, until his life fucking comes to an end Doesn't pretend, cause I ain't got no fucking friends to convince Besides, I'm pretty confident that no one better exists My magnun opus is a letter to him, because he's either dead or a kid And ill deliver it myself, to the whole that the devil is in I'll never settle for shit, without a fucking argument first Cause I will never be bitch, long as I got a heart and it works Pardon the verse, I only curse to get across a serious thought It doesn't take an eavesdrop to know your hearing is hard Superior, dark, I feed upon inferior frauds with serious fangs If you remember one thing, my fucking theory is BANG!!! Hook: A True Emcee don't be flashin no guns He shoots his victims with vernacular son He's full of wit, the only imaginative one We are true emcee's on spectacular runs EndSane: It’s a lyricist slang and in time I may go through a period of change EndSane cause early I developed a furious rage and delirious brain Clearly the strange was fascinating as I created sinister sacraments True emcees practice this perfecting there craft above the average shit I turn the fastest pen and burn the masses with pure nerve and badness then Some edit words with Photoshop I create jpegs with verbs and adjectives No ass to kiss we rap that’s it, lifestyle of a master mind and wordsmith Placing vivid imagery upon our canvas only to capture lines with purpose After time it’s certain you become a diligent writer when feeling inspired Natural talent shows but the skill is acquired…so hot you kill em with fire The illest with style always staying true to your form proving its more Not about losing the war but conquering the enemy and wooing his whore Infusing the gore of my victims together I make ’em bleed for their beliefs These douche bags gave me every reason to unleash the demon and the beast You’re seeing the peace sign because the deuce doesn’t deal with baloney You put-on the gold chain and baggy shit, man your only real as a phony.. King Keith: Mastered the art of a concept, you should swim in my conscious My thought process is complex but filled with logic & content Bring life to particular objects, yeah, I bleed when I write The imagery I paint is surreal, the diction quite strong when I type Right? Imagine the skill if brought to the mic- hype & dopeness Psyched & focused, light of Christ golden enough to ignite explosives Gimmick emcees I might expose ya', your nakedness is shameful Cuz y'all be plague'n the airwaves with that lazy shit & same bull It's painful how hip hop died & was buried in casket Due to worry & acid, a habit that always burned her while it lasted Couldn't handle her absence so I meditated & spoke with Venus She said, "Uncover her body, poke your penis & revive her with a stroke of genius" You bastards should thank me, I wrote the thesis & gave birth to your motivation & drive Fabricated the lines calibrated to enhance your fascination & vibe Leave the competition assassinated, any witness'll feel the chill Truth is truth, a lies a lie.... but real recognize real. Hook: A True Emcee don't be flashin no guns He shoots his victim's with vernacular son He's full of wit, the only imaginative one We are True Emcees on spectacular runs __________________ Delirious Nomads

05-21-2013, 07:57 AM	#2
Geno White Earl Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Philly Cat. Posts: 12,325 Battle Record: 10-15 Accomplishments - Open Mic HOF (4x) Champed - Netcees Writers League - Write Week I - Write Week 8 Rep Power: 50036758	Werd @ this piece Still think king murked it. Good to see again, __________________ *-A.bove T.he R.est*

05-21-2013, 08:22 AM	#3
IamBenT SuPreaM Lyricyst Join Date: Feb 2013 Location: San Antonio, TX Posts: 704 Battle Record: 9-6 Rep Power: 412354	wow great verses from everyone involved, from Natural's crazy rhymes to Geno's vivid pictures and straight up swag attack, Endsane's line about wooing the whore, that whole section there was bananas and some of my fav in the verse. King really killed it here too, with the conceit at the ended and basically the punctuation mark verse, yall created a fantastic piece and everyone's verse gelled well with this topic. NICE __________________ *A.bove T.he R.est* IamBenT\|Genocide\|MikeWrecka\|Objective\|Vulgar\|Witty \|Rawn MacDon

05-21-2013, 08:53 PM	#5
UnoQuattroThres 143 is here.... Join Date: May 2013 Posts: 31 Battle Record: 0-1 Rep Power: 34	Ill collab...this was an epic drop...I haven't read any of King's drops but whoa....I can't say who was the best because everyone has their own style and you all were able to mesh it together while still keeping you uniqueness....superb.. __________________ I stay an Infeckted Pen....

05-22-2013, 06:30 PM	#6
Mike Wrecka WOW Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 3,522 Battle Record: 29-25 Champed - Writing Challenge League I Rep Power: 82779335	ya this was pretty cool. good work guys. genocide and king keiths verses were real dope. endsane was decent. your bars are a bit too long for my liking but overall you did your thing. natural I gotta say your verse lacked a bit. I don't wanna come off like a dick for saying that , but im just keepin it real. it doesn't mean your not a great writer cause honestly ive never read anything from you nat, but you didn't come to the others level on this go round. you guys shouldn't have opened with that verse. re reading king keiths verse I have to mention it again. damn keith that shit was epic. fully quotable. with all that being said. cool piece. I enjoyed it. good work. thanks for the read. __________________ A.bove T.he R.est

05-21-2013, 05:33 PM	#4
Natural Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2013 Posts: 691 Rep Power: 0	I think @King Ra. had the strongest verse content wise...but i really think everyone was at a pinnacle of sorts with this drop inrespective to their own talent. I still can't mechanically top my verse yet. If we're rating best verses in order i think it goes King Geno EndSane Natural I'll never settle for shit, without a fucking argument first Cause I will neverbebitch, long asI got a heart and it works Pardon the verse, I only curse to get across a serious thought It doesn't take an eavesdrop to know your hearing is hard Superior, dark, I feed upon inferior frauds with serious fangs If you remember one thing, my fucking theory is BANG!!! ^ that ish was fire @Genocide True emcees practice this perfecting there craft above the average shit I turn the fastest pen and burn the masses with pure nerve and badness then Some edit words with Photoshop I create jpegs with verbs and adjectives No ass to kiss we rap that’s it, lifestyle of a master mind and wordsmith. ^Fire @EndSane She said, "Uncover her body, poke your penis & revive her with a stroke of genius" You bastards should thank me, I wrote the thesis & gave birth to your motivation & drive Fabricated the lines calibrated to enhance your fascination & vibe Leave the competition assassinated, any witness'll feel the chill Truth is truth, a lies a lie.... but real recognize real. Strong creative finish @King Ra.

05-22-2013, 11:11 PM	#7
Natural Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2013 Posts: 691 Rep Power: 0	@Mike Wrecka Appreciated feed. I agree my verse was not as content heavy as the rest. If you read in my own feed i did rate mine under theirs. Mechanically(scheming,rhyming, flow wise) i believe it to be above par though. It would be nice to hear your reasoning for disliking my verse.

05-23-2013, 08:51 AM	#8
King Ra. The Throne, The Crown Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 2,667 Battle Record: 21-35 Rep Power: 1932960	Damn, I didn't think anyone still had this collab saved. I have my verse saved on my computer. Great job @EndSane for the revisit. Everyone did their thing. I feel opposite of what Mike felt about Natural's verse, though I've seen him put together much better works, this was still pretty hot. My boy @Genocide- I remember during that time you were doing collabs & drops like crazy in the OM, and each drop/verse was consistently dope, you were on fire man. OM MVP! Haha. EndSane, despite the stretched lines, which I really don't mind, because the shit flowed well, also came correct. This was that collab. I'll be getting active here in the OM soon. I'm humbled by the love for the verse. I still don't feel I am at the pinnacle yet in writing, which, if everyone is saying I'm pretty good now, I can only imagine where I would be when I reach where I'm trying to get at. Preciate the love for real. __________________ Vetwork, bitches.