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Old 10-19-2014, 01:50 PM   #1
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Old 10-19-2014, 02:27 PM   #2
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Here are my required three, though I may vote on more:

Split vs. timeless
Dove Dozer vs. Defiant
Three-Planes-Aligned vs. asylum

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Old 10-19-2014, 02:39 PM   #3
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Old 10-19-2014, 02:47 PM   #4
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Old 10-19-2014, 03:06 PM   #5
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Old 10-19-2014, 03:41 PM   #6
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Old 10-19-2014, 09:35 PM   #7
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Old 10-20-2014, 12:25 AM   #9
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This is a three hour reminder, voting will end just about 3 hours from this post.


Three more votes needed *Zero votes = One week Ban*

@Defiant (You also did not vote last week, this will not fly)
@Witty (Same as above)
@Listen
@theMuzzl3
@Split
@Cereal_Killa

Two more votes Required


@Dove Dozer (You also did not vote last week)
@Greed (See above)
@kannon
@PancakeBrah (zero votes last week)


One more vote required

@timeless
@Adonis
@dead man

@Mike Wrecka


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@UnbornBuddha (Might have 3, may have over looked one sorry if so.)...Voting Tally is good

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Old 10-20-2014, 12:26 AM   #10
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Will edit this post.

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Old 10-20-2014, 12:28 AM   #11
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Old 10-20-2014, 12:53 AM   #12
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goddamnit man, battles keep closing while im voting.

I'll leave my breakdown for the @Greed and @PancakeBrah battle here.

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GREED. Flow falls apart pretty quick here. I dig that you ran that scheme through the whole first section. Although, it seems weird to me that he has a torture rack, swords and axes, acid, and some sort of fire (smoldering ashes), but he couldn't afford some gas? HA! I keed. Anyways, the only line I really didn't care for was the "perform it fast and..." because the 'and' didn't lead to anything; the next sentence was an entirely new thought. Okay, just read the next two parts. So did he have the torture rack and all that shit before he ever got mad at the other kid? Plus, he seems like he's in middle school. High school, TOPS. How's he gonna just kill a buncha people and store all of this torture equipment in his parents living room? That being said, This was pretty cool. I noticed that you dropped the first chunk of the multi to keep that scheme going, and in some places the rhyme was a bit too slant, but I dig the effort. Overall, I thought this was cool. My only main complaint is that after reading the second section, I felt like the protagonist went from being 30 to 13, and it kinda fucked with the believability.

Pancake. Borderline beautiful. This is proof that a dope as shit piece can be crafted far below the 48 bar limits. I feel like you painted a vivid picture, and closed it superbly. A summer fling. Probably a first crush. Shared moments that seemed so special back then. The smallest details so vivid, and yet the most important piece of the puzzle is a blur. I think my favorite lines were the moon/partitioned glass shit, and the mosquito bites shit. Really dope. I was kinda thinking this may be an easy win for Greed when I saw how short your piece was, but you kinda killed this shit.

I feel bad for Greed, cause he did a great job this round, you just got matched up against a beast.

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Just cause I already wrote it and shit. Yall might as well see it.
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Old 10-20-2014, 01:28 AM   #13
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goddamnit man, battles keep closing while im voting.

I'll leave my breakdown for the @Greed and @PancakeBrah battle here.



Just cause I already wrote it and shit. Yall might as well see it.
Voting is good on your end, but if you got the time there's a few close battles up broham.
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Old 10-20-2014, 01:33 AM   #14
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Voting is good on your end, but if you got the time there's a few close battles up broham.
word. I looked for the close ones, and dropped votes on them. I think I just brought them back to ties though haha.
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Old 10-20-2014, 02:59 AM   #16
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Please do not give Muzzle, Defiant or Listen battles if at all possible

Defiant and listen are yet to cast a single vote.

if you need someone to even out battles I'm fine with Muzz but he will need to make it up
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Please do not give Muzzle, Defiant or Listen battles if at all possible

Defiant and listen are yet to cast a single vote.

if you need someone to even out battles I'm fine with Muzz but he will need to make it up
ill put up battles shortly. you want to run through and edit them with voting deductions? I think I missed one fell asleep early last night
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