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Old 02-28-2018, 09:34 PM   #1
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Old 03-01-2018, 05:54 AM   #2
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Him attracted to girls? I can tell that he isn't.
We wouldn't see Lyf allured to women giving help within pendants to elderly bitches.
Check his battle with Mr. J, the shit is fake, we can see that he's a damned bitch.
It's like X-Men when I pull his card, cause we can see that Gam-bit.
I'll put his set in the morgue after that I'll smack his head to the floor.
You'll be seeing LG's stock drop cause I'm the one who has what's electric in store.
Your bars make me think that you're Southern, cause the shit is draaaaawn out, dog.
And if it isn't that? It's cause of all the Dixies gone South on.
I bring those cold raps, this'll look like the scene of a wild rape.
I'll be quick to Mercury Spawns when I put the heat to your child's brain.
Have you watch as their body goes limp, I'll be bleeding their life away.
Kids'll be going numb from the shots, like I was feeding them Lidocaine.

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Old 03-02-2018, 03:19 AM   #4
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Vs Facts MuhSheen

This lame bitch is a faggot, i guess his brain just isn't that quick.
Dont take much to be the guy who OutsMartin Sheen; n it wont take uploading gay pics of the actor.
I can't seem to figure out why this stupid is known for being duped an alone....
Is it your Fear Fact?or the fact that u Fear everything they do on that show.
What boggles my mind is your alias is the same; correcting your names spelling...
So that makes me assume that being illiterate n dumb is your main preference.
So lets change methods, I'll never swing n miss better yet I'll light a fire in the box u living in.
So just check the Score peon, you'll see its over. Even ya avy reminding me its time to FINISH HIM.
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Old 03-02-2018, 02:55 PM   #6
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Him attracted to girls? I can tell that he isn't.
We wouldn't see Lyf allured to women giving help within pendants to elderly bitches.
nah
Check his battle with Mr. J, the shit is fake, we can see that he's a damned bitch.
It's like X-Men when I pull his card, cause we can see that Gam-bit.
wording was a bit off
I'll put his set in the morgue after that I'll smack his head to the floor.
You'll be seeing LG's stock drop cause I'm the one who has what's electric in store.
eh alright
Your bars make me think that you're Southern, cause the shit is draaaaawn out, dog.
And if it isn't that? It's cause of all the Dixies gone South on.
nah miss for me
I bring those cold raps, this'll look like the scene of a wild rape.
I'll be quick to Mercury Spawns when I put the heat to your child's brain.
alright I guess
Have you watch as their body goes limp, I'll be bleeding their life away.
Kids'll be going numb from the shots, like I was feeding them Lidocaine.
nah didn't like this

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This lame bitch is a faggot, i guess his brain just isn't that quick.
Dont take much to be the guy who OutsMartin Sheen; n it wont take uploading gay pics of the actor.
this was good opener nice nameplay
I can't seem to figure out why this stupid is known for being duped an alone....
Is it your Fear Fact?or the fact that u Fear everything they do on that show.
also nice nameplay
What boggles my mind is your alias is the same; correcting your names spelling...
So that makes me assume that being illiterate n dumb is your main preference.
wording was off here
So lets change methods, I'll never swing n miss better yet I'll light a fire in the box u living in.
So just check the Score peon, you'll see its over. Even ya avy reminding me its time to FINISH HIM.
nah didn't like the wordplay here could've been better



overall: hmm not sure facts muhsheen set up battle asked for 12 lines dropped 12 and even though lyfzaa gamble showed he and probably beat facts muhsheen he only dropped 8 lines... so I gotta give it to facts muhsheen even though I think lyfzaa gamble won... just cause dude didn't follow the rules you know... ba has rules for a reason... so yeah...


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Old 03-11-2018, 05:54 PM   #7
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Facts came out the gate slow. Didn’t care for the opener at all, but landed the next x men/gambit punch. Nothing crazy but I though it landed. The LG flip was decent as well.

The “dicks he gone south on” bar was prob the best material Facts had. I don’t think the set up was great but it was still a good punch. Pretty creative. Didn’t like the next two bars. Ended decent. The lidocaine bar was basic but the punch landed imo. Pretty good round. Lot of jabs. Nothing really crazy.

Lyf put himself at a disadvantage by rapping 8 bars. However, he started out with a pretty good Sheen name flip. Punch landed. I like the fear factor word play but the punch wasn’t really there. I think the bar landed though.

I like that you took the fax machine angle but I think you coulda done more and ended it with a punch. Felt like kinda a filler bar but it was better than Facts’ filler bars. Ended strong. The “score peon”/“finish him” waste bar of the battle. I liked that you flipped his avi against him.

Overall I thought it was a close battle. To me it came down to quality over quantity. Facts punches felt more like jabs and Lyf had the two best lines over the battle (his opener and closer). Facts bars flowed together and rhyme better that Lyf. Lyf might need to clean his rhyme schemes up a bit before next battle.

Overall, I narrowly edged the battle to Lyf. You made it closer than it should have been by having less material. Still I think you had the better wordplay and heavier punches.

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He a better opener and verse compare to factz
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Old 04-22-2018, 10:14 PM   #10
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Old 04-27-2018, 12:37 PM   #11
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Wasnt keen on this battle. Gamble deffo has more to offer then he did here but he wins hands down. Other dude needs to be more direct. Alot 9f bars seemed self hype or swag an flow an where there was a hit waslike a 4 line setup to punch.

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Gam got this. Read it before weeks ago. Dont feel like breaking down. I worked all night. But cool battle. Gam had more lands. Easy
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mvgt Gamble.

I enjoyed the second half of Facts verse, but I thought Gamble took it with harsher wording and more direct punches. Gj.
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