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Old 10-08-2018, 09:16 PM   #1
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Default John Dillinger vs Lucipher Howlz[CHAMP MATCH]OPEN FOR VOTES

NWL:Season I: Week IV



Verses ares due: FRIDAY at 11:59 PM EST

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SWAG N FLOW: YOU KNOW WHAT TO DO!!!

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Old 10-09-2018, 02:54 AM   #2
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Old 10-09-2018, 12:50 PM   #3
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Old 10-12-2018, 02:11 PM   #4
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Ain’t fazin J, sedated & trippy sipping crazy taking days away
Sprites a wavy shade, if it gets any darker I’ma mistake it for Grape Gatorade
My shotty’s riding shotty, but it’s not my shawty its the pump
Main bitch smokin skunk in the back while spittin raps & doin bumps
The strap don’t touch my money, barrel’s hot & burning thru
An hour in, I’ve counted so many New Hundo’s that my hands are turning Blue

Sometimes she call me papi, JD’s a monster but not her father
Black silhouette, you can tell I’m a mobster jus by my posture
Should be in Iraq w/ the straps, u don't get time to call ppl
All lethal - Pistol w/ the serial scratched, that's a Bald Eagle
I stand up for the squad, we w/ the static like bad channels
U’ll catch me ‘boxin w/ some blood’ like I was packagin lab samples
Clip long as a Pan Handle, y’all kno the FL is where I stay
Double cup w/ so much mud it’s like I’m sippin the Everglades
Not w/ goofy shit & for my time its like a bidding war
Known to keep it low-key... Thor poster on a midgets door

White tee w/ bright chains, ya wifey in a nice Range, I light flames & it’s over
We’re not on Mars, but she on another planet smoking hybrid strains in the Rover
Now I’m zonin’ out at a homies house & fell asleep w/ a 40 ounce
At younger ages the floor was lava but I jus straight up melted into shortys couch

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All I hear is a horn honking as I laugh in there faces-
Fuck the blue line as I park in handicap spaces-
I never pay for drinks as bartenders mix it for free-
When I leave, Kardashians are takin' pictures of me!-
I'm smokin' Cuban's in a silk robe on a Persian rug-
I was born hard for porn stars thats how I learned to love-
I'm the exact Hero that all children dream to be-
While mother fuckin' Chuck Norris makes memes of me-
I seem to be, Your worst nightmare as your teams asleep-
Freddy Kruger with the Luger is how I keep the peace-
Please believe, I pray on your grave my knees are deep-
In the earth, as I pretend that I actually need to weep-
For a lower being, a peasant beneath this deep concrete-
I'll shoot the funeral up as you bitches seek police-
You'll be far behind, I'm out of this world, Mars is mine-
I'm rite in your face but I'm still hard to find!-
Shit I can use my Dick and make the stars align-
And make a bigger impact than when two cars collide!-
I'm heaven sent but have the sense to darken skies-
Always on point like throwing a dart thru eyes-
You think your my friend but that's my hearts disguise-
But I do slam dance tarantula style as your carcass dies-

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Old 10-13-2018, 06:06 AM   #6
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Great show both. Will reread through out day an get some feed/votes in later on
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Old 10-16-2018, 08:49 PM   #7
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Old 10-17-2018, 11:52 AM   #8
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I got you. Will vote in next few hours
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Old 10-17-2018, 12:25 PM   #9
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JD came with some heat here. He’s got that vibe I can fuck with heavy . He can tell me how he drops jolly ranchers in sprite a 100 different ways and it’d still be fire lol. Grape Gatorade and turning blue was fire. Rest was decent to good. Lucipher, your flow was clean but I don’t know how much I could say for the swag portion. U had some attempts but they never really landed for me. It came off as a topical more than a S&f. Decent read tho either way

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I got JD here. I liked both and both came cool with some nice ideas an nice flow. Think jd came stronger technically regarding his rhyme schemes and multis. Other dude was a bit simple in comparison and whilst I enjoyed a few of his ideas some were a bit... Hmm played/simple. Like the two cars collide immediately reminded me of Eminem. Maybe even Royce da 5 9 bad meets evil. I dunno just felt to familiar. Jds had a bit more metaphorical undertone etc.

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