08-28-2018, 09:08 PM | #1 |
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Blue Bayou (1-0) vs Jabari Black (1-0) - Blue Bayou wins
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08-29-2018, 02:28 PM | #2 |
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cool... u good with 14-16 Black?
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08-29-2018, 03:42 PM | #3 |
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Check. 16 is good with me.
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08-31-2018, 08:45 AM | #4 |
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Done
Wanna get this up today?
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08-31-2018, 09:12 AM | #5 |
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I’m still writing fam. I’ll most likely need until Saturday.
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09-02-2018, 09:39 AM | #6 |
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I squeeze til the TEC empty, Blue. 30 in the clip when I let semis shoot/
It’s no escaping this situation! If I miss the first 8...you’ll still ‘Catch 22’/ He ain’t the best he just rap the most. But I got a big blade that’ll drop vets/ This legend’ll die! Y’all gon find some big shit in Bayou like the Loch Ness/ U do FNs every week for approval. You need the accomps to boost yo pride/ It’s like trigonometry, Blue...you put in all this work to get a fucking cosine/ But for the right price...u’ll be headed towards the bright light/ When I start taggin niggas with the FN...it ain’t a fight night/ I’m all gunbars. But it’ll be personal when ya fiancé gets hit when the K sprays/ Or knife to her throat...Slash her neck and ‘rip chord’ when I give ya ‘beyblades’/ Two already told you to Jet, Blue....cus I’ll let this K spray and wet lames/ Give ya whole squad wings...n have a choppa talk to u a like Jay Jay the Jet plane/ If you step you dyin. Infrared beam when the TEC gets lined/ You better leave or I’ll put the light on ya roof like a exit sign/ Cred already wounded you. I’ll finish the job when bullets rip this jerk apart/ Ya shirt gets marked...I’ll put the medal to a vet chest like a Purple Heart/ |
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. i fucking HATE fan boys, so i'ma have the trey gun em down.. when it comes to me ‘Blacastan’.. & two rounds'll make sure he stays Underground faggot i'm a beast w/ the rod, send u straight to Jesus & God.. sneak up from behind & have the ‘Chopper at your Back’ like a Swedish Massage heavy artillery - i took a knee right before i cooked the beam.. the rifles got a Periscopes & once the triggers pulled ur the ‘One-Eye Look to See’ can't out rap me brat, i'm too fast u'll never clap me back.. 2 shots – hit ur body w/ Decay & leave it on the ground to do EXACTLY that 9 in ur face pussy, u'll need more than heart to survive.. it's fitting you Love gunplay JB… cuz you're about to see a ‘Spark in your Eye’ the biscuit pops! close range this yellow belly bitch gets dropped.. have more ‘Pieces of this Chicken over my Stick’ than Knucks Wife w/ a Shish Kabob says he'll fuck up my squad?! i'm tired of this guy's weak speil.. try Playin Maholmes & he'll Catch a ‘bullet to the chest’ like he's Tyreke Hill watch em bleed to death, pop-up aimin w/ the beams & flex.. ‘2 Arms got em doin Circles’.. & once the graves Dougie's not gon be seen as Fresh
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09-02-2018, 09:47 PM | #8 |
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So this was a dope battle, really cool to see this one go down. I liked alot of jabaris concepts only thing that hurt it was the double FN bars and one of em being pretty poor conceptually. I really thought Jet, blue line was gonna be LOTb until i see the Dougie fresh flip lol. I got bluebayou by a bar. He was just more consistent and his lines hit harder to me. But jabari is a problem for anyone. He put yall on notice. v/ Bluebayou
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v/Blue Bayou...you guys gun barred it out in this one lol. i dont mind, i see thats the new wave. i thought conceptually blue had the edge. thought his misses were better than JB's as well. |
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Jb had a really good verse but blue went in. Couple crazy bars from both of ya. Dope battle V blue |
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09-03-2018, 08:53 AM | #12 |
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I squeeze til the TEC empty, Blue. 30 in the clip when I let semis shoot/
It’s no escaping this situation! If I miss the first 8...you’ll still ‘Catch 22’/ this was pretty good He ain’t the best he just rap the most. But I got a big blade that’ll drop vets/ This legend’ll die! Y’all gon find some big shit in Bayou like the Loch Ness/ nah wasn’t feelin this one U do FNs every week for approval. You need the accomps to boost yo pride/ It’s like trigonometry, Blue...you put in all this work to get a fucking cosine/ alright But for the right price...u’ll be headed towards the bright light/ When I start taggin niggas with the FN...it ain’t a fight night/ this was cool, solid personal tie in as well I’m all gunbars. But it’ll be personal when ya fiancé gets hit when the K sprays/ Or knife to her throat...Slash her neck and ‘rip chord’ when I give ya ‘beyblades/ pretty played here Two already told you to Jet, Blue....cus I’ll let this K spray and wet lames/ Give ya whole squad wings...n have a choppa talk to u a like Jay Jay the Jet plane/ nice I liked this If you step you dyin. Infrared beam when the TEC gets lined/ You better leave or I’ll put the light on ya roof like a exit sign/ alright Cred already wounded you. I’ll finish the job when bullets rip this jerk apart/ Ya shirt gets marked...I’ll put the medal to a vet chest like a Purple Heart/ sheesh this was dope 4 good 2 ok 2 misses Vs i fucking HATE fan boys, so i'ma have the trey gun em down.. when it comes to me ‘Blacastan’.. & two rounds'll make sure he stays Underground this is nice faggot i'm a beast w/ the rod, send u straight to Jesus & God.. sneak up from behind & have the ‘Chopper at your Back’ like a Swedish Massage pretty cool heavy artillery - i took a knee right before i cooked the beam.. the rifles got a Periscopes & once the triggers pulled ur the ‘One-Eye Look to See’ i get it but I’m not really a fan of it. Definitely get creativity points for it but it’s just decent imo can't out rap me brat, i'm too fast u'll never clap me back.. 2 shots – hit ur body w/ Decay & leave it on the ground to do EXACTLY that alright cool 9 in ur face pussy, u'll need more than heart to survive.. it's fitting you Love gunplay JB… cuz you're about to see a ‘Spark in your Eye’ lol I think you’re confusing this for the twinkle in your eye or even sparkle in your eye but yeah without it being pinpoint it’s a miss the biscuit pops! close range this yellow belly bitch gets dropped.. have more ‘Pieces of this Chicken over my Stick’ than Knucks Wife w/ a Shish Kabob would have been dope if you hadn’t added Knucks wife into it, that made it kinda corny because “her putting chicken on a bob” is not a factual thing that happened says he'll fuck up my squad?! i'm tired of this guy's weak speil.. try Playin Maholmes & he'll Catch a ‘bullet to the chest’ like he's Tyreke Hill alright watch em bleed to death, pop-up aimin w/ the beams & flex.. ‘2 Arms got em doin Circles’.. & once the graves Dougie's not gon be seen as Fresh lol this was nice 4 good 1 ok 1 Decent 2 misses This was a dope ass battle. Definitely a showdown right here, both battlers performed well and I’m sure the fans will be pleased after they read this. Both had a solid amount of nice bars, and also had the same number of misses. This could go either way, not even because of preference tbh - the wordplay that blue dropped here was excellent and meshed well in his diversified verse. The thing I think misses up Blue was his two misses that really didn’t have to be misses imo, but due to the reasons above in which I notated in each bar, is what hurt him. Jabari, solid verse and you came with the usual dope gunbar heavy verse that will never get old in my eyes as long as they aren’t played or wack. Your misses were simple mistakes, one was behblades which I wouldn’t expect you to necessarily know since you’re fairly new, but yes it is a played concept indeed. I’m sure Amen can even tell you he’s done a few back in his day. Your other Miss was Loch Ness which didn’t have to be a miss either but “big shit in blue” just felt somewhat lazy or just not impactful at all. This is super close but I have Jabari slightly taking it. Seriously no hate blue, I would’ve had you all the way here if that Knuck Punch was factual and it spark in your eye was actually called that. Vote Jabari Black |
09-03-2018, 03:00 PM | #13 |
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I squeeze til the TEC empty, Blue. 30 in the clip when I let semis shoot/
It’s no escaping this situation! If I miss the first 8...you’ll still ‘Catch 22’/ Seen these before. You worded it well but it’s a bit overdone for that to save it He ain’t the best he just rap the most. But I got a big blade that’ll drop vets/ This legend’ll die! Y’all gon find some big shit in Bayou like the Loch Ness/ Eh. I know you’re new but if someone has the same name they’ve used for over a decade and they’re HOF just assume all one word nameplays are going to be old. U do FNs every week for approval. You need the accomps to boost yo pride/ It’s like trigonometry, Blue...you put in all this work to get a fucking cosine/ Played But for the right price...u’ll be headed towards the bright light/ When I start taggin niggas with the FN...it ain’t a fight night/ Ok I’m all gunbars. But it’ll be personal when ya fiancé gets hit when the K sprays/ Or knife to her throat...Slash her neck and ‘rip chord’ when I give ya ‘beyblades’/ Seen before but good wording. Two already told you to Jet, Blue....cus I’ll let this K spray and wet lames/ Give ya whole squad wings...n have a choppa talk to u a like Jay Jay the Jet plane/ Lol ok If you step you dyin. Infrared beam when the TEC gets lined/ You better leave or I’ll put the light on ya roof like a exit sign/ Doesn’t work for me. Exit signs aren’t on roofs. They’re above doors. Too simple. Cred already wounded you. I’ll finish the job when bullets rip this jerk apart/ Ya shirt gets marked...I’ll put the medal to a vet chest like a Purple Heart/ Okay Alright verse just showed he’s still a bit new with the played stuff in the beginning. It’s not a bad verse but wasn’t where I was expecting it to be. Vs i fucking HATE fan boys, so i'ma have the trey gun em down.. when it comes to me ‘Blacastan’.. & two rounds'll make sure he stays Underground Cool faggot i'm a beast w/ the rod, send u straight to Jesus & God.. sneak up from behind & have the ‘Chopper at your Back’ like a Swedish Massage This bar was creative but so soft for a gunbar right from the beast with the rod to the connection being a massage heavy artillery - i took a knee right before i cooked the beam.. the rifles got a Periscopes & once the triggers pulled ur the ‘One-Eye Look to See’ Cool can't out rap me brat, i'm too fast u'll never clap me back.. 2 shots – hit ur body w/ Decay & leave it on the ground to do EXACTLY that Eh ok 9 in ur face pussy, u'll need more than heart to survive.. it's fitting you Love gunplay JB… cuz you're about to see a ‘Spark in your Eye’ Nah the biscuit pops! close range this yellow belly bitch gets dropped.. have more ‘Pieces of this Chicken over my Stick’ than Knucks Wife w/ a Shish Kabob Wack says he'll fuck up my squad?! i'm tired of this guy's weak speil.. try Playin Maholmes & he'll Catch a ‘bullet to the chest’ like he's Tyreke Hill Ok watch em bleed to death, pop-up aimin w/ the beams & flex.. ‘2 Arms got em doin Circles’.. & once the graves Dougie's not gon be seen as Fresh Cool V/blue More consistent and less played stuff. Showed his experience here Last edited by ~RustyGunZ~; 09-03-2018 at 03:34 PM. |
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Man Blue had a lot of ideas Good ideas Not all landed but man he was outside the box here so I gotta give props JB went away from gunbars and it hurt him at times I want to see u do more than gunbars black But the ones u did this week I didn’t like V Blue
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I squeeze til the TEC empty, Blue. 30 in the clip when I let semis shoot/
It’s no escaping this situation! If I miss the first 8...you’ll still ‘Catch 22’/ This was flames to me tbh...no escaping this situation/catch 22....dope He ain’t the best he just rap the most. But I got a big blade that’ll drop vets/ This legend’ll die! Y’all gon find some big shit in Bayou like the Loch Ness/ Nah U do FNs every week for approval. You need the accomps to boost yo pride/ It’s like trigonometry, Blue...you put in all this work to get a fucking cosine/ This was clever But for the right price...u’ll be headed towards the bright light/ When I start taggin niggas with the FN...it ain’t a fight night/ Dope I’m all gunbars. But it’ll be personal when ya fiancé gets hit when the K sprays/ Or knife to her throat...Slash her neck and ‘rip chord’ when I give ya ‘beyblades’/ No Two already told you to Jet, Blue....cus I’ll let this K spray and wet lames/ Give ya whole squad wings...n have a choppa talk to u a like Jay Jay the Jet plane/ no idea what this is If you step you dyin. Infrared beam when the TEC gets lined/ You better leave or I’ll put the light on ya roof like a exit sign/ ok Cred already wounded you. I’ll finish the job when bullets rip this jerk apart/ Ya shirt gets marked...I’ll put the medal to a vet chest like a Purple Heart/ not bad vs i fucking HATE fan boys, so i'ma have the trey gun em down.. when it comes to me ‘Blacastan’.. & two rounds'll make sure he stays Underground Dope, clever faggot i'm a beast w/ the rod, send u straight to Jesus & God.. sneak up from behind & have the ‘Chopper at your Back’ like a Swedish Massage ok heavy artillery - i took a knee right before i cooked the beam.. the rifles got a Periscopes & once the triggers pulled ur the ‘One-Eye Look to See’ Clever wordplay but as a punch it's light can't out rap me brat, i'm too fast u'll never clap me back.. 2 shots – hit ur body w/ Decay & leave it on the ground to do EXACTLY that Ehhh not as good 9 in ur face pussy, u'll need more than heart to survive.. it's fitting you Love gunplay JB… cuz you're about to see a ‘Spark in your Eye’ Reach the biscuit pops! close range this yellow belly bitch gets dropped.. have more ‘Pieces of this Chicken over my Stick’ than Knucks Wife w/ a Shish Kabob I liked this says he'll fuck up my squad?! i'm tired of this guy's weak speil.. try Playin Maholmes & he'll Catch a ‘bullet to the chest’ like he's Tyreke Hill don't get it watch em bleed to death, pop-up aimin w/ the beams & flex.. ‘2 Arms got em doin Circles’.. & once the graves Dougie's not gon be seen as Fresh Cool This is very difficult to vote on...both had 3 misses to me...both had some cool bars....I think JB had maybe one more punch I thought was fire. Vote - JB
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