08-20-2018, 06:16 PM | #1 |
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Week 10: MMLP (2-5) vs. Big Bolo (1-2) - BOLO WINS
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08-22-2018, 04:42 PM | #2 |
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Drum go off see it spinning like a box fan, my skills breeze rite past you
Even if u brought Biggie back w/ Cease we wouldn't rondevu around ur bar at 2 |
08-24-2018, 04:40 PM | #3 |
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Dyno beat ya with a pasta sauce line.... LOL
Eminem ain't taking this with is shitty gun bars, thinkin' his arms are heavy You Lost Yourself in Bolognese n u ended up throwing up mums spaghetti! |
08-25-2018, 06:21 AM | #4 |
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Hmm not really a fan of either line here tbh.
Bolo - the biggie flip had a decent scheme going but didn’t really have any impact. MMLP - I see what you were going for but it was a really corny line, at least the way it was done here. You pretty much just flipped a concept that was used on him last week and simply tied in an 8 mile reference. Had potential but fell flat here. Tough pick really but I got Bolo I guess Vote Big Bolo |
08-25-2018, 06:45 AM | #5 |
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Bolo had an idea and I respect that. But the execution was way off kilter for me.
Mmlp used a recent bar an flipped it for a personal angle. The fact your name is practically marshal Mathers could of been worked in for a better tie in but regardless found yours hit with more execution. Vote mmlp |
08-25-2018, 11:29 AM | #6 |
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Not feeling either of these. I really don’t get what Big Bolo was going for...I’m assuming it’s a play on “bar”. If so, that’s obviously super played and the Biggie/Cease thing didn’t make it any stronger. I feel like MMLP could’ve had so many tie ins with the spaghettti/pasta concept but he didn’t really do anything with it. I do think his bar was more direct and overall just better.
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08-25-2018, 01:45 PM | #7 |
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neither were that heavy to me...didn't really get bolos, mmlp came off corny.
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08-25-2018, 01:54 PM | #8 |
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MMLP had a decent personal that didn’t have too much of an impact
Bolo had an alright concept and didn’t execute it that well Ima go with MMLP, his hit just a bit harder and had a more personal impact |
08-26-2018, 01:08 AM | #9 |
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Not to good here either. Bolos bar just doesnt roll off the tongue smoothly at all.
And MMLP practically quoted lines from Eightmile ??? I wasnt a fan of either here. I'll give it to Bolo for not being as strange |
08-26-2018, 06:09 AM | #10 |
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6-5 Big Bolo
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08-26-2018, 10:24 AM | #11 |
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both came decent here but bolos was pretty corny I’m not even gonna front. mmlp at least dissed his opponent
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08-26-2018, 10:49 AM | #12 |
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Vote bolo less garbage bar.
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08-26-2018, 11:53 AM | #13 |
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v. Bolo, Biggie scheme was alright. MMLP I saw what u were going for but it didnt work out bud
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08-26-2018, 12:41 PM | #14 |
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Bolo got this
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08-26-2018, 02:09 PM | #15 |
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Drum go off see it spinning like a box fan, my skills breeze rite past you
Even if u brought Biggie back w/ Cease we wouldn't rondevu around ur bar at 2 Had to read this a couple times to get it, it was still decent at best. Impact behind the punch itself is also light. Wording is ok ------- Eminem ain't taking this with is shitty gun bars, thinkin' his arms are heavy You Lost Yourself in Bolognese n u ended up throwing up mums spaghetti! I wasn't feeling this one, maybe its how its worded or it's just basically reading to me like an Eminem line. V-Bolo Props to both
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08-26-2018, 07:16 PM | #17 |
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I don't understand the bologna tie in
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08-27-2018, 07:09 AM | #18 |
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Big Bolo Wins 6-5
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