08-20-2018, 07:31 PM | #1 |
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Week 10: Flow (6-8) vs. Plot (5-5) - PLOT WINS
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08-23-2018, 10:49 AM | #2 |
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this my toolie I call it my Horror Movie, you'll get the picture
When this scary fucker double taps ya neck, ya'll end up looking like a vampire bit ya. Last edited by Plot; 08-24-2018 at 07:58 AM. |
08-24-2018, 03:58 PM | #3 |
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Hammered your competition like Thanos in Infinity War
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08-25-2018, 04:12 AM | #4 |
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Plot had a weaker punch here I think, thought/ hoped there would be a scary movie tie in somewhere.
(Another stick line lol) not big on the avengers but i see what ya did there, his punch was more of a hit than plots imo V flow |
08-25-2018, 08:36 AM | #5 |
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Plot - not your best showing. I like the idea you were aiming for but I think the problem was you overly worded it or tied it in all the wrong ways. With that being said, it was still a fairly decent bar.
Flow - *sigh*....I’m not mad at you for using a stick line, you know I love gunbars. The problem with your punch is that it doesn’t make sense at all lmao. Your line only worked one way, why? Because: 1. A stick (gun) 2. Hammer (gun) 3. How you gon shoot a gun with a gun? Yeah it’s physicslly possible but that’s your punch? You’re gonna shoot a gun with a gun. So is your next bar gonna be “Ima Stab his knife w/ a switchblade” nanananana NAH!!!! I’m fuckin mad now. You’re either trying to lose or you wanna make a mockery of gunbar art. Vote Plot |
08-25-2018, 01:52 PM | #6 |
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^^ lol... he say's he's hammering comp in the setup, then in the punch he's calling him a hammer. Or not, i unno.
That being said, calling him a hammer seems forced to make the concept work. Also, guns also being called hammers made the bar confusing. Wasn't my favorite plot bar, but thought he did enough for the win here. v/ plot |
08-25-2018, 07:13 PM | #7 |
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Plot think you’ve had a lot better bars here. Look like a vampire hit you isnt much of a flip - pretty statementish. Horror movie wasn’t too much of a tie in. I think I see what you were going for with double taps your neck but it wasn’t strong to me.
Flow no hate bro but the bar just doesn’t work. Ima give you the benefit of the doubt and assume hammer ain’t referring to what I initially thought. But yeah it doesn’t work because you can just make up your own lingo. I get the ‘hammered your competition’ but you can’t just use that to start calling him hammer. This coulda been a good concept but yeah I got it missing. I got plot edging this one. Mvgt Plot |
08-25-2018, 07:46 PM | #8 |
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I am getting very very tired of stick bars tbh.
Plot - this was very cliche...I saw it coming from a mile away, it wasn't a bad punch...you delivered it decently. But very predictable. Flow - I absolutely love this idea, but the bar itself made no sense...it was quite forced. It could have been so much more. Quite underwhelmed here...both have so much more in their arsenal. Voting Plot.
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08-25-2018, 11:14 PM | #9 |
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I can't believe I'm voting for a vampire bar. Sorry Flow but you actually could've made that dope if you weren't fucking around
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08-26-2018, 05:38 AM | #10 |
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8-1 Plot
Needs more votes. @Cashius @DynamiCz @Big Bolo @Viper @Killing Spree @bleak @Amen @John Dillinger @DMS @Chyeahhh!!! @Ryno @Blue Bayou @Useless Last edited by For Battling; 08-26-2018 at 06:23 PM. |
08-26-2018, 08:54 AM | #11 |
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Wasn’t a fan of flows bar this week. It just didn’t have that attack. Plots bar wasn’t much better tbh but it was enough to edge the win. But more creative and read better
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08-26-2018, 12:40 PM | #12 |
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I got plot
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08-26-2018, 01:57 PM | #13 |
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this my toolie I call it my Horror Movie, you'll get the picture
When this scary fucker double taps ya neck, ya'll end up looking like a vampire bit ya. This was decent here, the line itself you can pretty much guess how it reads out... Hammered your competition like Thanos in Infinity War Til I put the stick to this hammer like when Groot did it for Thor Yeah, Flow I think you just overdid it with the wording here, the concept would have been dope....You just did a lot here, but props on the effort V-Plot
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08-26-2018, 06:20 PM | #14 |
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flow tried to do too much n it but him in the ass. plots bar wasnt the best either but was decent enough to win
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08-26-2018, 06:24 PM | #15 |
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Plot Wins 8-1
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