01-11-2014, 04:27 PM | #1 |
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Ryan 12 vs H4ZE - RYAN WINS
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01-11-2014, 05:04 PM | #2 |
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Alright.
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01-15-2014, 04:58 PM | #3 |
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Alright sorry for being late I havent even written anything for this but ill try to key up somthing
Haha,this kid is wack,yet ive heard the ryan kills But is rhymes are all garbage,where the fuck are ryans skills? Theres no chance he'll win this, he should leave this fucking site Cuz hes shit,ryan is doing nothing tight Just quit rap! Stupid bitch ass retarted kid Your raps have been garbage since the day that you started them Your rhymin is straight wack,and your sayin youve come to destroy me? But im not wack,unlike all of your opponents before me This whole site bores me! But ryans the worst He couldnt think up a diss to win this if he had all the time on the earth @Ryan 12 |
01-15-2014, 05:06 PM | #4 |
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gonna need an ext plz
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01-15-2014, 05:17 PM | #5 |
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This guy is legit homo, a faggot who's gay as fuck
I ain't talking about desert toppings when I say 'on men' is the only time Hazelnut He knows its the end, so watch closely to this kid pray You'll see him place his hands together when it comes to 12 like a clock @ midday Give me 1n1 and I'll make 2 lemons, cuz I actually listened to teachers Give H 1n1 and the only thing he'll add is that to his growing list of diseases Your whore gobbled my dick & stomached it whole, she's an Xbox... Vibrate enhances the play but I remain the 1 in control I'm dope as fuck, known to roam with the shotty Ironic how I didnt break a sweat but everything bone in your body |
01-15-2014, 05:19 PM | #6 |
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01-17-2014, 09:30 AM | #7 |
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Meh. Not a great battle. H4ze just kinda kept saying Ryan was wack in different ways lol. No real thought behind any of it.
Ryan had much more thought behind his lines. That Xbox line was pretty cool, the Hazelnut was worded weird, and "on men" is a stretch for almond, but he attempted punches. Vote- Ryan |
01-17-2014, 10:31 AM | #8 | |
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but "on men" wasnt a wp for almond lol the only wp there was hazelnut/haze'll nut |
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01-17-2014, 07:22 PM | #10 |
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H4ZE, I'm guessing you are new to text battles. The problem with your verse is that it looks like you're rhyming for the sake of it. It doesn't look like there is any intent in the words, so calling somebody wack is the most basic of insults in a battle, so if you want to go down that route you have to be a lot more creative. On this occasion you didn't have anything that was really personal, or hard hitting, or creative conceptually to be a strong battle verse. Keep at it though man!
Ryan had the overall better verse -- the punchlines connected, strong enough verse to beat what was put in front of him. Vote - Ryan12. |
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ryan's done better than this but haze was not good. at all. v/ryan
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01-18-2014, 07:41 PM | #12 |
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Haha. Aight. Whatever. I know this battle was shitty for me. Ive done way better on LA.
This was just a keystyle and im nee to battling. But good shit ryan. And thanks for voting guys. |
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01-19-2014, 02:31 AM | #14 |
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He knows its the end, so watch closely to this kid pray
You'll see him place his hands together when it comes to 12 like a clock @ midday vote - haze just saying. lol jk haze had no punches.... ryan obviously had better verse with punches wordplay nameplay etc. |
01-28-2014, 02:59 AM | #16 |
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Ya...H4ZE has done way better on LA
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01-28-2014, 06:58 AM | #17 |
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