Boredom vs Aero {Boredom wins}

[Orc]

NBL
Netcees Text Battle League

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  May 17th 2013 11:59 PM PST.
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@Boredom @Aero

[StarFaggot]

10.

[Boredom]

check.

[StarFaggot]

Yo Boredom you'll want to quit the NBL after this battle.

[Boredom]

verse sent to orc

[StarFaggot]

Verse sent to Knuck and Orc

[Orc]

Boredoms verse

Originally Posted by Aero

I'm the greatest to ever do it. You're stepping into the ring with Ali, Jordan with 6 seconds left, Simba on the 2nd Lion King.

Tread lightly.

This is your warning.

looooooool..gtfoh u overrated non battling faggot..

u’ve fabricated ur whole career, at least w/ that quote u didn’t lie to MY face..
u have dimensia with a touch of Parkinsons, ur retired and haven’t been relevant since 98
how do u say ur GOAT, u’ve ALWAYS been mediocore. Lets check the net’s truth’s..
u claim to be ‘the greatest to ever do it’..irl ur a creepy uncle losing rap battles to his nephew
Ur a one trick pony, a fake n a fraud clinging to fame. faggot ur not a divine force
If aerodynamic it’ll only help him hit the ground faster when I spear em off his high horse
ur the most wretched victim txt has witnessed. u KNOW u can’t toss those hands
w/ all that hype n no showing EVERY battle..we can see the bitch in u w/ out a fuckin sonogram
Aer a biter n clone w/ typing that’s prone to mimic others, that’s the fact of it son
U jacked n butchered the style of butler…so it’s obvious why u still have the status of one

[Orc]

Aero's verse


The G.O.A.T

I made his girl forget about him with 8+ its an honest fact
ironic when she got Bored out of her mind she was no longer that
faggot please, you don't get pussy you grab your meat
last time you got the cookies Chris Hansen came & said have a seat
your chick's a massive freak, we chat when we're half asleep
our pillow talk's past & dreams - yours is thread and matching sheets
saw Cash defeat him, I sat there wanting to help this man manage
I was thinking give up cold turkey, then got up & made a ham sandwich
leave ya fam famished, snap your mom's femurs simply
I'll give it a fast break that'll have Lebron and Wade green with envy

[Greed]

Interesting. Bored had a solid verse with okay punches and aero had humor.

V/ aero

Enjoyed more.

[fathead]

Boredom: You Had Good Punches And An Overall Solid Verse I Especialy Liked The Line About Knocking Him Off His High Horse

Aero: I Think You Had Humour But Also Your Verse Flows A Little Better. The First Four Lines Wer Solid Punches That Were Hilarious

v/aero

[~RustyGunZ~]

how do u say ur GOAT, u’ve ALWAYS been mediocore. Lets check the net’s truth’s..
u claim to be ‘the greatest to ever do it’..irl ur a creepy uncle losing rap battles to his nephew
Ur a one trick pony, a fake n a fraud clinging to fame. faggot ur not a divine force
If aerodynamic it’ll only help him hit the ground faster when I spear em off his high horse
Aer a biter n clone w/ typing that’s prone to mimic others, that’s the fact of it son
U jacked n butchered the style of butler…so it’s obvious why u still have the status of one

didn't like the opener. nephew was a good personal could have done more with it though. aerodynamic was cool. sonogram line i've seen before. butler line was okay.

vs

your chick's a massive freak, we chat when we're half asleep
our pillow talk's past & dreams - yours is thread and matching sheets
leave ya fam famished, snap your mom's femurs simply
I'll give it a fast break that'll have Lebron and Wade green with envy

bor lines are old to me from neigh and boredom on here. mediocre flip on it.chris hansen line was boring. pillow talk was cool. cold turkey connected poorly. closer eh, alright. you kind of ruined this with poor delivery, all the punches were predictable and had lazy connections

v/boredom

[Undead.]

looooooool..gtfoh u overrated non battling faggot..

u’ve fabricated ur whole career, at least w/ that quote u didn’t lie to MY face..
u have dimensia with a touch of Parkinsons, ur retired and haven’t been relevant since 98

not bad but not great. i wish you would've gotten a bit more creative with it. Like worked the parkinsons angle more in your setup tbh

how do u say ur GOAT, u’ve ALWAYS been mediocore. Lets check the net’s truth’s..
u claim to be ‘the greatest to ever do it’..irl ur a creepy uncle losing rap battles to his nephew

see you have the idea, with the personal. But you should've had the set up alluding to an I won't show no mercy and u'll still say uncle..than the nephew punch feel me?

Ur a one trick pony, a fake n a fraud clinging to fame. faggot ur not a divine force
If aerodynamic it’ll only help him hit the ground faster when I spear em off his high horse

LOL

ur the most wretched victim txt has witnessed. u KNOW u can’t toss those hands
w/ all that hype n no showing EVERY battle..we can see the bitch in u w/ out a fuckin sonogram

ha ok i like this. could've set it up better,

Aer a biter n clone w/ typing that’s prone to mimic others, that’s the fact of it son
U jacked n butchered the style of butler…so it’s obvious why u still have the status of one[/QUOTE]

not bad decent close, okay

AERO

I made his girl forget about him with 8+ its an honest fact
ironic when she got Bored out of her mind she was no longer that

yea this was cool, nice NF.

faggot please, you don't get pussy you grab your meat
last time you got the cookies Chris Hansen came & said have a seat

nah not a fan, kinda took the same approach with the woman/pussy thing

your chick's a massive freak, we chat when we're half asleep
our pillow talk's past & dreams - yours is thread and matching sheets

cool but gettin old man. switch up ur angle.

saw Cash defeat him, I sat there wanting to help this man manage
I was thinking give up cold turkey, then got up & made a ham sandwich

personal. liked this lotb

leave ya fam famished, snap your mom's femurs simply
I'll give it a fast break that'll have Lebron and Wade green with envy

cool

I think aero had lotb, although he stuck to the same damn angle about your girl this & that. got old i liked how boredom was a bit more fresher. I did like aero's setup to punch better. I feel he slightly took it. Boredom u just need to set up better. Ur concepts were way better, just lacked the execution man.

v/ aero

[Subtitles]

Originally Posted by Orc

Boredoms verse

Ur a one trick pony, a fake n a fraud clinging to fame. faggot ur not a divine force
If aerodynamic it’ll only help him hit the ground faster when I spear em off his high horse
Aer a biter n clone w/ typing that’s prone to mimic others, that’s the fact of it son
U jacked n butchered the style of butler…so it’s obvious why u still have the status of one

Pretty consistent, I've seen a million butler lines but that was a decent flip. The aerodynamic line was simple but direct, which worked in your favor.

Originally Posted by Orc

Aero's verse


The G.O.A.T

I made his girl forget about him with 8+ its an honest fact
ironic when she got Bored out of her mind she was no longer that

Could have quoted the green wit envy line but it felt played and didn't connect the Lebron and D Wade reference well enough. Bored out of her mind was close but it could have been cut down to size a little.

All in all I felt Bore had a pretty solid verse, and Aero just missed on a couple opportunities.

v/Boredom

[Geno]

Hmmm

This a was a good battle

Bored had his last three bars.. they hit pretty solid imo

Aero came consistent. But didn't bring any true haymakers to out do the bars boredom closed with

I got bored here
Good shit @ both

[Sharp]

Aerodynamic, (sonogram) butler

V

Bored out her mind


Bor was a lil more consistent while aeros only hitting line was thar out of mind one. Bore got it with a better verse

V/boredom

[Flow]

Originally Posted by Orc

Boredoms verse






looooooool..gtfoh u overrated non battling faggot..

u’ve fabricated ur whole career, at least w/ that quote u didn’t lie to MY face..
u have dimensia with a touch of Parkinsons, ur retired and haven’t been relevant since 98
lol not very well done but made me chuckle
how do u say ur GOAT, u’ve ALWAYS been mediocore. Lets check the net’s truth’s..
u claim to be ‘the greatest to ever do it’..irl ur a creepy uncle losing rap battles to his nephew
?? am I missing something - miss for me
Ur a one trick pony, a fake n a fraud clinging to fame. faggot ur not a divine force
If aerodynamic it’ll only help him hit the ground faster when I spear em off his high horse
nice
ur the most wretched victim txt has witnessed. u KNOW u can’t toss those hands
w/ all that hype n no showing EVERY battle..we can see the bitch in u w/ out a fuckin sonogram
lol
Aer a biter n clone w/ typing that’s prone to mimic others, that’s the fact of it son
U jacked n butchered the style of butler…so it’s obvious why u still have the status of one
lol

Originally Posted by Orc

Aero's verse


The G.O.A.T

I made his girl forget about him with 8+ its an honest fact
ironic when she got Bored out of her mind she was no longer that
lol
faggot please, you don't get pussy you grab your meat
last time you got the cookies Chris Hansen came & said have a seat
meh not the greatest
your chick's a massive freak, we chat when we're half asleep
our pillow talk's past & dreams - yours is thread and matching sheets
lol
saw Cash defeat him, I sat there wanting to help this man manage
I was thinking give up cold turkey, then got up & made a ham sandwich
not for me could of done more here
leave ya fam famished, snap your mom's femurs simply
I'll give it a fast break that'll have Lebron and Wade green with envythat's like the second green envy line ive seen today - its ok but meh still don't think it was executed very well

I got Bor on a more solid verse... good number of lols on both - but just feel aero missed on a few where bor was pretty consistent - even his opener was pretty basic but got me chuckling

Vote Bor