ill nik-A vs Flo Real {ill nik-A wins}

[Orc]

up to 16 lines

due Tuesday

@ill nik-A
@Flo Real

[ill nik-A]

Welcome!

[Flow]

I never back track or sit back, always on full attack like a pit bull terrier, carryin more heat then an aircraft carrier
I wade into danger carrying rail guns that would rival jump jet harriers, that could annihilate star treks galactic barrier
Your views couldn't be narrower, I'm open to euthanasia and giving nukes to the Korean Asians that couldn't be crazier
The type to take a razor to a fight wit a gladiator packin a laser, with more moves then Anakin before he was Vader
Fuck a hater, *Im as hot as a jalapeno dressed up in a tuxedo, hotter then the opening scene of Scorsese's casino
As deadly as a malaria ridden mosquito riding a trio of torpedo's, a more bloody machine then the dreams of Tarantino
listen amigos, im so quick I can catch cat tiks wit chop sticks while simultaneously writing sonnets about diagnostics*
I get clarity doing a lot for charity, go to Alcoholics anonymous raise a G & T and offer out a free bucket full of narcotics
Could sell ice to eskimos, sand to aborigines, man im more overhand then Hitler when he addressed his people
Shiiiittt.......I could sell life to an embryo, heap fulls of lamps to the genies and wit ease fucking war to the peaceful!!!*
My flow is so ace I can take bear mace to the face, and still perfectly play snake with one hand while the other plays bass
My swag is so great, so make no mistake, listen mate, even the dali lama met me.. and felt jealous with hate
Im more scheming then a team of evil demons, bringing so much heat im leaving legions of seething heathens screaming
Ill be done with this supposed chieftain when I besiege him, my lines are beyond rhyme and reason yet you cant help believing

[ill nik-A]

Punches bury lames quick but I got a semi gauge gripped which I got a deadly aim with
& though many trained sick, I've developed a 6th sense & even Mr. Miyagi's ghost's getting crane kicked
betting brains split, the shook'll struggle every right hook is doubled with the force of Thor's fist
mean mug crooks in ghettos cuz I don't only look for trouble... I put a reward out for it
& of course I'm morbid, got horror stories some don't know, may even punch hoes yo
stun grown folks cuz Stephen King's finishers are nothing compared to my version of Jon Jones bows
u may run home go... but my scope gives no hope & from here I'll have u levitate gladly
u queers will disappear with smoke out ya throats while I'm yelling fuck crackers at a KKK rally
way to play caddy... carrying my iron inside ur skull as I divide ur jaw with the heater in hand
I string schemes featured as gems... if it’s a God given talent… I’m the King, chief, leader of men
I bring grief deeper than the reaper when grim, a believer of sins ready to commit many
money’s made to be flipped plenty, I’ll Kill Inspector Gadget’s niece just to make a quick Penny
ur lame shit is petty… I’m the golden infidel with stolen shit to sell holdin fists to swell
got a loaded fifth as well, but my leg drops are deadlier with more power than Hogan & Miguel

[Greed]

Heh. Flo real was kind of sporatic but as a whole the verse was solid. I found myself drifting off reading niks lines.

V flo

The swag is not strong with you nik. Crane kick sounded like you were going somewhere but the closer was weak and all other lines were okay at best.

[Seyance]

fo real, faar too stretched every line was like 2 lines long.. stop that longbar shit. very weak rhymes throughout, i think i caught the odd multi but i think it was more accident than anything.. you actually had a few decent concepts, but tried to rhyme faar too much and really forced it in there.

ill nika, stretched bars again.. but he had a clear grasp of how to write a cohesive verse. got a bit repetitive and formulaic with the way you were incorporating the rhyme into the punch at the start, more an extension of the setup that irrelevance to the actual punch, kinda how longbar guys write their verses. just need to switch it up so it seems more natural or it doesn't let the swag come through in the bar.

/nik

[ill nik-A]

Votes?

[Objective]

Flo Real: You got decent swag in this shit but the longbars indicated that the flow could have been galaxies better. Didn't really like that to be honest, but the content in your shit was dope for the most part.

Ill Nika: I've seen better from you and some of the lines were softer than they could have been imo. ''may even punch hoes yo'' <-- Thought you were the king brah, why you flinchin'? But anything after that line was dope as fuck and flowed well enough in my opinion.

Vote: Close as fuck imo. Flo Reals verse overall was decent but was lacking a lot in the flow department (the longbars ruined it for me) which in this tournament is 50% of the verse. Ill Nika's verse was kinda longbar as well, but after the ''may even punch hoes yo''-line the rhymescheme caught up with me and I was feelin' it more. The swag more on point as well with fresh lines like ''the leader of men''-shit. Flo's lines seemed more complex to me in terms of concepts but I feel like there needs to be a better balance between straight up ''I'm the best''-shit and complexity whereas Ill Nika was more to the point and kept a solid performance throughout in that department.

After a second readthrough I felt Ill Nikas verse was the better of the two. To clarify; My vote goes to Ill Nika

[ill nik-A]

Any more votes?

I was honestly expecting more...

Flow - decent verse;flow was a little to long winded for me...and sometimes it felt like u were just rhyming to rhyme...swag was here n there...overall a decent verse, but i felt the content coulda been better...

Nik - You had the cleaner flow, and better content w/ more swag in my eyes...second half of the verse picked up compared to the first half, which also felt like u were sacrificing one for the other...but im not a fan of end rhymes like 'with or yo' just a personal preference though.

Overall - swag wise nik edged it in my eyes, flow wise nik got it clean...on that note...

mvgt - Nik-a