01-15-2016, 08:44 AM | #41 |
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Definitely, good thing I've already planned to get white girl wasted tomorrow, haha.
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01-16-2016, 09:41 PM | #42 |
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THIS LEAGUE NEEDS A SHOT OF STEROIDS OR SOMETHING.
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01-16-2016, 11:55 PM | #43 |
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Bring forth Edgar Allen Poe's ashes to add in the whiskey in true Hunter S. Thompson style and maybe in the J too while we're at it and we're talking.
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01-17-2016, 03:12 AM | #44 |
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my bad - ill take dq. will be voting tomorrow.
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01-17-2016, 11:25 AM | #45 |
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Sorry about the ns @Frank.
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01-17-2016, 11:52 AM | #46 |
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So can we get some votes err is this league still alive?
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01-17-2016, 02:29 PM | #47 |
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They usually come on Sunday nights I believe. Give it a few more hours, hopefully people will vote. I'll drop a couple later as well.
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01-17-2016, 02:31 PM | #48 |
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I'm guessing every battle this week wants votes? Or are u dqing anybody??
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01-17-2016, 02:58 PM | #49 | |
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Edit: @2tripple0: I voted on all battles now actually. Don't take what I say too negative though but I hope you're able to get some insight from what I wrote or that it's helpful to your progress in the writing universe. It's dope to see you progress and improve with each poem/piece you put up on this site. Laters.
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01-17-2016, 05:43 PM | #50 |
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01-17-2016, 10:03 PM | #51 |
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I'll try and vote today or tomorrow. Been busy, sorry
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01-20-2016, 05:44 PM | #54 |
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Dopeness. Think I'll start writing on something for the mag soon as well. Don't know how much free time I'll get until next week though but if an opportunity comes along where I can spend some time writing a bit I'll send over what I got when it's done.
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01-20-2016, 06:02 PM | #55 |
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Fuck yeah!
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01-21-2016, 12:40 PM | #56 |
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Haven't been online just seen this going to drop tonight
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01-21-2016, 03:18 PM | #57 |
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01-22-2016, 12:00 AM | #59 |
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Left a vote on it @Frank. Might be a bit critical though. Tbh this might have been the weakest of your pieces I've read so far. Feel free to correct me and/or any things I might have gotten wrong or not thought about while reading in a PM to me to clear things up as the vote might not have paid it justice.
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01-22-2016, 03:56 AM | #60 |
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Had a blast writing that piece. Loved your analogy.
What's my strongest piece?
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