11-03-2016, 04:53 PM | #1 |
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[Contenders Match:] Slechtc 6-1 [vs] R!canTheoryz 4-3 [Slechtc Wins]
NETCEES 1-2 PUNCHLINE LEAGUE SEASON 4 Due Thursday 12 pacific Rules: no feeding, swaying, bitting, Recycling. & dont post in other ppls battles unless its to vote or u'll be booted. NO EXT, AT ALL. @slechtc @R!canTheoryz Last edited by R!canTheoryz; 11-23-2016 at 07:54 PM. |
11-03-2016, 08:48 PM | #2 |
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11-04-2016, 12:33 AM | #3 |
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It'll be more than Rican's pitfall if he keeps insisting to brawl, Fist to the jaw n' he's Russian quicker than Putin granting citizenship to Steven Seagal
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11-04-2016, 06:15 AM | #4 |
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11-10-2016, 06:16 AM | #5 |
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11-10-2016, 07:44 AM | #6 |
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Sletch....pretty strateched last Line....set up was nice.... Russian/Rushin' was ehh' shoulda read "If" he's Russian maybe..didn't hit right tho
Rican- idea was cool...don't think it was worded right tho'///set up was also ehhhh... lil' more creative attempt on the wordplay tho' and rhyme wasn't as stretched both didn't bring much this week...but Vote- Rican Trump |
11-12-2016, 01:41 PM | #7 |
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V. Slech.
Two decent concepts. Both stretched, Rican had wording issues as well. Slex gets my vote cause his bar read a bit smoother
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11-12-2016, 02:14 PM | #8 |
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i dunno man, both were weak but Russian flips are played to death and slech's wasn't worded well anyways, Rican's line was just decent and he takes the W here for me
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11-13-2016, 03:48 AM | #9 |
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both concepts were interesting for what they were...
whenever I see a Russian line thrown out there it reminds me of Nelly... R!can came with a decent concept but I felt like it was rushed. the set up felt odd but I feel he brought an almost original idea... v/rican
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11-14-2016, 12:46 AM | #10 |
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SOVEREIGN'S VOTE ON BATTLE: Slechtn vs. R!canTheoryz
Slechtn: I liked the relevance of this. The final concept was original, but the Russian/rushin' wordplay wasn't. Your multis were somewhat problematic; you set up a 4-syllable scheme with "in-sisting to brawl" and "Fist to the jaw," but then broke it with the first two syllables of Steven Seagal, unless you have some accent that I'm not familiar with; do you pronounce the long "ee" sound as the short "i?" I thought that the second line was long-winded, though I'm not really sure how you could have shortened it. Overall: good punch, mediocre execution. Final Score: 12/20 R!canTheoryz: Well... the punch was alright, nothing great. Even though you had several multi sets, the fact that the first three were close to each other, followed by a large gap between the third and fourth one, made the flow rather awkward. It wouldn't have flown in a live battle, that's for sure. I really wasn't impressed with this. Final Score: 10/20 Final Thoughts: While neither punch was mind-blowing, one was more creative, and that earned its writer the win. Slechtn gets my vote over R!canTheoryz (12 - 10)
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11-14-2016, 01:22 AM | #11 |
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both had decent current events
voting for the better set up with that said, slecht here rican was ok but execution was sloppy imo mvgt slek
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11-15-2016, 11:05 AM | #12 |
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11-16-2016, 09:19 PM | #13 |
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11-17-2016, 04:41 PM | #14 |
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Ricans setup n finisher were irrelevant went into a gun bar then finisher about slechtn mom didnt correlate well at all. @Slechtn russian wordplay old af and really dont get ur concept i dont comprehend the Steven Seagal and Putin line is it true? It was executed better but i do need u to pm me for explanation of the reference.
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11-18-2016, 04:52 PM | #15 |
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Russian concept was boring but decent enough flip. I felt like Rican had the better concept, but could've done a lot more with it. Missed opportunity here kid
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