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Old 09-02-2013, 09:05 AM   #1
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Default Week 7 - Innovator vs. Plot - INNOVATOR WINS BY NO SHOW

Memo week 7.
Greetings competitors, we reach the penultimate week of competition. CONTINUOUS TASK WEEK, this week’s tasks will be familiar for many individuals; it’s essentially a phrase topic. Tasks were designed in a continuous format but competitors are not required to collaborate either in intra/inter contests. The task phrases themselves are clear and continuous but also ambiguous, you can respond holistically or directly to specific parts. Find below your match-ups and specific tasks.


Task - What do you offer? Why do you hate us?


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Playing poker with the Devil


they say god will save you...from the hell he put you in.
vagrants with hands out stretched?...those posing
n looking to grasp...I ask how much? you say its not for sale
as I reveal my gaffs...you scream loud "stop the vale"
so you steal, cheat, borrow sins to get the upper hand
while I play to the rule so as to not bite THAT hand
and the world crumbles around me as the pews get soaked
in rain water from the hells of Lucifer he himself choked
from the eyes of the angels; he claimed he was provoked

he says he offers freedom from the tyranny of those holy
he says I won’t regret it and I should be honored he thinks I’m worthy
offering endless amounts, giving all of himself for all my whims
with a sarcastic grin…here take it he says...down here it’s not a sin
to give in to temptations within you is the meaning of being HIM
why should he be the only one to touch the sun and kiss the sky?
he gave me eternity and I turned it down for freedom of, I.
shun for my views...I see only what he’s created as a reminder
that obedience is much kinder.


he tries his best to push his point of view across
whether its subtle or blatant like a TV show on fox.
a constant offer for so called freedom of ones self
a chance to live like him...lost in an egos desire for wealth
wealth of knowledge, riches with a decadent health
the opportunity to delve head first into ones own body
and pull out the deepest desire to light, its in fact godly
to be equal on mount Olympus with Zeus' lightning bolts
to run with the clouds in a defiant pose hiding faults
you will not be judged he said you will not be judged
take my hand, together we will skate along the razor edge

he offers the ultimate sin to the masses…freedom
hes in plain sight you don’t need glasses….tsee’em
offering a choice….few refuse
disguising his voice…few refuse
most don’t view his spiteful eye when he tucks them in at night
few refuse despite the fact… the devil offers for the right price
what path he should begin your demise

I fold...

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